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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
this was amazing namrata !!😛
wow sharon hugged swayam thinking that it was her hallucination 😃
eagerly waiting for the next part , update soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Shockingly amazin...i mean amazin update... Wid such suspnse... Plz update soon... Nd thnx for d pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
Wow this is amazing thanks for the pm and loved this and hope this happens but I guess it wont
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
Its awesome...luved it...awww she hugged him n thnxx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
swayam at sharon place eeep n sharon hug swayam n share her feeling with him.waiting for next part.update it fast
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ooohh gawd please update soon cant wait to read more...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
wow that was beautiful...loved it...thanks for the PM...and update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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here's d nxt part updating really vry soon so hopes i get loads of likes n comments dis is d last part ok njoy...

Part 3

Sharon:- if ur my hallucination hw m I able to feel u…to touch u…to hug u…???

Swayam:- coz nw m nt ur hallucination….(teasingly) N ya thnkz fr d hug by the way….

She leaves swayam n stands bak..

Sharon:- no dis cnt b real…frm so much tym I juzz m hallucinating u n nw ur saying k ur nt an hallucination….??

S:- bcoz nw m here in reality..arent u happy to feel me Sharon..???

Sharon(realizing d situation bak in diva mode):- u….u…losser…hw cn u cum into my house like dis dnt u hav ny manners.. get out of my house right nw.. are u out of ur senses…. Is dis d tym 2 go 2 sum1's house n dat 2 cnt u cum by d door.. ucame thru d window hw…. Agar gir jaate to ..agar tumhe kuch ho jaata to..ur such an idiot… (suddenly her najar goes to his bandaided hand..taking his hand in hers).. aur ye kya he?? Kaise hua… tumhe kuch akkal vakkal he..khudka khayal nahi rakh sakte kya….kya vo bhi mujhe hi sikhana padega…kaise ho yaar tum swayam….

She's going on n on…..

S:- Sharon…!!!... m f9…. N vaise bhi y r u caring fr me….

Sharon(realizing bits her tongue):- vo…vo…dat..m..m nt caring fr u vo to bas hath me band aid dekha to bas puch liya….jas fr name sake…

Smiling n nw cumn closer 2 her..

S:- really… kya tumhe sacchi me fharak nahi padta agar mujhe kuch ho jaye..??

Still moving ahead n she's moving bak…

Image dis process going on in dis conversation ok..

Sh(nt luking into his eyes):- ya mujhe koi fharak nahi padta I dnt care….

S:- yehi baat mere aankho me aankhe dalke bolo…..aaj sharon d diva niche dekhake kyu baat kar rahi he vo bhi is losser se..

Sh:- vo..me… luk m nt afraid of u ok…. Mujhe koi fharak nahi padta ok… tum jio ya maro mujhe isase kya??

S:- aww…!! Sacchi….bt me jita tumhare liye hu…aur marna tumhare pyaar k bina nahi chahata..

(On hearing dis she juzzz luks into his eyes… n d luk luk hawa hawa bg music pehela nasha)

(Staring staring dey r moving towards n wall and on hitting d wall she brks d eyelock…)

Swayam places his right hand to her left side on d wall n left hand se raises her chin up to make her luk into his eyes..

Sw:- dekho in aankho me.. kya najar aata he tumhe..???... me jitna bhi chahu par fhir bhi me tumse nafharat nahi kar sakta aur na tumhe kabhi bhula sakta hu… ye aankhe tumhe dekhe bina reh nahi sakti… tum mere liye special thi ho aur rahogi… mene tumse pyaar kiya he aur karta rahunga… aur aaj jo kuch bhi hua uske liye mujhe maaf kardo plzz me ye sab nahi kehna chahata tha pata nahi me control kyu nahi kar paya.. ur nt an easy girl miss SHARON RAIPRAKASH… ur d toughest girl who doesn't fall easily fr ny1… ur my inspiration…

n….

sh:- n…

sw:- I love u miss SHARON RAIPRAKASH… I love a like no1 else in dis world coz ur my world… I want to make u all mine n dnt wanna share u wid d world… I wan to hold u possessively n tell d world dat she's mine.. mine forever… n no1 has d right to even luk at my princess…. U dnt knw Sharon hw much I hate 2 c those tears in ur eyes… I love 2 c u smiling always..n cn do nythng 2 keep dat smile intact on ur face…

Sharon was so happy 2 hear dis words dat tears of happiness strtd running in her eyes n a smiled curved on her lips…

Sh:- tell me dis is nt a dream…

Sw:- no my angel dis is nt a dream…. N I assure u once u accept my love I wont leave u even in ur dreams…

Sh:- swayam...swa….

She dint hav words 2 say nythn juzz rose her toes up n filled d gap between him n her lips…

Swayam was shocked at her action bt soon gave in….

Sharon kissed him wid all her love and passion fr him as though dis was her last kiss of her life… she wanted 2 feel him 2 d fullest…she had been putting bak dis feeling fr almost 1 year nw bt 2day her heart took over her dimaag…

They pulled back wen dey were out of breath..

Sh:- let me tell u mr swayam shekhawat dis was d 1st kiss of ma life… n d best kiss I cn ever hav…. "I love You"

On hearing those 3 magical words swayam's happiness had no bounds… he strtd dancing all over d place.. n Sharon was watching him wid happiness..

Sh(to herself):- kya yahi pyaar tha mera swayam k liye… hw could I nt understand him n accept his pure love…shayad stones jama karte karte me diamond ki kimmat bhool gayi thi aur aaj mujhe uski kimmat pata chal chuki he...thnk u god fr giving d best gift of my life… I surely preserve it well….

N she went n hugged swayam..

Sh:- dnt ever leave me swayam…

Sw:- no princess frm 2day ur all mine frever… "I love you"

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hope u guyz liked my os as dis was my 1st 1... if i get gud reviews den surely vl cont writing os's too..

n thnkz a lot fr ur comments fr d earlier parts...as m ol thru cell cnt rply 2 d comments so a collective thnks 2 all..

new users do hav a luk at my swaron ff too...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2912415/i-hate-u-bt-y-still-i-love-u-a-swaron-ff


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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
*res*
*unres*
its freaking awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
finally she got to know dat she is not hallucinating
n luved the way swayam confessed his love n finally she accepted
luved ur OS on the whole
Edited by lovely7010 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
This was awesome awesome awesome like really... I feel like dancing how swayam started doing.. Well done...

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