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Posted: 19 years ago

#41

Thanx Kaamna..!! 😳 😳 😳
Thanx Suri..!!Haan sahi socha tumne Suri Manisha ne wahi kya..hhehehe..lekin dont worry mein kuch na kuch kerti hooon..!!! 😉 😉 😉
Thanx Sara..!! haan kaisay nahin aati aqal ..meine jo kaha tha..!! hehehe 😆
Thanx Jyothi..!! 😳
Thanx Farah ..!! cheeti kaisay nahin hoti ...dost jo ho gai ho tum meri hehe 😆 😆 😆 tumhara asar to paray ga na..!! 😆 😆 haan yaar mein Mihir se inspired ho gai thi bas isi liyeh yeh ker diya hehehe 😆
Thanx Mehreen ..!! haan naam mujhay bhi acha lagay 😆 haan achi writer to mein hooon hehehe 😆 😆 😆
Thanx Kulbin..!!haan bach gaya Karan ...heheheh 😆
Thanx a lot everyone..!!!
Mein abhi likhti hoon aagay ki story..!!!
Luv
Iman

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Javeria

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Posted: 19 years ago

#42

Kher phir raat hoti hai ..!!

Sab khana kha chukay hotay hain ..!!

Sab apnay apnay room mein chalay jaatay hain ..!!

Dekhtay hain Karan Tia k room mein kya ho raha hai ..!!

Tia : Karan kal tumne sharab pi hui thi ???

Karan : tumharay comay mein jaanay k baad is sharab ne hi mera saath diya tha ..!!

Tia : I m sorry Karan meri wajah se tumhein ..!!

Karan Tia k moon per haanth rakhta hai ..!!

Karan : Bas ab bhool jao un baaton ko ..!!

Karan apni takiya(pillow) utha ta hai aur sofay per chala jaaata hai ..!!

Tia dil mein sochti hai..!! : tumhein jitna waqt lena hai tum le sakhtay ho Karan ..kyunki

mujhay ab poora yaqeen hai k tum sirf meray ho ..!!

Karan bhi Tia ko dekhta hai or sochta hai : Tia hum ek hi tab hi hongay jab tum khud chaho gi..!!

Tia apni aankhein band ker leti hai ..!! lekin us ko neend hi nahin aati ..!!

Tia apni aankhein kholti hai to dekhti hai k Karan usse dekh raha hai ..!!

Karan Tia ko dekhtay hi forun apni aankhein band ker leta hai ..!!

Tia yeh dekh ker muskuraati hai ..!! aur pehli baar woh chain ki neend soti hai ..!!

Kher phir subah hoti hai..!!

Party ki tayari chal rahi hoti hai ..!!

Tia k saaray cuzins bhi aaye huay hotay hain ..!!

wahi sab tayariyaan ker rahe hotay hain

Jai : Easha yeh phool idher nahin udher lagao..!!

Easha : mujhse keh rahe ho khud nahin laga rahe..!!

Jai : choro tum mujhay hi lagana paray ga..!!

Doosri taraf

Abhay : Khushi yeh phool tumharay liyeh ..!!

Khushi : Abhay abhi humein itnee tayariaan kerni hai aur tum yeh sab..!! huh..!

Kher phir Tia aur Karan k room mein jaatay hain

Tia : Kya Karan ..aaj bhi office jaa rahe hain..!

Karan : I m sorry Tia ...lekin mein waada kerta hooon jaldi aa jaon ga..!!bauhat zaroori

meeting hai

Tia : Theek hai ..lekin plzz jaldi aaye ga..!

Karan : haan haan jaldi hi aaon ga..!!

Karan yeh keh ker chala jaata hai ..!!

Raat ho jaati hai saari tayariaan ho chuki hoti hain

Sab tayar bhi ho chukay hotay hain..!!

Tia was wearing a red Saari with a diamond necklace and was looking very beautiful..!!

Lekin Tia Karan ka intezaar ker rahi hoti hai

Aur Karan to nahi aay hota lekin Juhi aur Manisha aa jaatay hain

Juhi to Tia k saath achay se pesh aati hai ..lekin Manisha bauhat hi

badtamezi se baat kerti hai ..!!

Kher phir saaray mehmaan aa chukay hotay hain ..!!

Lekin Karan nahin aaya hota abhi taq..!

Tia bauhat intezaar kerti hai ...

Tia bauhat intezaar kernay k baad party mein chali jaati hai

Party mein sab enjoy ker rahe hotay hain lekin Tia udaas hoti hai..!!

Tia phir juice lenay jaati hai ..lekin Tia k glass uthanay se pehlay Manisha

woh glass utha leti hai

Tia : Excuse me yeh mera juice hai ..!!

Manisha : tum juice ki baat ker rahi ho ..mein to tumhara pati share ker chuki hoon...!!

(Dhamakay hotay hain...lolz)

Tia Manisha ko thapar maarti hai : TAPAAK

Manisha : ab kuch nahin ho sakhta ..!! Karan ab mera ho chuka hai ..!!

Tia : kya baqwaas ker rahi ho tum???

Manisha : haan ..!! kya tumne Karan se poocha k tumharay comay se bahir aanay

se pehlay woh kahan tha ...? Nahin poocha na ..mein batati hoon ..woh mere room mein ...

mere bed per..!!

Tia ek aur thapar maarti hai ..:TAPAAK ..!!

Tia : bas ..!! chali jao yahan se ...

Manisha wahan se chali jaati hai ..!!

Kher phir poori party khatam ho jaati hai lekin Karan nahi aata ..!!

Sab apnay apnay room mein chalay jaatay hain ..!!

Tia bhi apnay room mein bethi hoti hia aur soch rahi hoti hai so Aj Manisha ne usse

jo kaha ..!!

Karan room mein enter kerta hai ..!!

Karan : Oh I m really sorry Tia ...aaj woh meeting ..!!

Tia bauhat ro rahi hoti hai ..!!

Karan : Sorry Tia woh mein ..meeting mein

Tia : kal tum mere sahi honay se pehlay kahan the?

Karan : yeh kaisa sawal hai ..

Tia : meine poocha tum kahan the kal???(shouts)

Karan : woh mein ..!!

Tia : mein bata ti hoon ..!! tum kal Manisha k ghar mein ..us k bistar per

Karan : Tia..!!

Tia ko bhi thapar perhta hai ..!!

Karan : tum aisa soch bhi kaisay sakhti ho??

Tia : haan mein soch bhi nahin sakhti aur woh tum ker sakhtay..!!

Karan : meine kuch nahin kya Tia..!! tum samajhti kyun nahin

Tia : mein kuch nahin samajhti aur na hi samajhna chahiti hooon..!!

Karan : Tia mein..!!

Tia : Karan just leave..!!

Karan : lekin Tia ..

Tia : Leave ( shouts)

(lo ussi k room se usse nikaal rahi hai ..!! )

Karan wahan se chala jaata hai ..!!

Nandini Raichand : Kya hua Karan ????

Karan : kuch nahin mama ..bas aisay hi ...

Nandini : tu aaj Party mein kyun nahin aaya?

Karan : mama woh bauhat important meeting thi..!!

Nandini : Oh acha ..!!

Karan in his mind : mama ko batana sahi nahin hoga jo abhi hua ...mujhay wapis apnay

room mein jaaana hoga..!!

Karan wapis jaata hai ..!! tab tak Tia so chuki hoti hai..!!

Woh Tia k brabar mein jaa ker bethta hai ..aur usse dekhta rehta hai

Aur phir ek aansoo us ki aankh se tapak ta hai ..!!

Karan (in a low voice) : Tia ..!! meine kuch nahin kya..mein kuch nahin kya..!!

Phir woh uth ta hai aur apnay sofay per jaa ker leth jaata hai

Yahi sochtay sochtay Tia so jaati hai ..!!

Kher phir Subha hoti hai ..!!

Karan Tia ko dekhta hai (innocently) ..lekin Tia Karan ko bauhat gussay se sekhti hai..!!

Tia apnay saare kapray suitcase mein daal rahi hoti hai

Karan : kahan jaa rahi ho Tia???

Tia : mein ab tumharay saath nahin reh sakhti ..!!

Karan : lekin Tia

Tia : bas meine keh diya na ..!! mein jaa rahi hoon..!!

Aur yeh keh ker Tia chali jaati hai

Sab ghar walay samajhtay hain k Tia kuch dinon k liyeh apnay ghar gayi hai

Karan Tia ko bauhat phone kerta hai lekin Tia phone nahin uthati..!!

Do din guzaq jaatay hain..!!

Karan Tia ek doosray se baat bhi nahin kertay.!!

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Aagay kya ho ga??Kya Karan aur Tia ki ghalat fehmiyaan door hongi ...

yaa phir yunhi zindagi guzray gi..!!! jaan nau k liyeh perhtay rahein ..!!

And dont forget to comment..!!

Luv

Iman..!!

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group_1223

@group_1223

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Posted: 19 years ago

#43

hey iman....yay i m da 1st one 2 comment..........nice part...even tho dey faught..i sitll liked it....ughhh..i feeel like killin manisha....she z such a m*r*n......newayz...plz try n update soon...

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 19 years ago

#44

iman dear just too damn good...... 👏 karan & tia are happy together that's nice.... 😊 😛 😃 ab in sab mein yeh manisha kyun aayi aur manisha ko thappad pada woh bhi do do thappad cool........... 😉 😉 lekin tia ko karan ne thappad kyun maara and tia karan ko chod ke chali gayi usne karan ko mouka bhi nahi diya ki woh kuch keh sake..... 😭 iman ab jaldi se inki ghalatfaimiyon ko durr karo aur tia aur karan ko ek karo........ 😉
plz continue soon... 😊 😛 😃

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KulBin

@KulBin

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Posted: 19 years ago

#45

Hey iman yeh kya kal pyaar ka izhaar hua 😉 aur aaj jaghda bhi ho gaya.... 😕 jaghda hua toh hua par tia ne toh hadh kardi.... 😡
nywys update soon.... 😊

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jyothi

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Posted: 19 years ago

#46

hey nice part but tia aur karan ko alag mat karna plz

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 19 years ago

#47

iman continue karo main intezaar kar rahi hoon... 😃

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Areej

@Shezaadi

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Posted: 19 years ago

#48

Hey nice part Iman! 👏
Lekin ye Tia ko apne ghar kyon bhej diya, ab woh milain ge kaise
I'm sure u have sumthing figured out, lekin pleeze zaada din tak unko alag mat rakhna 😳
Great part!! 👏 👏 👏
Continue soon 😳

-Areej

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yasmin

@simply_thebest

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Posted: 19 years ago

#49

nice part
lekin Tia aur Karan ko itni jaldi judah nhi hona chayeh tha bechara Karan 😭 😭 😭 jissne kuch kiya hi nahi usski saza bhougathni par rahi hai

abh uss Manishah ko to saza milin hi chahye 😡 😡 I hate her

lekin pyaar to trust par htoa hai aur Tia ko Karan par trust hona chahyeh tha!!
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Javeria

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Posted: 19 years ago

#50

Thanx Ayesha..!!but plzz Manisha ko mat maarna warna tumhein jail jaana peray ga..!! hehehe lolz
Thanx Suri..aray maarpeet se hi to pyaar barhta hai ..lekin Manisha ko maarnay se nafrat barhti hai hehehe lolz
Thanx Kulbin ..!! haan yaar Tia ne hadh ker di lekin aagay bhi perho kya ho ta hai ..hehehe
Thanx Jyothi..!! aap ka hukum sar aankhon par ..lolz
Thanx Areej...nahin zyada der alag nahin rakh rahi in donon ko..!!!
Thanx yasmin...fiker mat kero aagay aagay dekho kya ho ta hai

thanx for all ur comments ..

Edited by beauty_queen - 19 years ago