A New twist in Kria's lyf KR FF part 7 pg 30 - Page 11

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both the parts were awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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hey guys
i know ur gonna hit me with jooti's tomao's or any other things for nt updating frm 1 and half weeks. bt i was on vaccations. sry for not informig. and i know ki tum sab mujse naraz ho isliye mei ne ek bada update likha hai.bt iss mei kriyansh scenes nahi hai aur sabse zyada krisha scene hai par i promise agla update will be of kriyansh and also longer than this. hope u lyke it. now enough of my blah blah blah...and here goes the update

Part 5

Recap- kriyansh scene in fire exit

Nilesh, Simmi, Rinni, and Vicky entered frm one door of RH(rehearsal hall)

Whereas Amar, Bharat, Neha and Vishaka enter frm other door

They all saw each other i.e. weaklings saw dazzlers and vice-versa

All- TUM LOG 😲

Si- tum log yaha kya kar rahe ho

Vi- agar vahi tume puche toh

Ri- tumhe isse kya

Vicky- seedhe seedhe batao ki tum log yaha kya kar rahe ho

Bha- tumse matlab

Ni- guys inse argue karna bekar hai... hum kyun apna tym waste kar rahe ha

(P.S. - boys are mock fighting 😉)

Si- just leave RH ryt now kyunki hume ek zaroori kaam keliye bulaya gaya hai

Ne- ohh.. toh kya tumne RH book kiya hai kya ki u aisa talking huh

Ri- oh ya..she's ryt humne to Rh book hi nahi kiya hai

Si- shut up dumbo... and ha humme RH book karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai kyunki hum tabhi ate hai when its not booked

Vish- voh toh hum bhi karsakte hai

Nil- tum logon se fyt karna bekar hai just leave the RH now

Nthey started fyting. They fought for a long tym until ReYam came. They both saw all of them fyting and got irritated and shouted

ReYam- GUYS STOP IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😡

All stopedand looked at ReYam

Vick- Rey... Rey inhe batao ki tumne hume yaha bulaya hai... yeh log yaha firse hume paka ne aa gaye

Ri- bt Vicky... yeh log hume fry kaise karsakte hai... hum koi khane ki cheez todi na hai 😆

All- SHUT UP DUMBO 😡

Amar- ale yaal twayam tu hi bolo na ki tum ne hume yaha bulaye hai (are yaar swayam tu hi bolo na ki tum ne hume yaha bulaye hai)

Vish- one sec guys tum dono ne hum sab ko ek sath yaha kyun bulaya hai... and where's kriya

Swa- voh GRP sir se baat kar rahi hai... voh sir ne kaha ki kuch important baat karni hai isliye voh unke cabin mei hogi

Si-wat GRP sir i mean sharon ke dad college aye hai... par voh kyun uss behnji se baath kar rahe hai

Rey- simmi.. stop saying that word for kriya and start respecting weaklings

Si- rey yeh tum kya keh rahe ho

Swa- pehle hum eek zaroori baat baatani hai tum logon koi... uske baad tumhe tumara sawal ka javab milega

Bha- toh jaldi bata na

Rey- voh guys... um it's good that both the teams have passed the footloose internal auditions bt

Si- bt wat

Swa- bt according to rules of footloose ek college se sirf ek hi team participate karsak ti hai

Nil- toh

ReYam turned back facing the gang and rey said

Rey- toh humare paas sirf do options hai

1. Koi ek team apna naam wapas lele

Swa- ya phir 2. Hum louians ban kar perform kare

As soon as swayam said that everyonesmout fell they looked at each other for a while

Swa- all are gonna freak out... so the countdown begins 5...4..

Rey-3..2..

ReYam- 1

As soon as the countdown finished All shouted on top of their lungs

All- WHAT 😲

And they started telling it's not possible... i can't do this and blah blah blah for some tym

Reyam again got irritated and shouted ' GUYS 😡

Rey- accept the truth and stop this useless fyts... kyunki mere sath sath princi, GRP sir bhi fed up ho gaye hai

Swa- aur issiliye unhone ek student counsellor ko appoint kiya and that to EXCLUSIVELY for us

All- WAT

Rey- so guys decide urself its all up to you

And ReYam went out of RH

And every one gone one by one

All the while the gang was getting a big 440 watt jhatka (LOLzzz 😆) kriya and sharon were having a girly talk 😉

Surprised... Read on

Kriya came into washroom to freshen up coz she had cried a lot and had to wash her face.

She came in and saw Sharon sitting on the seat which is in the middle of washroom (that wooden trialgular one)crying lyk hell...

Her eyes were red indicating that she had been crying from from along tym...

Her tears were rolling down her cheeks uncontrollably like rivers...

Kriya couldn't see her lyk that...

Even if she din't know that Sharon was her sis then also she couldn't see her lyk that...

Sharon was one of the bravest girl she had ever met... and that same girl is crying lyk hell now...

That was not happening...

She had to make sure that Sharon becomes alryt.

Sharon was so engrossed in her crying that she din't notice kriya coming towards her

Kriya came to her and kept her hand on her shoulder and said

Sharon saw kriya and wiped her tears and stood up and asked

Sha- tum... tum yaha kya kar rahi ho (tried to be strong bt couldn't)

Kri- vo mei bas freshen up hone keliye ayi par tum itna ro kyun rahi ho... mei ne aj tak tumhe aise rote hue nahi dekha

Sharon looked at kriya and saw some dried tears on her cheeks and asked her eye were swollen and red indicating that she had also cried for a long tym she asked her

Sha- tum bhi ro rahi thi...kyun... tum toh bohot strong ho na... mujhe challenge karna ki himmat hai tumhe.. to fir kyun

Kri- pehle tum batao... i think u need a girly talk... agar tum mujhe batane layak samjho to

Sha- its not lyk that... and ur ryt... i need a girly talk

Kri- toh batao kya baat hai (keeping her hand on her shoulders concernedly)

In an instance she hugged her and started to cry her heart out. Kriya was shocked...

and why she sould not be. The girl who hated her...
the girl who was always irritated by her...
the girl who always stood strong for herself...
is now crying lyk hell in her arms...
kriya patted her back trying to console her and stroked her hair...
Kri- Sharon... Sharon kya hua batao...

Kriya slowly pulled her breaking the hug and cupped her face in her hands and wiped her tears

Kri- Sharon batao kya hua

Sha- vo mom ki bohot yaad aa rahi hai

Kriya (in her mind)- mom yani Sharon ko ma ki yaad a rahi hai

Kriya (asking concernedly)-kyun

Sha- vo...vo dad kehte hai ki ma ne unhe chod ne se pehle do options diya tha...mom ya phir dance... papa ne dance chuni...isliye mom ne apne sath sath meri twin sis ko bhi leke gai bohot dur... lekin kriya isse baat ko kissi se mat kehna kyunki yeh mere secret hai

Kri- ok..um dance ki kasam mei kisi ko nahi bataungi... par tumhe aj apni mom ki yaad kyun aa rahi hai

Sha- vo... aj bhi aisa kuch ho raha hai... jaise mom ne dad ko do options diya tha aj mere paas do options hai... ya toh mei apni dil ki sunu ya apni ego ki... mei confuse ho rahi hoon

Kriya thought for a while and said

Kri- toh apni dil ki sunkar humare sath dance karna chahti ho par tumare ego ki wajah se nahi hosakta

Sha- haan

Kri- Sharon i think tumare dad ne apni dil ki suna aur dance ko chuna issliye... mei toh yehi kahungi ki tum apni dil ki suno apni dad ki tarah kyunki woh kabhi galat nahi kehta... bt its all ur choice... par ek baat batao tum ne kaha ki tumari mom me apne sath sath apna twin sis ko bhi leke gayi ... to tum unhe miss nahi karti

Sha- haan mein bohot miss karti hoon unhe... mei nahi janti woh kaise kai kaise dikte hai par yeh zaroor janti hoon ki woh mujhse bohot pyaar karti hai

Kri- don't worry Sharon ek na ek din toh vo tumare paas aa jayenge

Sha- thanks i needed this

Kriya gave a smile and said

Kri- ur welcome... mujhe ab jaana chahiye... bye

She was abt to go when

Sha- kriya

Kri- haan

Sha-vo

Kri- mei janti hoon tum kya kehna chati ho... yehi na ki tumne mujhse friendly baat ki iska yeh Matlab nahi ki humari difference mit gayi hai... hum dono wahi hai jo humesha ek dosre se ladte the... and don't worry mei is ke bare mei kisi ko bhi nahi bataungi

Sha- tu..tumhe kaise pata

Kri- itna to mei tumhe janti hoon tumhe...and Sharon don't ever regret abt this kyunki tumhe console karne ki zaroorat thi to mei ne tumhe console kiya...bye

Kriya freshened up and went

Sharon also freshened up after kriya went and thought

Sha- yeh itni bhi buri nahi hai... yeh mei kya soch rahi hoon...ugh i think mujhe ghar jana kar todi rest karni chahiye...

She packed her things and sent SMS to her frenz that she's leaving and went to her house.

On the other hand kriya went to RH and saw it empty and thought that everyone myt have left after getting the news. She got a call frm her mom. She picked up.

Sm- kriya... beta mein 2 din ke liye pune ja rahi hoon

Kri-kya (shoced and exited at same time) par ma

Sm- i know beta... par urjent kaam hai... cha ho to tum kisi friend ki yaha ruk jao

Kri- nahi ma it's ok mei rehlungi

Sm-r u sure beta aur keys hai na tumare paas

Kri haan ma i'll be fyn don't worry... aur apna khyal rakna

Sm- theek hai beta...mujhe abhi jana hoga kyunki meri fight hai

Kri-ok ma bye take care

Sm- bye beta

Precap- Kriyaansh romantic scenes

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so how was it
this is the biggest update i've ever written
ab bada update diya hai toh todi badi comments bhi do na
nxt update nxt week on pg 25
Edited by srujanahpvr - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
amaZAYN update and thanks for the pm :D

Nikki <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
a long update and dat too a gud 1...reyam's convo was awesome.d way dey predicted every1 freakin out widin 5 secs wwas ssimply fantabulous...and the girly talk...aah ...sounded lyk rain on a fire...waiting eagerly for our kriyansh romantic scenes.and jaldi update krna..u knw i was so missing dis updt badly...so plzz dis tym dun delay...👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update.
Thanks for pm.
Krisha moment was cute.
Update next part soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing...luved it
awww luved krisha's girly talk
it was a beautiful update...eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago

Awesum updt...

Krisha's convo was too gud..

Waiting for d next part..

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