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Posted: 13 years ago

Thank You! :)


Originally posted by: .Saraa.

its beautifull..loved it so much


Thank You! :)

Glad you enjoyed it.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Sjm15

I have to say this! I read this again and again! I love it! So simple yet so many emotions in this interactions! Beautiful OS!


Thank You so much! :)

I am humbled you like it so much.
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Posted: 13 years ago
I am so happy I read this today, after aaj ka episode :)

Its beautiful, each line. Perfect, apt. What I loved about Arnav's breakdown was there was nothing remotely physical about it, something I am expecting out of the show. The was he says sorry, repeating it, reminded me of the time when he asked Khushi to apologize ( the ring incident ) and also Khushi's inner turmoil on seeing the formidable Laad governor breakdown in front of her.

Really, really liked it 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mistyrains

I am so happy I read this today, after aaj ka episode :)


Its beautiful, each line. Perfect, apt. What I loved about Arnav's breakdown was there was nothing remotely physical about it, something I am expecting out of the show. The was he says sorry, repeating it, reminded me of the time when he asked Khushi to apologize ( the ring incident ) and also Khushi's inner turmoil on seeing the formidable Laad governor breakdown in front of her.

Really, really liked it 😊


I thought about making it physical but then decided this is way more what his reaction would be in a situation where his earlier tactics havent worked...besides, I was feeling particularly pissed at Arnav and wanted him to say sorry! Lol!

Thank You! :)

Glad you liked it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
I - just, my heart - just! oh.god- Just go away Rae! you should be locked up for writing this good! there is a wanted sign for you, I think you should just give your self up my keyboard needs you! flippin heck woman! whats wrong with you? WHO told you to write this good?

I loved it from the beggining to the end! what a perfect way to show Arnav, just Arnav and she went back to him awww!

I have no words anymore, so you know what go away! you write too good for me to read 😃😳

-Aashifa
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Posted: 13 years ago
aww he held his ears and den apologized! and he also did sit up! that was the cutest thing ever. 😳i really really hope that's how he apologizes in the show when the time comes, no facade, fakeness, just true real emotions and a desire to keep his khushi with him for forever. the dynamics of arnav-khushi relationship are so pure, even though they've spent most of the time trying to piss each other off, they're there when one needs d other. just like how khushi was about to leave but stayed because arnav needed some1 to talk to. loved it how u described this element of their relationship 😊

aaah that was sooo heart-wrenching but utterly gorgeous at the same time😭 i loved how u distinguished KKG from KKGSR, and how the latter was defeated and just tired and didn't have it in her any more to fight for wat she believed or wat arnav made her go through! :'(

the part where khushi talks about being a chess piece in his cruel games was my favourite line. its amazing that even when arnav loved her and wants to make her feel better, he does the opposite by making her feel like trash or a pawn in some stupid game.




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Posted: 13 years ago
I'm feeling rather giddy now...WHAT a roller-coaster ride *gasps* Let me get my bearings before I continue...

OK, when I started reading this, I didn't realise there was a second part to it. So I felt my heart breaking with each sentence I read...now THIS is redemption. This is the type of remorse I have wanted to see in Arnav...seriously, I don't normally go for angst, but I think, from all your work that I've read so far, this has got to be my favourite!! Each and every one of Arnav's emotions...the way his ego was constantly getting in the way of following his heart, doing what was right...that was so ASR, you may as well have turned into him while you were writing this...and Khushi, poor broken Khushi...my heart went out to her, I could practically have given her a hug...and then when he started apologising- with each sorry my heart grew heavier and with every emotion that crossed between them, I literally started chanting in my head, 'Don't go, don't go, Khushi pleeease, don't'. That's just how beautiful this piece was...it came alive. It was real and I was living it. Sigh.

And then from the pits of despair I was sent flying into straight into heaven! It was genius...touche...brilliance! I never imagined she'd not actually go through the door- and the fact that Arnav realised she hadn't left without having to see her is so them- the way they feel each others' presence. By the end of part 2 I had this big grin plastered on my face, tears in my eyes, and the strange urge to slow dance :P This was truly the one of the most poignant emotional ride I've ever been on...and I don't now what else to do except bow. I kneel before your talent- there's so much more I wish I could say, but I don't think I can come up with the words. I LOVED THIS!!!!! (you know these characters better than the CVs do, no joke)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -doe-eyes-

I'm feeling rather giddy now...WHAT a roller-coaster ride *gasps* Let me get my bearings before I continue...


OK, when I started reading this, I didn't realise there was a second part to it. So I felt my heart breaking with each sentence I read...now THIS is redemption. This is the type of remorse I have wanted to see in Arnav...seriously, I don't normally go for angst, but I think, from all your work that I've read so far, this has got to be my favourite!! Each and every one of Arnav's emotions...the way his ego was constantly getting in the way of following his heart, doing what was right...that was so ASR, you may as well have turned into him while you were writing this...and Khushi, poor broken Khushi...my heart went out to her, I could practically have given her a hug...and then when he started apologising- with each sorry my heart grew heavier and with every emotion that crossed between them, I literally started chanting in my head, 'Don't go, don't go, Khushi pleeease, don't'. That's just how beautiful this piece was...it came alive. It was real and I was living it. Sigh.

And then from the pits of despair I was sent flying into straight into heaven! It was genius...touche...brilliance! I never imagined she'd not actually go through the door- and the fact that Arnav realised she hadn't left without having to see her is so them- the way they feel each others' presence. By the end of part 2 I had this big grin plastered on my face, tears in my eyes, and the strange urge to slow dance :P This was truly the one of the most poignant emotional ride I've ever been on...and I don't now what else to do except bow. I kneel before your talent


Awww! I am truly humbled and feeling awesome cos you went through all the emotions I aimed for the readers of this one while writing it! :)

And you know what I just realized...the CVs are going with a cocky Arnav too right now...the ASR alter ego taking precedence...maybe they will show a repenting Arnav soon too and obviously do a much better job than me but still...feels nice to know that I seem to have had subconsciously predicted this kind of track! 😆

Or maybe I have gone crazy...high possibility of that! 😉

Anyway, Thank You so much for this beautiful comment! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesum writing 👏 Reading part1 u left me in tears of sad 😭 but after reading part2 too i was shedding buckets of tears . . Unexplainable happiness n joy i felt through. . And While arnav was crying i wished to came running into ur os and comfort him in my embrace .. Making my baby to calm down . . Happy that khushi did it. . .superb os. . 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
I think this is amazingly written!
He had told her that he would never consider her as his wife and now the only thing he wants is for her not to leave. And there the apology is an ego clash...ha..how very ASR... Too bad he broke khushi so much that in your words she isn't Khushi kumari Gupta anymore...This new
khushi is too defeated for anymore games... This is exactly what should have been in the show... Instead they turned arnav's redemption into a humiliating ground for Khushi...

I really appreciate ur writing and would love to read the rest...
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