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That was so awesome bu where is part 2 i dont see it?😭 can you please Pm part two that was amazing

OMG Rae awesome OS x

Originally posted by: LondonChick

That was so awesome bu where is part 2 i dont see it?😭 can you please Pm part two that was amazing

RES
*comment tomorrow...Coz im yet to read part 2...Bt you know what id say.*
So a precap of my comment
Jahaanpanah tussi great ho.Tuffa kabul ho 🤗
*EDITED*
Ok...pehle to a small suggestion...Try adding the song kitni baatein from Lakshya
with the OS...it suits it amazing...Im saying kyunki I was listening to it. and reading.And beta srsky thodu effect deta hai that one song
Ok so coming to the OS now...
Yaar you make me rack my brains for the best word possible to descrbe your OS...vaise to dhaasu words yaad aate hain lekin while commenting..everything fussh dimaag se gayab.You made me so obsorbed with your OS...
Hayee...Its seriously amazinf from the very beginning till the end...
The moment I saw that it had 2 parts...i rem Hamesha...That one is like your epic.ill always love that more than anything..but this was close to those lines
You had me crying by the end of the part where you describe Arnav saying sorry.i felt like just going there and making them hug each other...But then Khushi did that job amazingly...And the way Arnav consoles himself sayng that shemust leave to be able to get better...that one line put me to the verge of crying out loudly...
The way Khushi handles the whole situation with so much of maturity and sooo much of tneder love it was amazing...Arnav's broken hearted response the way he hugs her and just blurts out everything like a tired and scared baby does it was amazingly scripted...I loved the words you used there...the whole stammering part...whoosh great seriously great
And the very ending...the promise they make to each other of now breaking their trusts and to love for eternity...(well Im guessing they do make this promise even without themseleves knowing) ad ofcourse to give each other the second chance to speak always...Just gave me the perfect ending...
You remember I love this types of ending naa...Not sooo happy not sooo sad...This was another one like that...Love you soo much rae🤗

Res

It was a very moving OS. I can actually see it happening too :) Very nicely done with the Sindoor ka Dabba and also bringing in the two other occasions that there was Sorry said between the two of them.

Ego holding back Arnav until the last moment. And then his confession. Disjointed Sentences, His emotions. His breakdown. I felt as if I was reading all the thoughts that was going on in his mind after he ran away in his car and broke down in the middle of the road. Add regret to that and this is what you would get! :)

Khushi would eventually forgive him. Even Sanaya said that. She would understand him. Loved the story as a whole! :)

hey dear it was really nice os