SwArOn OS (updated last part pg 5) - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
Any OS consisting of Sharon's monologue is good. Seriously their is so much shortage of this on show ki we can't get enough of this anytime.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
It is a wonderful OS ...likd th way u linked Sharon's thots with images of Swayam...ham ye sach me kab dekhenge yaar wish it was as simple...awaiting ur next update & thanx for th PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It was a very nice OS. Wish this had happened in the show.

thnx 4 d PM

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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
hey this OS is similar to my SWARON OS made last week...i already wrote something exactly like this...sharon hallucination in her room...washroom and all...window thing...
Edited by luvSwaron4ever - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome,sharon pov i love it...update it soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16

thnkz a lot fr appreciating my work here's d nxt part.. i knw dis is a os bt chalta he na aur ek part baaki he me thodi der me update kar dungi hmm yaha karti to bahot bada ho jaata ye isliye... hope u guyz like it n plz hit d like button n feel free 2 comment n criticize.. n m sry i cnt rply 2 al d msg's cz nowadays m ol thru cell n il try 2 update ma ff also soon..

jootas n chappals are welcum..

PART 2

Rey took swayam to his place'

Rey:- aisa kya hua dude kit u aaj peheli baar apni feelings or emotions ko control nahi kar paya..???

Swayam:- pata nahi jab bhi Sharon mere pass hoti he me apni emotions ko control nahi kar pata hu' aur aaj kaise aur kyu pata nahi mene use itna sab bol diya..mene bahot galat kiya uske sath'.

Aaj mene use bahot hurt kiya'pata nahi kyu.. shayad me chahta tha k Sharon mujhe hate kare bt d fact is I love her a lot rey I still do'.

Rey:- I knew n know it dude bt aisa kya kaha k baat is hadh taka age bad gayi??

S:- mene use'. Mene use kaha 'k vo ek easy type girl he .. me use jab chahu use kar sakta hu..

Rey:- ohh crap'.!!! Hw could u swayam' sharon sacchi me bahot hurt hui hogi.. bahot jyaada'

S:- mujhe pata he' jaanta hu me use aba b room me betke soch rahi hogi aaj k baareme'. Me to terese share kar raha hu sab'bt uske pass koi nahi he..u knw hw Sharon is vo kisiko apna dard nahi batayegi kabhi bhi'. Me itna kaise gir sakta hu..i hate myself a lot rey a lot'

Rey:- nahi swayam'shayad tu kuch jyaada hi gusse me tha islie keh gaya ye sab..bt mujhe lagta he k tune usase baat karni chahiye personally vo bhi akele me' vo khud to tujhase baat karne nahi aayegi'

S:- mujhe bhi yehi lagta he par kaise??

Rey thinking gets a idea..

Rey:-Chal mere sath'

S:- abhi..??? itni raatko..??? kahaa..???

Rey:- kitne sawal puchata he be tu chal mere sath chup chap'.

Dey get into d car'

Rey drives really very fast as he's nt able 2 she both his frnds like dis n wants dem 2 pour deir heart out 2 each other'.

Dey stop ..

S:- rey tujhe pata bhi he tu kaha aaya he??... hum yaha kyu aaye he vo bhi itni raatko'pagal ho gaya he kyat u..???

Rey:- abe apni love story to succesful kar nahi paya atleast teri to help kar hi sakta hu'.. aur kriya ko milne jaane k mehnat aaj kaam ayegi'

S:- rey tu pagal ho gaya he sacchi' itz really a bad idea m telling u..

Rey:- shut up' aaj me bolunga aur tu sunega'

Ab chal andar'.

Watchman:- are rey baba aap yaha iss waqt..baby to so rahi hogi..

Rey:- ha uncle mujhe usase bahot imp kaam he me mi leta ho use..

W:- me baby ko phone karke bata du??

Rey:- mat uncle aap mat taqlif li jiye il handle..thnkz..

N dey go inside'.

Instead of d door rey takes swayam to a window'

S:- abe apan andar kyu nahi gaye yaha kya garden me ghumne aaye he'???

Rey:- ha yaar mujhe frsh air bahot pasand he isliye soccha yaha aajaye.. duffer..kuch nahi hoga tera sacchi..

Swayam makes a baby face..

Rey:- abe nataunki chup kar..sun ab tu is pipe pese teri Sharon k room me jaa..

S:-shouts rey'.. are u gone mad..??????.. me vo bhi is waqt siren'.i mean Sharon k room me jau' maar daali gi mujhe vo aur kaccha cabba jayegi.'.

Rey:- kitna darta he be tu usase.. chup chap ja nahi to dekh me kya halat karungi teri baadme'

S:- mene kya pipe chadne ki training li he kya.. kaise jau..

Rey:- are jaise apan ne vicky ko chadaya tha uski kagu k liye vaise hi.. meri pipe chadne ki training kahi to kaam ayi..

S:- ok..aur tu kya karega'. Tu bhi ayega aise hi..

Rey:- mera mat soch jyaada'.me thode der w8 karke chala jaunga baaki kisika tension mat le il handle agar koi prob ho jaye to fhir call karna..aur Sharon ko sambhana tujhe aata he to plzz sab clear karde aur bata de use aaj..

S:- thnkz rey ur d best buddy any1 cn hav' chal swayam mission siren par lag ja'.

He slowly slowly climbs d pipe..nt caring abt falling coz his heart is aching to c her n talk his heart out 2 her'

He reaches her window bt doesn't stand up vo vaha chup jata he coz he hears Sharon talking'

N nw u cn imagine d last parts sharon's monologue'.

S:-Wat d hell'.aaj ho kya raha he mere sath.. kyu mujhe vo baar baar dikh raha he..no he cnt b right ohh god'kaha aake fhass gayi hu me'.

(she's facing d window nw)

After hearing dis he juzz stands up in d window n gets inside'

She see's him again in d window..

Sharon:- stop doing dis swayam plz' ur making me weak by ur presence' y.. y m I seeing u evrywer..y.. do I really care abt watevr u say.. does really ur presence affect me.. wats happening 2 me ohh god..

Nw she see's him cuming closer'.

See's still talking..

Aisi kya baat he tumme swayam jo humesha me khudko bhul jaati hu tumhe samne dekhate hi' kyu jab tum nahi hote to meri ankhe tumhe dhundti he..y.. kaise tum meri har baat bin bole smaj jaate ho' kyu tum mujhe itne acchese jaante ho'.y' y u idiot y do u love me' y dnt u understand swayam ur 2 gud fr me.. actually d fact is I dnt deserve ur love..

She's crying n crying'

Ab tum mere pass aa rahe ho jab me tumhe feel karna chahungi tum chale jaoge' mat karo mere sath aisa swayam'. Ur making me go weak in my knees' I cnt stop myself frm luking in ur beautiful eyes n stop admiring dem'

Nw she's feeling he has reachd near her'

Luking into his eyes she's nt able to hold bak ny further' she juzz hugs him'.

His on cloud 9 don't knw hw 2 say nythng wat to react he juzz hugs her back feeling aal d happiness in d world' she's to feeling d same..

Bt'.bt'

She's shocked nw..hw cn an hallucination hug u bak'no 'plz dis is a dream plz'm nt hugging swayam in reality plz..

She brks d hug'.

N staring at him in full shock mode..

another part 2 cum...

fr pm's as usual add nj_swaron 2 ur buddy list...

Edited by namratajadhav - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I'm here before you sent out the PM's only. Nw lemme read it k. : )
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Posted: 13 years ago
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*res*
nd candy pehle wala unres kardia hai padh lena
and as usual faster than u 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow, luvd the twist - I wish the CVs had done somthing like this and I'm sure we wuld hav had our Swaron by now...well written & pls Nammu aaj hi update karna rest of it - cant wait😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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vry nice one...hey namratha plzz do continue on this...

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