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Marybarton

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Posted: 13 years ago

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smileyhug7679

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Posted: 13 years ago

Wow whe I saw ur title I was like yeeehhh we r getting part 9

Thanks

Looks scary though pls don't make him die...

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Marybarton

@Marybarton

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: smileyhug7679
Wow whe I saw ur title I was like yeeehhh we r getting part 9
Thanks
Looks scary though pls don't make him die...

It will be up tonight and you will find out soon. Stay tuned 😉

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Inaya Haya

@lilmzsunshine

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Posted: 13 years ago

hmmm ... some more pain .. possible remorse ...

self reflection ... realization of the other party's pain ...

a death to let the love finally come alive.

they both realize they love each other, but are destructive for each other ... so they agree to part, and love from afar ... the eternal love ...

I could go on ... but will wait for the post

-S

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

Loving the "Dark" feel of the next chapter! I guess you have to walk through darkness to appreciate the light when you finally come to it!

I am looking forward to the next chapter!

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Marybarton

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Posted: 13 years ago

It is up, hope you all are happy. It was planned all along.I just wanted to be 😈

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vidya.sanjay

@vidya.sanjay

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Posted: 13 years ago

YAY!!!!
ARSHI r together again.
Thanks for the super happy update.
Hope that Anjali will be soon with her soul mate.

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goguma

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Posted: 13 years ago

for a while i thought... this is it!
THE End...
i have my "and they live happily ever after.."!

nothing is as simple as that, i guess...
many questions are still left unanswered...
but at least they have love on their side..
and with love..they can overcome anything...i hope...

great update btw!

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Marybarton

@Marybarton

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: goguma
for a while i thought... this is it!
THE End...
i have my "and they live happily ever after.."!

nothing is as simple as that, i guess...
many questions are still left unanswered...
but at least they have love on their side..
and with love..they can overcome anything...i hope...

great update btw!

Tell me your questions so that I can answer them 😃

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Inaya Haya

@lilmzsunshine

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

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awww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Firstly, thanks so much for the dedication!!! Your writing calls for raving comments :)

About Part 9 -

His 'I'm sorry' so had me mooning over it!!! I could visualize the whole scene!!!! Silence, and letting it all sink. In her mind, in her heart ... hai...

Beautiful ending. I liked the climax, but I'm glad you didn't drag it. The humor was well placed, and the symbolism between gold-heaven-his rings on Khushi - very well thought out!!!!

Is this series over? If so, I'm looking forward to the next one ;).

I'd write more, but it's 2 in the morning here and kids have an early day tomorrow at school, so gtg. Will come back and read again, and comment again.

Love,

-S

Edited by lilmzsunshine - 13 years ago