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AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: farfar319
Oh my. i lovvveeeddd it. i dont know what else to say...

Awww! Thank You! :)

Originally posted by: Nmyra
OMG this is sooo wonderful i loved the way it was written, the flow, and most esp the way he apologized i secretly have always thought that scene would make a comeback when he does apologize, if not an utak bethak just the kan pakarna at least!!

LOved it hun...and the sherwani is promoting updates everywhere i see lol!!

Thank You so much, Nymra! :)

You did?! I would love it if it does! Those scenes when both of them apologize just make me catch my breath and write OS'...LOL! ;) :D

That sherwani has magical effects! Or maybe the one wearing it does... ;) :D <3

Originally posted by: sun_shine_girl
I so wish that there was a 'Love' button here coz I have fallen in love in with this story...
Khushi leaving behind everything but the box of sindoor..
Arnav asking her not to forgive him so easily...
And the promise at the end...WOW!

Awww!

You are too sweet! ☺️

Thank You so much! I am so glad you enjoyed the story and my writing style and that it touched you so! :)

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: X.Sisi94
Amazing OS thanks for the English translation

Thank You! :)

And you're welcome. :)

Originally posted by: Chocoangel
superbb endingg...

Awww! Thank You! :)

Glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: siddy9171
Wow, just read it all in one go. Absolutely loved it! Especially the part where you said his bones were crying out in pain and it was hard to breathe-- loved the way you depicted Arnav's emotions. Great job!👏

Thank You! :)

I am so glad you enjoyed my writing style. :)

Originally posted by: swetha10
wow wonderful..
brilliant... luved it..

Thank You! :)

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: BarunForever
*res*
Rae i just loved it EXCELLENT ... You want believe i was totally in tears while reading it last nite so loved it and wish something like this happens on screen...😊
on yea and thanx for the PM...

Awww! Thank You sooo much! :)

No problem about the PM. I am just humbled by the fact that my writing affected you so although I hope you smiled too after reading the ending. :)

Originally posted by: flowers4u
amazing os ... beautifully written ... loved it all... just wow ... ur amazing ... keep up the great wrk

Thank You sooo much! :)

You are very sweet to say all this!

Originally posted by: london_doll
Loved It!! Btw, where did you see Arnav in a sherwani, do post the link!!!

Lots of Luv!

Ashu <3

Thank You so much, Aishu! :)

I am sure by now you have seen and even dreamt about him in sherwani! ;) :D

Originally posted by: lena07
Amazing !!!!
loved it 😊
i really enjoyed reading it...must say that u r a great writer..!!!

Thank You so much!

You make me blush and feel really humbled.

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: aditi07
superb OS..very touching & emotional😊

Awww! Thank You! :)

Originally posted by: kyunki_iloveu
wowww..tht was a gr8 OS...probably khushi will forgive him just like htis on the show..:)

Thank You so much! :)

I think I will just go crazy with craziness if this happened on the show...cos Sarun would ROCK such a scene! :) <3

Originally posted by: ayaniie-chan
Rae, AMAZING OS once again!🤗 🤗 🤗

I thoroughly enjoyed reading that!😊 Although I have read many of your work, I love the fact that it is still unpredictable, for instance your choice of words to describe how KKG had changed into KKGSR, I thought it'd be more bitter, cold, sarcastic along those lines but instead it was scared, defeated, tired, which is in a way more fitting to her character.👍🏼 Beautifully written, it has a really nice flow and I liked how you presented it from both their point of view. 👏 That sorry scene from the show was used very appropriately & the actual 'sorry' from Arnav itself was quite something too, I did indeed imagine everything going still!.. Another nice bit I remember is the description that "she could feel every word, every emotion, he was pouring out in his speech which might be incoherant to others but not her" ties in nicely with the show too~ LOVED the ending, I'm glad you ended it on a happy note! Keep up the great work!!🤗 🤗 🤗

PS: Btw, you HAVE to stop doing this to me, do you know you nearly gave me a mini-attack when I reached the end of Part 1 [I didn't even know it was in parts] ?!! because I don't scroll down beforehand, I had no idea of the length, I was like NOOO!! so, yeah.. bare that in mind next time for me?! 😳😛
PPS: I guess, you just have to get used to my long rants. 😉😆

Annie! Annie! Annie! <3 <3 <3

THANK YOU SO MUCH! :)

The first bold part is one of the best compliments ever! Thank you sooo much!

I am so glad you still find my writing new and unpredictable even after all the OS' etc I supply you with! Lol!

And I am so glad you noticed the second bold part! :D I know I am not supposed to have fav moments in my own writing but what to do! I wrote that with much feeling and I am glad it got through! :)

And the PS, dude...I have to do it! ;) :D

I love the reactions! You should be happy that I gave PART 2 at that moment only and didnt post it later! Lol! ;) :D

Thank You so much again! :) <3

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: AngelTeen

Annie! Annie! Annie! <3 <3 <3

THANK YOU SO MUCH! :)

The first bold part is one of the best compliments ever! Thank you sooo much!

I am so glad you still find my writing new and unpredictable even after all the OS' etc I supply you with! Lol!

And I am so glad you noticed the second bold part! :D I know I am not supposed to have fav moments in my own writing but what to do! I wrote that with much feeling and I am glad it got through! :)

And the PS, dude...I have to do it! ;) :D

I love the reactions! You should be happy that I gave PART 2 at that moment only and didnt post it later! Lol! ;) :D

Thank You so much again! :) <3

You're welcome, Rae! but honestly, it's my pleasure! 🤗

What can I say?.. I am a good reader I notice good things LOL & I understand what you mean by having fav moments, you should totally have those moments,there are more than one in your writing!!

Since I got a Part2 instantly, I'm not that mad! 😛😆

PS: when am I getting my next dose?.. btw do you still watch MLTAK?.. I gave up so, just PM me Arhi FFs for now. 😃

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riti4u

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Finally read it..👏 and it ws really awesome..I literally cried hearing arnav' sorry.. but thank God you saw him in sherwani and gave a happy ending... I loved it...

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: r0311
BEAUTIFUL👏
I must say, I don't think there was ever a time when i didn't absolutely LOVE your writing! I thought this scene was so perfect, and khushi and arnav were still in character as well! And the way Arnav was crying and apologizing! Omg that was too adorable😳. Anyways, keep up the AMAZING workk, you're one talented girl!😊

Awww! Thank You so much!

You are too kind with your words of appreciation but trust me when I say I am deeply humbled.

Originally posted by: zafi
Fabulous👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️Loved it. Glad Arnav apologized the way he did.
It was beautifully written. I loved happy endings.
Everyone deserves a happy ending, evn Khadoos Laad Governor.
Thanks.😃

Thank You! :)

I am glad you enjoyed it and you are right...happy endings are the way to go! :)

Originally posted by: mollycoddle
awesome OS

Thank You! :)

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: Lyraa99
u know one reason i felt moe connected to this os?? Because its believable..
yes agreed that Arnav has treated her brutally and we all write our fictions with Arnav grovelling.. we do want to see Arnav repent.. but the truth is if this scenario takes place, if khushi's character is anything they have made us believe... Khushi will forgive Arnav just the way u have written... now whether Arnav will forgive himself is a different question altogether...
awesome update hun...

Thank You, Lyraa! :)

I am actually humbled that you feel this way and believe that if what I have written were to happen then the real Khushi of the show would forgive him like she does here.

Thank You so much!

Originally posted by: areeba_blossom
Beautiful.

thats what i have to say. You depicted the feelings beautifully and kept them in character. Really brilliantly written

Thank You! :)

Glad you feel so and that you enjoyed my work!