SwArOn OS (updated last part pg 5)

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

i loved the os, its just to good and thanks for the pms

Nikki <3

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Divya

@dvmishra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Awesome os. It was a treat to read. Plz continue writing n dnt forget to pm me.

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Shivs

@The007Shivani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

amazing loved it and yeah first kiss as well as confession wow one day less to celebrate lol

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Awesome .After all courage of heart took over the power of mind. Beautifully writen OS. This makes me wish kaas aisa hua hota. Waise well done and do pm me when u write another one.

Edited by marauder - 13 years ago

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spicyrays

@spicyrays

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Ahw... Ahw... So sweet... I jst luv it i realy wnt u to continue... Ab rey n kriya k liye b kch kar do nd swarn ye baat grp ko kaise btayenge sb kch sb kch i wana knw so plz plz cntinue...

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Radioactive.

@Radioactive.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Awesome. I loved how you ended. The dialogues were very well written. I loved the way you ended it. :)

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Awsum climax ... th confrontation scene was a treat to read & had a cooling effect on th senses ... wish hum sach mein yeh dekh paate...thanx for th PM & write more of these 😃