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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 5

Recap: GRP- Kriya convo

Kriya came out of the cabin and straight away went to fire exit and cried her heart out. Tears were streaming down her cheeks like rivers.

Rey was heading to fire exit thinking a way to console kriya knowing that it'll be difficult. He opened the door without making noise and went to her. She was facing her back to him so she dint knew that he was there.he slowly placed his palm on her shoulder.

Without thinking she hugged him tight. She was completely broke down inside her heart and she needed someone to express her anger and pain which she was feeling now. He was shocked at first, jolts of electricity were flowing all over his body. He wrapped his arms around her delicate body and rubbed her back trying to console her. After a while he said

Rey- Baatcutter

Kriya realised that she was in rey's arms and slowly pulled back. Their eyes locked. They had a LLHH moment with ohoho BG tune. She looked into his eyes and saw immense care for her. He looked into her eyes and saw the pain and fear in them he understood what she was going through and he needed to console her and get back his Baatcutter at any cost. He wiped her tears wid his fingers and pinned some strands of hair at back of her ears.

Kriya broke the LLHH and asked

Kri- app... app yahan kya kar rahe ho

Rey- mujhe pata tha ki tum yahi aogi aur apni sara dard yahi nikalogi

Kri- kya app jante hai ki mei kyun ro rahi hoon

Rey:hmm...ha

Kri- kya app ko kaise pata? ...

Rey- ek minute miss bathcutter pori baat tho sunno... woh mei GRP sir ki cabin se ja raha tha to meine tumhe chilla the hue suna... to mujhe laga ki kuch serious matter hai to meine dekha aur mujhe sab pata chal gaya... i'm sorry for over hearing... lekin tum plz apne app ko blame mat karo. Tumne wohi kiya jo tumhare dil aur universeji ne kaha...

Kri- lekin rey app kissi ko especially Sharon ko isske bare me batana mat plz (puppy dog face)

Seeing her cute face he could't deny and said

Rey- don't worry ur secret is safe with me

Kriya gave a faint smile and drifted into her thoughts

Rey wanted to cheer her up so he gone into his Chabilal mode

Rey(Chabilal)- uho ramira ji ap itne udas kahe ho u toh humri department hai waise bi ap the diba(diva) ki immege ko bilckul suit nahi karti

Kri- rey plz i'm not at all in mood... app jante hai ki meri life mei problems ka toofaan aya hai aur yaha aapko Chabilal aur ramira ki padi hai... (she turns back facing him)

Rey comes in front of her and makes her sit on the stairs and sits beside her. He says

Rey- ok sry... par mujhe ek baat batao kya kriya ghai kisi bhi problem ya fir challenge ke age jhuke hai

Kriya shaked her head signifying a no

Rey- to fir aj itna emotional kyun ho rahi ho... mere pas tumare problems ko kuch der keliye bhool ne ka ek solution ha

Kri- kya

Rey- tumara smile ... kyunki jab tum smile karti hoto tum problems ko bhi thodi der keliye bagha sakti ho... so plz smile and be yourself... toh kya mujhe ek smile dogi

She smiled

Rey- kriya ye jo bhi hai tumara personal matter hai so mujhe interfere nahi karna chahiye bt ye zaroor yaad rakna ki jab bi tumhe meri help chahiye then i'll be always there for you

Kri- tnx rey

Rey- kyun

Kri- wo apne mujhe console kiya aur meri help karne keliye mangaye .. isliye

Rey- ur welcome Baatcutter... n BTW its hard to belive ki tum aur Sharon sisters ho

Kri- kyun nahi hosakte

Rey- nahi mera Matlab tum dono itna jagad the ho dono ek dosre se completly opposite ho... aj meine khud deka na princi ke cabin mei kaise tum sach jante hue bhi Sharon se ladai ki... my god that was so entertaining...

Kri- you..

She was gonna hit him wid her hands that he went out. Before going out he said

Rey- welcome back Baatcutter

She got amazed frm wat he said and then realized what he ment .

She smiled to herself and thanked him whole heartedly

Suddenly she got message frm swayam. It had written that she should come to rehearsal hall immediately.

She wiped her tears and became normal and went out

End of part 4

Precap: everyone's reaction after they hear the news

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I hope i stood up to ur expectations

That all i could give at this point of time

Plz post ur valuable comments

PM's are on the way

A special thanks to neeti di(Harsha_Neeti) again who helped me in writing this part love u di
Edited by srujanahpvr - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yayy im the first one to comment n read it before pm...

its awesome luved it!!!!!!! awww kriya hugged rey wow...n luved the way he consoled her...

wow rey behaving like chabilal n rey is corret its hard to believe dat kriya n sharon r sisters

luved rey's last dialogue welcome back baatcutter...

Edited by lovely7010 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
eeeps...rey in chabilal mode...the electrifying hug...the way rey brings back his baatcutter...her smile,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,u stole my heart srujana...will love u for dis...
one more-----welcome back baatcutter...dat was so adorable...love love love u/...keep entertaining /////////////😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome story . . . . & the track is really going fast . . . . . . Sharon ko pata chalega to vo to tod fod hi macha degi 😆 . . . . . Loved the fire exit scene . . . . Rey can never see her like that,,,, then he can be a caring lover or chabbilal,,, Watever she needs the most . . . . . 😉
thanx 4 the pm
Edited by yogini64 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing update i loved it thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nyc update gr8 concept. Update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww so sweet loved the kriyansh scene and especially the last line " Welcome back Baatcutter" sooo cute thnx 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome part...loved it very much
rey is soo cute...loved the way he consoled kria
and last line "welcome back baatcutter" was really superb and heart touching ...loved it very much

thanks for the pm
waiting eagerly for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks for the pm.
it was lovely one.
wow reys dialog so touched my heart.

update next part soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was amazing rey came to know about kriya and sharon thankx for pm

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