Do Pal *Rajeev And Amna*

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RAICHAND's

Mr Raichand had recently dead....

Nandini Raichand : She is a working ...woman ..

Karan Raichand (played by Rajeev Khandelwal...): He is a very very very successful business man

business man ...and the only son of his parents ...

OBEROI's

Mr Suresh Oberoi : A very honest cheerful busines man

Payal Oberoi : A house very fashionable wife...

Tia Oberoi(played by Amna Sharif) : A sweet innocent , beautiful girl and the only daughter

of her parents

Mr Oberoi have three brothers : Arjun oberoi, Ravi oberoi and Abhijeet Oberoi

Arjun Oberoi have three sons Raj Oberoi, Jai Oberoi and Abhay Oberoi and one daughter, Sneha Oberoi

Ravi Oberoi have two sons Rahul and Varun and two daughters, Mehak and Diya

Abhijeet Oberoi have three daughters Khushi, Priya and Easha and one son , Dhruv...

Yeh sab ek ghar mein rehtay hotay hain ...aur Tia bhi in k saath hi hoti hai ...

Unfortunately inhein kisi bahir wale ki zaroorat hi nahin hoti kyunki yeh sab pyaar bhi ek

doosray se hi kertay hotay hain ...Now i m goin to tell about the couples in this story

Raj loves Mehak

Jai loves Easha

Abhay loves Khushi

Rahul loves Sneha

Varun loves Priya

Dhruv loves Diya

Ab Tia bachi ..kyunki Tia bani hai Karan k liyeh ....

Mr Raichand aur Mr Oberoi bauhat achay dost thay lekin Mr raichand ki death k baad un ka beta

Karan ne un ki choti si company ko duniya ki top ten company mein se ek bana dia ....lekin

khud woh bilkul serious aur quite mizaaj ka ho gaya ...

Mr Raichand ne jab Karan America mein perh raha tha to ..apni death se pehlay us ka rishta Tia

se pakka ker diya tha .......

Ab in ki shaadi ho rahi hai ....per Karan ko koi fiker hi nahin hai us ki shaadi ki ....

Karan ne to Tia ko dekha bhi nahin hai aur na hi kabhi us ne uss se baat ki hai ..aur na hi kerna

chahta hai

yeh shaadi wohh sirf apnay dad ki khuwahish k khatir ker raha tha ....

Mehendi ka function chal raha hota hai

....Raj : Mehak tum tayar nahin hui ??

Mehak : aur kitnee taayar hon

Raj : acha ..!! tum tayar ho ..waisay tum tayar ho na ho ..bhangan hi lago gi ..

Mehak : Whatever ..!!kuch log to taareef kerna hi nahin jaantay

Jai : Easha .!! aaj tum bauhat bauhat bauhat khubsoorat lag rahi ho ...

Easha sharma k jaa rahi hoti hai k Abhay us ka haanth pakar leta hai

Aur gaaana Chalta hai

"Chand chupa baadal mein ...sharma k merii jaaana ...

seeenay se lag jaa too bal khaa k meri jaaan ...blah blah"

Abhay : Ahem Ahem ..!! ...mein ander aa sakhta hoon????

Easha sharma jaati hai aur wahan se chali jaati hai

Jai : yaar Abhay tum bhi hamesha ghalat time per aatay ho...

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Abhi bas itna hi ...baaqi baad mein hope k aap sab ko pasand aaye gi...

plzz do comment

Iman...!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
#2
nice continue soon 😊 😊 but it was gud if name was sujal or raj anyway continue
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 ..cool jee..hehe itne sare bhai log....aur itne sare bache..hahaha....nice one..dono stories fit hain...continue soon...... 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Lol...Good one !! Really like it...Itne saarey couples aur itni confusion! Khair ..apne ko toh Rajeev and Aamna se hee matlab hai...Lol....By the way nice story!!
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hey iman me again nice story but alot of characters so alot of confusion anyways continueee son and fab concept of the story better then EKTA'S lolzzzzz 😆


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Posted: 19 years ago
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Iman good start pls post the next part soon. will be waiting.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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iman dear very damn cool.....ur new story is totally AWESOME..... 👏 wah wah ab thak karan aur tia mile bhi nahi ki tum seedha unki shaddi karwa rahi ho..hmmm tho karan ko tia ke saath apni shaadi mein koi intrest nahi no problem me sure jab woh tia ko dekhega tho tia se apni nazarein nahi hata payega... 😆 ab chalo karn aur tia ke jaldi se phere laga do aur unhe saath janmo ke bandhan mein jhod do...... 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Suri aagay bauhat bara twist hai ...intezaar kero 😆 😆 😆
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Abhay : Woh..Khushi kahan hai???

Jai : Tum kyun pooch rahe ho???

Abhay : bas aisay hi ..!!

Rahul Sneha , Dhruv Diya aur Varun aur Priya stage per dance ker rahe hotay
hain ...!!

Aur yahan Tia ko Khushi tayar ker rahi hoti hai ...

Tia thori si nervous hoti hia ....

Dulhaa wale aatay hain .....

Mrs Oberoi : Karan nahin aaya ???

Nandini Raichand : Woh ek meeting mein masrrof hai ...

Mrs Oberoi confuse hoti hain k kya baat hai k dulha hi nahin aaya ....!!!

Tia ki Mehendi bauhat dhoom dhaam se ho jaati hai ....

Ab Aaj ka din Shaadi ka din hota hai ....

Shaadi wali subha ko..Tia mobile per Karan se baat kerna chahti hoti hai

Tia : Aaaa...Hi Karan ..!!

Karan : mein bahat zaroori kaam ker raha hoon ..plzz dont disturb me ..!!!

Tia rotay huay phone band ker deti hai ..

Ab raat ho jaati hai ...In ki shaadi bauhat bauhat dhoom dhaam se hoti hai....

Tia stage pe bauhat nervous bethi hui hai ..

Nandini Tia ko diamond necklace pehenati hai ...

Ab rukhsati ka wat aata hai ...

Tia bauhat roti hai ...

Sab ghar wale bhi bauhat dhuki hotay hain ..!!

RAICHAND'S HOUSE

Tia ka kamra bauhat saja hua hota hai..Jab Karan kamray mein aata hai

to apni takiya utha k bahir sofay per so jaata hai

Tia roti hai ....

Aur Subha uthti hai to...naashtay ki table per ...poori faimily bethi hui hoti hai ....

Karan ka cousin ...Rohit bauhat hi bigra hua ..larka hota hai

Tia ROhit ki chaye mein zyada shakar daal deti hai

Rohit : What da hell..!! is this ..you bloody..Idiot..chaye bana ni nahin aati to banati

kyun ho ????

Aur pyaali vase per kheech ker maarta hai ....woh vase bauhat expensive hota hai

Karan uth ker ... ROhit ko thapar maar ker kehta hai

Karan : maafi maango Tia se ...jab taq tum is vase k paisay nahin do gay ..tum ghar

mein nahin ghusso gay ..ager kamaatay to pata chalta ..is vase ki ehmiyat ..Now say
Sorry ...!!!

Tia bauhat khush hoti hai ...aur Karan se kehti hai...

Tia : Karan humein aaj ..dopahar ki dawat mein ..mere ghar jaana hai

Karan : Sorry..!! mein aaj hi 12 baje ki flight se Singapore ek business meeting attent

kernay jaa raha hoon ...hope u dont mind..!!!

Tia kamray mein jaa ker bauhat roti hai ...aur Apni shaadi ki tasweer ko utha ker

phenk deti hai ....

Karan chala jaata hai

Tia apnay ghar jaati hai

Mrs Oberoi : Karan..!! Karan kahan hai???

Tia : Woh Singapore gaye hain

Mrs Oberoi : WHat????.....mein abhi baat kerti hoon Karan se

Tia : No Mom ..!! aap ko meri kasam ..aap kuch nahin kaho gi .....

Teen din guzar jaatay hain Karan ka koi phone nahin aata ..

Tia Karan ko phone kerti hai Karan phir baat nahin kerta.......

Karan 6 mahinay baad wapis aaata hai ...

Airport lenay sab jaatay hain ...per Tia nahin jaati

Tia dil mein sochti hai : mein kyun jaaoon .???jab usse hi meri koi fiker nahin to mein

us ki fiker kyun keroon ???

aur sofay per so jaati hai

Karan airport per sab se poochta hai

Karan : Tia ..!! kahan hai ?

Mrs Oberoi : Tia nahin aayi ..!!!

yeh sab ghar pauhanchtay hain aur phir apnay apnay room mein jaa ker so jaatay hain
...
Karan jab kamray mein jaata hai ...aur jab Tia ko sotay dekhta hai

To usse Tia bauhat pyaari lagti hai ...

aur peechay gaana chalta hai ....

"Tum Dil ki dhad kan mein rehtay ho rehtay ho ..."

Karan hbi ussi sofay per so jaata hai

Subha Tia uthti hai ...Aurr neechay naashta bana nay chali jaati hai

neechay Nandini kehti hai k ..

Nandini : Tia beti..Karan ko yeh juice de aao ...

Karan upper body building ker rahe hotay hain ...

jab Tia Karan ko juice denay aati hai ...To Karan ko Tia aur bhi pyaari lagti hai ..
Tia sharma k wahan se chali jaati hai

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Thanx yaaron Story pasand kernay k liyeh .....mein jaanti hoon kaafi confusing ...lekin

koi baat nahin ..sab sahi ho jaaye ga 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Sweet beginning. Waiting for the next part loved this part though karan was too harsh on Tia. But still loved it as its dift from other stories.

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