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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: Smita.M
Awesome OS! Loved it!👏
M a fan of ur writing! 1 request,plz pm me when u write an OS next time.

Thank You! :)

*Blush blush*

Am glad you enjoyed it! :)

Originally posted by: Poonam786
Beautiful! Loved it, both parts.. Glad you ended it on a happy note.. :)

Thank You! :)

Happy you enjoyed it.

Originally posted by: rukuswasthika
fantastic yaar.i loved it.kaash things like this happen in the show too

Thank You! :)

Originally posted by: monsi08
Loved it... I looovvveee happy endings 😃

Lol! Who doesnt? :P

Thank You though! :)

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: asrksr
Beautiful!loved it!! Thank you for not stopping after 1st part.i know arnav was wrong,but khushi deserves a happy life and only he can give her true love. Thanks for the pm and sorry for the late reply.i had a really bad head ache. Waiting for next work...

Awww! You are one of the few (if not the only) who have thought about Khushi here and not just Arnav and his pain of possibly losing Khushi! Glad you got that part! Thank You! :)

Originally posted by: saathiya1
beautiful.. very well written... loved the emotions of arnav and kushi... :)

Thank You! :)

Glad you liked the story and my writing! :)

Originally posted by: DarkDove

Hey dear!!

Im speechless!!! This OS and all these parts were sooo touching and emotional...
love how ASR transformed into a vulnerable arnav... it was beautiful to read, really.. I admire your writing style!!!

i love how he apologized to her the way she did... and of course she would forgive him eventually ... .

this was a masterpiece, i enjoyed reading it!!!

xxHaffie!

Thank You so much! :)

You are too kind with your words but I am deeply humbled you feel so.

Glad you liked this story, my take on the characters and writing style! :)

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: appy_12
Sweet! Really nice! Loved the way Khushi reacted! And I was pleasantly surprised when I saw your PM.. I almost thought you'd gone off into hibernation!

Hahahahahaha! How all my pending work wishes that! ;) :D

Thank You sooo much! :)

Glad you enjoyed it!

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: flutterby
what can i say... 😆 more than what i havent said already???? 😳 ur depiction of their pain, angst, sadness, fear... is too marvelous... 👏 i had a big smile on my face when u made arnav do the uthak- baithak.. 🤣 it would be lovely if he did it in the serial as well.. 😆 and the way u ended was... so unexpected... 😊 but nevertheless it would have been the way the cvs would have shown in the serial... i am sure this os would have drained u as well... take care and keep PMing me.. 🤗

Thank You so much!

And you have tell me your name, man! Its high time I know the name of such a wonderful reader! :)

This OS was surprisingly not that drain-y. :p

Maybe because I saw Arnav in a sherwani and decided to give it a happy ending... ;) :D

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: balashiv15
SUPERB OS

Thank You! :)

Glad you enjoyed it.

Originally posted by: shona-li
I really like your writing. It feels more real and less melodramatic without ridding it of it's romantic appeal. What I really loved about this ficlet is that you didn't make anything sexual that would have cheapen the story line, and that even though Arnav is crying, you feel he is a better man for owning up to his faults. Beautiful! Looking forward to reading your works if you ever post them here. If you do, I would love to receive PMs from you :)

Thank You so much! That is a wonderful comment and something that every writer looks for.

I am glad you enjoyed my work and writing style! :)

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: memories_im
This was amazing! Loved it 😃

Thank You! :)

Glad you enjoyed it.

Originally posted by: tina_1234
awesomely amazin os

Thank You! :)

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Risha

@LivingInPajamas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#97

Rae I am sorry for being late-the fact is that I read it before and my internet went off at that point.You couldn't believe I literally jumped up at the screen.I love your style of writing-The way you show him repenting is just too brilliant for words.if anything then- I loved it.Period.😳

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: ayaniie-chan

You're welcome, Rae! but honestly, it's my pleasure! 🤗

What can I say?.. I am a good reader I notice good things LOL & I understand what you mean by having fav moments, you should totally have those moments,there are more than one in your writing!!

Since I got a Part2 instantly, I'm not that mad! 😛😆

PS: when am I getting my next dose?.. btw do you still watch MLTAK?.. I gave up so, just PM me Arhi FFs for now. 😃

Yes, you are. *Nods*

:D *Hug*

And check your inbox...do-do PMs pade honge! ;) :D

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: riti4u
Finally read it..👏 and it ws really awesome..I literally cried hearing arnav' sorry.. but thank God you saw him in sherwani and gave a happy ending... I loved it...

Thank You! :)

And dont cry, yaar! Mil gayye na aakhir mein? Be happy! :) <3

And true..sherwani na hoti toh shayad part 1 pe hi khatam ho jaati OS. ;) 😆

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: mysticblue14
Loved it 😊

Thank You! :)

Originally posted by: Risha_ipkknd
Rae I am sorry for being late-the fact is that I read it before and my internet went off at that point.You couldn't believe I literally jumped up at the screen.I love your style of writing-The way you show him repenting is just too brilliant for words.if anything then- I loved it.Period.😳

Thank You so much, Risha! :)

You are too kind but believe me when I say I am truly humbled that you feel this way for my writing! :)