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vanesha230

@vanesha230

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#101

love it as usual!!!! u're a fantastic writer!!! hope i'll get 2 read other story from u soon!!! :)

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Varsha

@LucyLindaDew

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#102

Awesome part...Can't wait for the next part!!

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purplekid

@purplekid

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#103

I was really intrigued by your prologue! Please post the next part soon!

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Malvika18

@Malvika18

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#104

OMG! OMG!. Wow, finally Arnav is alive. Amazing update.😉

Loved it to bits.. The whole scene between Khushi and Arnav- Fantastic!.

Seriously, hats off for this one! :)

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meenaluma

@meenaluma

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#105

awesome update loved it

finally they are together

pls continue soon

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Divya

@hakunamatata

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#106

O M G...THAT WAS SIMPLY FANTABULOUS...

I JUST LOVED THE HOSPITAL SCENE...

THE LOVE IN KHUSHIS EYES...

THE REMORSE IN ARNAVS EYES...

KHUSHI TAKING TOTAL CHARGE OF GETTING LAAD GOVERNOR BAC..

WOW...I AM BOWLED OVER BY THEIR LOVE IN THIS UPDATE...

ALSO FOUND IMAD AND THE BABYS PART CUTE...HE IS JUST THE DAD THE BABY NEEDS :d :d :d :d

CHEERS..

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Swati Hansraj

@swati-89

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#107

Wonderfully written Mary. First i loved the place where u gave a description of the baby and how the hunk was bonding to her. Second u made me smile when u wrote that part where Arnav gains consciousness and thinks he is in heaven. But i loved the part where Arnav grumbles "do i have to say it!" It was so ASRish. Loved it.

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@abracadabra

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#108

Heaven brand Khushi 😃 For a minute is was so scared that Arnav would be really serious.,, I liked the way you made him also go through those fleeting emotions even if the realization of doing something so cowardly came back after seeing those (her) stars. Arnav can never be weak.

Beautiful reunion of the soulmates Mary. I loved it.. Though we might have to wait for all eternity to hear Arnav say those three beautiful words to Khushi, it was really very emotional hearing it in your os.

Truly a beautiful creation!⭐️

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thecraze92

@thecraze92

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#109

aww finally they let go *sigh of relief* I hate i get into the stories, well you gotta love that!

anyways, loved it!

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shona-li

@shona-li

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#110

You definitely got the dark, angsty feel pat down. Still so arrogant huh Arnav? :D Some things will never change. Loving Empowered!Khushi and Humbled!Arnav...well, somewhat humbled :P