A New twist in Kria's lyf KR FF part 7 pg 30 - Page 10

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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow kria hugs rey and electrify jolt on body was amazing and the way console kriya was awesome
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wooow awsommemeew cnt waiitt 4 next updattte 2 seee every1 reactionn thnx for pm well be waiting for next

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its too cute!!!!!!! update soon and pm me...really its too cute!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It was owesome part all 4 specialy last one when u updte please pm to me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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JST AMAZING... REY BEING CHABILAL... IT WAS SOOO CUTE B'COZ I MISS CHABILAL PERSONALLY..N KRIYAANSH FIRST HUG... THANKS FR THE PM...😊
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tat ws fab BC!!! :)
update soon n pm me
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Originally posted by: srujanahpvr

Part 5

Recap: GRP- Kriya convo

Kriya came out of the cabin and straight away went to fire exit and cried her heart out. Tears were streaming down her cheeks like rivers.

Rey was heading to fire exit thinking a way to console kriya knowing that it'll be difficult. He opened the door without making noise and went to her. She was facing her back to him so she dint knew that he was there.he slowly placed his palm on her shoulder.

Without thinking she hugged him tight. She was completely broke down inside her heart and she needed someone to express her anger and pain which she was feeling now. He was shocked at first, jolts of electricity were flowing all over his body. He wrapped his arms around her delicate body and rubbed her back trying to console her. After a while he said

Rey- Baatcutter

Kriya realised that she was in rey's arms and slowly pulled back. Their eyes locked. They had a LLHH moment with ohoho BG tune. She looked into his eyes and saw immense care for her. He looked into her eyes and saw the pain and fear in them he understood what she was going through and he needed to console her and get back his Baatcutter at any cost. He wiped her tears wid his fingers and pinned some strands of hair at back of her ears.

Kriya broke the LLHH and asked

Kri- app... app yahan kya kar rahe ho

Rey- mujhe pata tha ki tum yahi aogi aur apni sara dard yahi nikalogi

Kri- kya app jante hai ki mei kyun ro rahi hoon

Rey:hmm...ha

Kri- kya app ko kaise pata? ...

Rey- ek minute miss bathcutter pori baat tho sunno... woh mei GRP sir ki cabin se ja raha tha to meine tumhe chilla the hue suna... to mujhe laga ki kuch serious matter hai to meine dekha aur mujhe sab pata chal gaya... i'm sorry for over hearing... lekin tum plz apne app ko blame mat karo. Tumne wohi kiya jo tumhare dil aur universeji ne kaha...

Kri- lekin rey app kissi ko especially Sharon ko isske bare me batana mat plz (puppy dog face)

Seeing her cute face he could't deny and said

Rey- don't worry ur secret is safe with me

Kriya gave a faint smile and drifted into her thoughts

Rey wanted to cheer her up so he gone into his Chabilal mode

Rey(Chabilal)- uho ramira ji ap itne udas kahe ho u toh humri department hai waise bi ap the diba(diva) ki immege ko bilckul suit nahi karti

Kri- rey plz i'm not at all in mood... app jante hai ki meri life mei problems ka toofaan aya hai aur yaha aapko Chabilal aur ramira ki padi hai... (she turns back facing him)

Rey comes in front of her and makes her sit on the stairs and sits beside her. He says

Rey- ok sry... par mujhe ek baat batao kya kriya ghai kisi bhi problem ya fir challenge ke age jhuke hai

Kriya shaked her head signifying a no

Rey- to fir aj itna emotional kyun ho rahi ho... mere pas tumare problems ko kuch der keliye bhool ne ka ek solution ha

Kri- kya

Rey- tumara smile ... kyunki jab tum smile karti hoto tum problems ko bhi thodi der keliye bagha sakti ho... so plz smile and be yourself... toh kya mujhe ek smile dogi

She smiled

Rey- kriya ye jo bhi hai tumara personal matter hai so mujhe interfere nahi karna chahiye bt ye zaroor yaad rakna ki jab bi tumhe meri help chahiye then i'll be always there for you

Kri- tnx rey

Rey- kyun

Kri- wo apne mujhe console kiya aur meri help karne keliye mangaye .. isliye

Rey- ur welcome Baatcutter... n BTW its hard to belive ki tum aur Sharon sisters ho

Kri- kyun nahi hosakte

Rey- nahi mera Matlab tum dono itna jagad the ho dono ek dosre se completly opposite ho... aj meine khud deka na princi ke cabin mei kaise tum sach jante hue bhi Sharon se ladai ki... my god that was so entertaining...

Kri- you..

She was gonna hit him wid her hands that he went out. Before going out he said

Rey- welcome back Baatcutter

She got amazed frm wat he said and then realized what he ment .

She smiled to herself and thanked him whole heartedly

Suddenly she got message frm swayam. It had written that she should come to rehearsal hall immediately.

She wiped her tears and became normal and went out

End of part 4

Precap: everyone's reaction after they hear the news

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I hope i stood up to ur expectations

That all i could give at this point of time

Plz post ur valuable comments

PM's are on the way

A special thanks to neeti di(Harsha_Neeti) again who helped me in writing this part love u di
ur most welcum my dear sruju...
b always frank 2 ask any kind of hlp i m always dere...

luv u 2...


Luvd d part it was realy amazing n touchy
n yaa... hw beautifully u wrote chabilaal's dialogue jst in his style, i mean dat chabilaal version of hindi, rili lovely
n evn i lykd d description oh LLHH scene...


Edited by hARSHA_Neeti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
Woww super awesum. Loved it especialy chabilal<3
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Posted: 13 years ago
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eee..Rey in Chabilal Mode..
Shooo Cute 😆
n His Last Dialogue Welcome Back BaatCutter! 😛
awesomeee...pleaseee Pm me whenever u Update Next..Loved It..All Of It! 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome ff please pm me when you update :D

Nikki <3

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