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monisham

@monisham

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#121

You never fail to surprise me 😊 !!!The update was good as always. I loved the way you have actually portrayed Khushi in the story (Truly an avenging angel). I don't think the real Khushi would have confessed her love for Arnav this boldly 😊 but its different and i like that she is actually gutsy in the story!!!! Keep up the good work and you just made my day today because i did my exam well and with such a good update what more could a person want 😳!!!*sighs contently 😉*

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@debby_11

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#122

yay...they confessed

so damn happy...

it was truly very beautifully written...loved every bit..

fantastic part :)

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Paro Khan AKA Choti Ki Di

@P4RO

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#123

When you say part 10, do you mean to end this OS with a beautiful touch???😲

But then again you have Imad and Anjali's story yet to complete...😛

As usual beautifully written👏
No criticism, apart from Khushi swearing...'what da' suits the sanka devi better.😉

Predictions...

*ArHi loved up, naukh joke etc...I think they've been through enough bad times😍
*I would like to see Imad and Anjalis story unfold, with the help of the other 2 couples, ArHi & PayAsh and the rest of the family
*Please no deaths...
*Maybe good news from PayAsh😉

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207shikha

@207shikha

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#124

finally everything got fine b/w them..!! but i dnt have evn the faintest idea that was

will be the next in chapter 10..?? but anyways i would love to see anjali and imad

together as its high tym for anjali to get sumone who really loves her...she deserves that😊

and as usual i loved it wen khushi said that "i cant wait for u to get well soon so that i cn hit ur head with a cricket bad..." it was really hilarious..!! do write chapter 10

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esha

@esha108

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#125

hey... i loved it soo much!! keep on going like this! n thnx soo much for the pm

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Zania

@zaniax

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#126

aww..tht was wonderful..the confession scene was soo cute 😳

Really loved it!!!!! Thanx alot for d pm . :)

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sreemeera

@sreemeera

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#127

eagerly waiting for next part. I like your version of the story very much. Let Anjali also get a good life.

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namedx

@namedx

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#128

Beautifully written! Love their warm embrace and LOVED when he described her as heaven's 'other brand' lol. Classic.

This one was so emotionally uplifting! I look forward to your next update! x

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Arnavarmaan

@Arnavarmaan

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#129

Wow i read all the parts your fic is just brilliant
Keep up the brilliant work
Continue soon!

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Ishi

@Desai09

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#130

I was biting my nails whole time while reading and waiting what would happen to Arnav now... Was silently praying that nothing should happen to him..And finally could take deep breath when he comes back in his senses...

Loved that they are back together.. That part of this update was very emotional... You have wrote it brilliantly..

And please don't end this series soon.. We also have Imad and Ajali's story as well and Happy times are just here... So please do continue the story and don't make the next part last one. It's a request... 😳

Thank you for the PM..