A New twist in Kria's lyf KR FF part 7 pg 30

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Hey guys this is Srujana. I'm writing a new FF. I hope you like it.

So my FF starts when the Dazzlers and Weaklings passed the internal auditions (in d3).And the next day Kriya's mom comes to college as she was suspicious about her. There she meets Sharon.

Will smriti find that Sharon is her daughter?

How will kriya react to this?

Will these problems help Kriyaansh come closer 2 each other?

To find the answers keep reading.

guys plz bear wid me. i'm not an experienced writer and u may find dis drammatic bt i'll try my best.

Note: if you want Pm's than send a buddy request to my Id i.e. srujanahpvr

And a special thanks to Neeti di (Harsha_Neeti) for supporting and helping me write this FF. Love u loads Di.

-Srujana-

Index

part 1-page 2

part 2- page 5
part 3- page 10
part 4- page 14
part 5-page 18
part 6- page 29
part 7 page 30
feelings why is it so strange sometimes

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love the concep very much!!!!!!!!please cont..soon and pm me...xxxlove
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awesome concept...loved it
please pm me for next update
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Part 1-page 2
part 2 page 5
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justtt Fab concept dear !!!!!!

loved it !!!!! <3

so pls do continue sooon nd do PM me !!!! :D
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a nyc concept.ccontinue writing.wud love to read ur wrk.pm me wen u update...
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Originally posted by: star_2012

love the concep very much!!!!!!!!please cont..soon and pm me...xxxlove

thank you i'll surely send u PM's bt you should also reply
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Originally posted by: mEgical_arsha

justtt Fab concept dear !!!!!!


loved it !!!!! <3

so pls do continue sooon nd do PM me !!!! :D

thank you di
i'll be posting 1st part in short while
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plzz continue dear
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so guys here's d fist part i know its short bt plz do comment. if there is any spelling mistake dan forgive me

Part 1

Smriti had come 2 spy on kria coz she saw kriya in really happy mood telling that her dream is gonna become true. She sees people cheering for kriya. Smriti went 2 Sharon who was standing there fuming in anger and asked

Sm: kya ap bata sakte hai ki yaha ho kya raha hai

Sh- (in sarcastic manner) celebration ho raha hai ... pata nahi khud ko kya samjte ha 😡 ek toh muje Sharon Raiprakash ko challenge kiya aur...

Sm- kya naam kya bola

Sha- Sharon Raiprakash kyun ap mere dad ko nahi jante is college ki trustee Gautam Raiprakash..

Smriti just ran away frm there and went her house n cried her heart out 😭

At evening when kriya returned from college after celebrating the victory she came into house and saw smriti in very tired state she went to her and asked

Kri- mom...kya hua... ap itna udas kyun ho...

She saw her tear sticken face and panicked

Kri- ma ap ro rahi thi...ma kya hua plz batao...

Sm- kriya... tum aur Sharon ek dusre ke liye kya ho

Kri- maa hum enemies hai... Kyunki use lagta hai ki...

She stopped when she realised what she was saying. She saw some tears rolling down her mother's cheeks. she couldn't tolerate her mother's tears and thought that it might be related to Sharon. Kriya asks her

Kri- maa... kya hua plz batao.. ap aisa bilkul acha nahi lagti meri ma toh bohot strong hai meine ap ko kabhi rote hue nahi deka to aj kya hua...

Sm- kriya.. tum humesha se janna chahta thi na ki kyun mujhe tumara dance pasand nahi hai..

Kri- ha

Sm-wo isliye ki tumara papa bhi dancer the... humari love marriage hua tha... par unki dance ki wajah se woh mujhe time hi nahi dete the...isleye meine unse sare rishta tod diya... tumari ek judwa beha hai...humne decide kiya tha ki hum eke k beti apne sath rakenge... isley unhone use(kriya's twin sis) liya aur meine tumhe...Hum dono dance ki wajah se alag hue aur mein nahi chati ki tum bhi mujse dur ho jao aur dance ki wajah se to bilcul bhi nahi

Kri- ma ap aisa kyun soch rahi ho mein bhaala ap ko chod ke kyun jaun ap ki bina mein kuch nahi hoon aur agar ap ko lagta hai ki dance ki wajah sa door ho jaun toh ap galat samjh rahi hai... par ma ap mujhe aaj mujhe ye sab kyun bata rahi hai

Sm- kyunki Sharon tumari behen hai

Kri- Matlab Gau...Gautam Raiprakash...

Sm-tumare papa hai

Kri- KYA...

It was a big shock for her. It needed some time for her 2 absorb it. Aftersome tym she consoled her mother and made her sleep. Kriya went to her room. She pepped out of the window and questions herself.

Kri- mei jo bhi kar rahi hun kya woh sahi hai... Universeji app hi ne toh green signal diya tha dance karne keliye...toh yeh sab kya hai Gautam Raiprakash mere papa hai Sharon meri behn hai...kabhi sapne mei bhi socha nahi tha ki aisa kuch hota hai... aur ma ko lagte hai ki mei dance ki wajah se unse door ho jaungi.. par shayad mujhe sahi waqt ka intezar karna padega aur ma ko sab sach batana padega kyunki wo mujh par blind trust karti hai aur mujhse bahut pyaar karti hai... theek hai mei ab so jati hoon aj mujhe itne jhatke mila hai... mujhe todi rest kki zaroorat hai.

She goes to bed.

End of part 1

precap: Gautam Raiprakash And kriya meeting

a shocking news to d louians

so guys do you think Gautam Raiprakash will recognise Kriya?

think think... wait for d next update

Plz do post ur valuable comments

Edited by srujanahpvr - 13 years ago

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