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ruby-red

@ruby-red

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#191

hey this is brilliant, i have just read all the chapters and its an awesome story, please continue soon and pm me, thanx

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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#192

Hi Mary

I just read parts 7, 8, & 9. All together. I loved them! I didn't see Imad and Anajli happening, it was a pleasant twist. Arnav's accident had me anxious, but I m glad how it ended here! 😃

I m hoping for some awkward reacquaintance between khushi and Arnav. Where they learn to be gentle with each other and let go of their past pains! Some healing all around!

Thanks for the PMs! Waiting for more! Will read part 10 now, but I had to say before I went to the next one! Thank you!

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PhoenixRadar

@PhoenixRadar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#193

Mi Amore Mary!!😛
Sorry for my latest comments!! Horrible of me, I know!!🤢
Thanks for the PM, pal!!!😃
Oh kay, about the part...
God!! Imad was damn cute and comfortable with Anisha, eh!!! Nice of you to bring them together like this!!

Gosh!!😲 The way you described Khushi's terrible state really was amazing and touched my heart. Her trembling and whimpering form really gives me chills at times. Like a lover, waiting to hear about her beloved!! And now, they are betrothed!!! ❤️ Awesome, my gal!!👏

Aww...That bed scene was too cute, dearie!!! Aha!! At last he said it, that Dumbo!!!😆
When you lose something, only then, do you value it's worth, but the thing is you shouldn't be attached to anything, because only then, on losing it brings grief and sadness and fear!
God, sorry for my philosophical stuff!!😳 I at times get carried away!! :P

Annie 😃

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Nina

@SavyDobrev

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#194

This is so deep ! I love the detailed description on Khushi's state <3 Why can't the show be so meaningful as well? ugh but great job mary

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PlovesArshi

@PlovesArshi

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#195

I really really enjoyed your story! You managed to capture the essence of Arshi's love and I read the whole story in one go...WEll done you! Brilliant writing!

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#196

Just read the ninth part. Very sweet!

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tokyo

@tokyo

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#197

Awesome. You have a great sense of humor. I just couldn't control my laugh when Khushi said " I am waiting for you to get well so that I can beat your head with the cricket bat." This one sentence proves how much she love Arnav. It was high time Arnav expressed his love to Khusi.

And there is Imad - he fighting his own battles and taking care of the baby.

And Nawab talking to his love to help him.