FF~ Inner Desires Thread3 NOTE Page 116

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3rd thread! YAYY..Embarrassed
Sorry 4 being so late! The past week has been quite hectic for me... M updating today just coz of the dozens of pms i recieved from u lovely readers.. m so sry... I just cudn't make out any time... pls don't expect quick update from me till 12th May😭... after that my holidays will start and M ALL YOURS!!! *No double maenings intended*😆And thank u for giving such an amazing response for my OS ~ Kiss Me.. thanks alot... I hav decided to write another part for that as well.. that is..when I get time...😛
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Part 16
Arnav paced up and down the room frantically. He placed his palm on Khushi's forehead. It was boiling hot. He didn't know what to do! He called for Anjali who came running inside."What happened chote?"
Arnav was sitting beside Khushi, grasping her hand firmly. Anjali understood his silence. She touched Khushi's forehead and gasped ,"Oh god! She is having high fever! Wait! I'll just call the doctor", she sad and went out. Arnav turned to Khushi. Seeing her lifeless figure, he regretted all that he did to her last night. But then, she deserved that, he thought. However hard he tried, he couldn't take his eyes off her. There was concern and worry in them. He placed a wet cotton band on her forehead. She winced, trying to open her eyes gently. But everything was blurred. She could see a man entering the room along with Anjali. A firm hand helped her sit up on the bed leaning on a pillow. She turned to the owner of the hand. As her vision cleared, she heard his voice
"Are you okay Khushi? The doctor is here", Arnav said. Khushi looked away. The doctor took his stethoscope and told her to breathe. He made her have a tablet. He prescribed some medicines and told her to lie down. Arnav helped her to lie down but she shook his hand away much to his disappointment. Anjali raised her eye brows. She sensed something wrong. She pulled the blanket above Khushi. Her head was heavy and she drifted off to sleep immediately
The doctor turned to Arnav,"Give her these medicines three times a day. Make sure she eats properly and takes ample of rest otherwise this might turn serious. Don't let her strain herself.", he said in a serious tone. Both Arnav and Anjali were worried. Anjali went with the doctor to see him off. Arnav turned to Khushi's sleeping figure. He caressed her cheek gently..
"I am so sorry Khushi... so sorry", he whispered.
The family stared at Arnav who quickly poured the self-made soup in a bowl and ran upstairs. Anjali called out to him,Arnav! Have your breakfast first!"
"Umm... I'll have it in my room", he said in a hurry and ran.
Anjali shook her head with a smile. She understood what he was thinking.
Arnav entered his room and sat beside Khushi's sleeping figure.
"Khushi... khushi?", he tried to wake her up. She gently opened her eyes. He helped her sit up on the bed.
"Feeling better?", he asked calmly.
Khushi looked at him angrily but was baffled to see the worry in his eyes. She turned away and nodded in response.
"Here have it! You need to take medicines too", he said.
Khushi looked at him again. He dipped the spoon in the soup and placed it near her mouth.
"Have it", he said.
Khushi reluctantly opened her mouth . She stared at him while he continued to feed her. She wondered why was he showing so much concern for her. She felt a faint pleasure inside but tried to control it. She didn't want to believe it. She will not let him break her once again. Everytime she felt a little happy, he broke her heart to pieces. She had had enough. She snatched the bowl from him and started to drink the soup on her own. Arnav looked at her in bewilderment.
"I am okay. I can do it by myself", she said looking down.
Arnav tried to take the bowl back from her but she didn't give in.
"Khushi, you are weak. Let me do it. ",he said worriedly.
"Oh really, why are you so concerned?", she asked him sarcastically.
"I just AM! Give it back to me", he said snatching the bowl from her, but this time he succeeded.
Khushi sat straight and looked at him angrily.</font>

"I dont need your concern Mr Arnav Singh Raizada", she shouted.
Arnav ignored her and continued to feed her. She pushed the bowl away breaking it into pieces. The soup was all over the floor and some of it was on Arnav's shirt.
"What the..! Khushi! What the hell!!!!", he shouted.
"Shut up!", she retorted.
Arnav stood up angrily.
"How dare you Khushi Singh Raizada!!", he shouted at the top of his voice.
"Its Khushi Kumari Gupta! Got it?", she retorted getting up from the bed. But she was so weak that she fell back on the bed.
Arnav immediately forwarded his help. She pushed him away and got up.
He looked straight into his eyes and said, "Didn't you hear me? I said I don't need your concern".
Arnav flinched his nose.I know whose concern you want", he said gritting his teeth.</font>
Khushi raised her eye brows, confused.
What?", she asked.
Arnav took a step forward towards her. She pushed him away.
"Don't you come near me! Don't you dare!",she shouted,pointing her fingers at him.
"Khushi! behave! I am your husband!", he shouted trying to maintain his cool.
"Oh really! I never felt like you were my husband", she said sarcastically.
Arnav felt a pinch of pain in his heart.
"Stop it!", he said, closing his eyes.
"Why! Why should I stop! You have never treated me as your wife! Am I a tissue paper! Its so simple for you right! Use and throw off!", she shouted pushing him again.
"Khushi! Just STOP IT!!! Someone will hear!", he retorted.
"So let them! This marriage is like a prison to me! I can't stand it anymore. I can't stand YOU anymore!", she shouted.
"I also cannot stand you! The thought of seeing you everyday in front of me disgusts me! I don't know how I spend these 3 months with you!", he shouted back.
Tears were welling up in Khushi's eyes hearing his words. She shook them away. This was enough. She had to get some answers. She HAD TO!
"If I disgust you, then why did you marry me!", she shouted back clutching collars.
"Coz I had no other option DAMMIT!", he shouted pushing her hands away.
"What options!! You can't get away everytime with that reply! You got it Mr ARnav Singh Raizada! You are the worst person I have come across in my life! I HATE YOU!", she shouted at him, tears flowing down her cheek.
"I know.. And you love that...", he shut his mouth immediately shutting his eyes to digest the anger.
"What? Love what? TELL ME DAMMIT! I have to know!", she screeched at the top of her voice.
She placed a step ahead towards Arnav.
"Why did you marry me DAMMIT! Why did you make my life hell! Why did you do all this to me! What have I done! WHY !!!", she shouted pulling him by his collar.
"BECAUSE I KNOW ABOUT YOU AND SHYAM DAMMIT!", he shouted back at her.
Hearing that, she left her hands from his collar. He could just stare at her as she collapsed on the floor.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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EPIC ending! i like that khushi collapsed, because it shows her vulnerability and perhaps arnav will suspect that something he believes is not right! love reading it!👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This was gr8...Luved the intensity & the build up to the verbal ourburst by Arnav...
Eagerly awaiting the next part dear 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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love d concern of arnav.. n poor khushii..
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thxx fr ur update...this part was nyc...

finally truth came..but mu not cleared...

waiting fr next update ...wht wil khushi do nw??


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats for thread 3
Loved it !
Great update
Update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderful update

awesome


Loved it

Thank you for the PM
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Originally posted by: happybrar

Congrats for thread 3
Loved it !
Great update
Update soon


Thank you 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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fabulous update
loved this side of arnav
pls continue soon
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very intense. perfect ending. her collapsing. hope nobody understand what they were talking abt. everybody would have heard their yelling match. and i dont want the creep when till they sort out this problem. just hope every thing ends well

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