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yasmin

@simply_thebest

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Posted: 19 years ago

#31

intezar aur nhi hota
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz jaldi se likhdoooooo

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 19 years ago

#32

iman dear plz continue karo na.. 😭

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group_1223

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Posted: 19 years ago

#33

awwwwwwn.....tia went in a coma b4 she cud confess her luv.....n plz...don't bring ne1 elze in karan's life....i think tia z enuf 😆 😆 😆 ....gr8 story iman...hatts of 2 u 4 dealin wid 4 stories at a time.... 👏

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Javeria

@JaViA

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Posted: 19 years ago

#34

Thanx for all ur Comments ..!!!

Ab Kuch din issi tarah guzar jaatay hain ..aur Tia comay se bahir nhain nikli hoti

Karan ki bauhat buri halat ho jaati hai ..!!

Karan ki Seceratory Manisha ( played by Urvashi ) Karan mein bauhat interested hoti hain

Lekin Karan usse ghaans bhi nahin daalta hota..!!

Aur Ek Karan ki dost Juhi (played by Gurdeep Kohli ) se bhi Kran ki yeh halat nahin dekhi

jaati ..!! woh bhi Karan se pyaar kernay lagti hai..!!

Ab yeh donon Larkiaan Karan k peechay hoti hain ..!!

Aur kisi bhi tarah Karan ko haasil kerna chahiti hoti hain..!!

IS baat per in donon larkiion mein larai bhi bauhat hoti hai ..!!

Phir Aik din Karan Hospital jaata hai

Karan : Tia utho Tia..!! bas bauhat ho gaya..!! ab uth jao ..!!

Lekin kuch bhi nahin hota ..!!

Karan bauhat dukhi hota hai..!! aur wahan se chala jaata hai

Aur pooray poora din bar mein betha hota hai..!! Sharab pi raha hota hai

Wahan Manisha aati hai..!!

Manisha : Karan kyun pi rahe ho itna..!!???

Karan : mein jo bhi keroon tumhein kya hai ?

Manisha : bauhat raat ho gai hai Karan ..

Karan : mere liyeh ab har jagah andhera hi hai chahe woh raat ho ya din..!!

Manisha : mein tumhein aisa nahin dekh sakhti

Karan : to chali jao yahan se ..!!

Manisha : nahin mein akeli yahan se nahin jaaon gi..!!

Karan : meine kaha na jao..!! mujhay kisi k saharay ki zaroorat nahin hai..!!

Yeh kehtay kehtay Karan khara hota hai ...lekin phir sharab peenay ki wajah

sebehosh ho jaata hai

Manisha (in her mind) : yahi mauqa hai Karan ko apna bana nay ka..!!

Manisha Karan ko apnay ghar le ker chali jaati hai ..!!

Aur usse apnay bedroom mein lita deti hai ..!!

Karan ko hosh aa jaata hai ..!!

Usse pata nahin ho ta k woh kahan hai ..!!

Karan Manisha ko dekhta hai aur forun uth ker beth jaata hai ..!!

Karan : yeh tum mujhay kahan le aayi ho ?

Manisha : woh tum ne zyada pi lee thi na isi liyeh..!!

Karan : to tum mujhay mere ghar bhi to chor sakhti thi na

Manisha : Woh..!!

K achanaq Karan ka phone bajta hai

Karan : Helloo..!!

Doctor : Hello Mr Karan ..Mubarak ho aap ki patni comay se bahir aa gayi hain..!!

Karan : kya??

Karan bauhat khush hota hai..!!

Karan Forun Hospital jaata hai

Karan Tia k paas jaata hai ..!!

Karan : kahan chali gayi thi tum mujhay chor k ..???tum jaanti nahin ho tumharay

baghair mein.!!

Tia ko yaqeen nahin aata k Karan bhi us se utna hi pyaar kerta hai jitna

Tia KAran se ..!!

Tia : mein to aap k paas hi aa rahi thi ..lekin

Karan : bas ab kuch mat kehna ..us pal ki yaad mat dilana mujhay..!!

Tia : theek hai nahin dilaaon gi..!! waisay aap ne mujhay wahan kyun bulaya tha??

Karan : woh ..mujhay apnay dil ki baat tumhein batani thi..!!

Tia : kaisi baat ?

Karan : yahi k mein ...Tumse bauhat bauhat bauhat pyaar kerta hoon..!!

Tia : mujhay bhi tumse yahi baat kehni thi..!!

Karan : wah!! aap se , se tum se per aa gayi ..!!

Tia : nahin woh mein

Karan hans ta hai ..!!

Karan : aaj k baad yeh aap mat kehna mujhay ..!!

Tia : theek hai nahin kahoon gi..!!

Karan : acha mein doctor se pooch ker aata hoon k mein tumhein kab ghar

le jaa sakhta hoon ..!!

Tia : theek hai

Karan Doctor k paas jaata hai..!!

Karan : Doctor ..! mein apni patni ko kab ghar le jaa sakhta hon?

Doctor : aap inhein aaj hi le ja sakhtay hain ..!! lekin in ka bauhat khayal rakhiyeh ga

Inhein koi bhi sadma nahin pauhanchna chahiyeh..!!

Karan : ji theek hai ..Thankyou

Karan Tia ko ghar le jaata hai

Raj aur Mehak Tia ka bauhat achay se welcome kertay hain

Aur baqi saaray log ander bethay huay hotay hain

Jaisay hi Tia Ander aati hai ..!!

sab kharay ho jaatay hain aur bauhat khush ho tay hain

Easha : How r u Tia Bhabhi??

Tia : mein bilkul theek hoon ..!!

Abhay : aray is baat per to party honi chahiyeh..!!

varun : haan theek hai ..kal party hai ..aur sab tayariyaan hum bachon ki taraf se

Diya : lekin aik din mein sab kaisay hoga..!!?

Sneha : aray hum log sab ker lengay..!!

Sab buhat khush hotay hain

Karan Tia ko apnay room mein le ker jaata hai..!!

Karan : Ab tum aaram kero..!!

Tia : tumne bauhat miss kya mujhay ??

Karan : Nahin to..!!

Tia : kyun?

Karan : kyunki mujhay pata tha k tum zaaror wapis aao gi..!!

Tia : itna bharosa tha tumehin Bhagwan per?

Karan : Bhagwan per nahin tum per..!!

Tia : acha???

Karan : haan ..!! ab zyada baat mat kero arram kero..!!

Karan wahan se jaa raha hota hai

Tia us kaa haanth pakar leti hai

Tia : I love You..!!

Karan : I Love You too

Karan Tia k forehead per kis kerta hai

Aur phir yeh donon hug kertay hain..!!!

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Yeh lo ji ...yeh part yahan khatam hua..!! ab aagay kya hoa ga.!!

us k liyeh Perhtay rahein DO PAL..!! lolz😆

Edited by beauty_queen - 19 years ago

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 19 years ago

#35

iman dear just too good....... 👏 hmm tho manisha karan ko apne ghar le gayi hain..aww..i hope unke beech kuch hua na ho.. & i'am sure kuch hua nahi hoga par shayad manisha jhoot bole.. 😛 tia ko hosh aa gaya aur uske aur karan ke beech pyaar ka ikraar bhi ho gaya yesssssssssssssssssss.. ab write a cute romantic part soon me waiting........... 😊 😛 😃

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Sara

@sara_naveed00

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Posted: 19 years ago

#36

Tht was too good yaaar!!! Continue soon!! Karan ko akal aahee gayee! hehehehe!
😆

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group_1223

@group_1223

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Posted: 19 years ago

#37

wowww iman...it waz a luvly part.....keep it up

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rajeev1

@rajeev1

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Posted: 19 years ago

#38

😆 😆 ..imaan yaar waqi tum to cheeti ho gayi..lol.....bechara karan...yeh to mihir jaisa phasa..lol..tulsi, mandira, meera..hehehe 😆 😆 .....agaye likho na yaaara

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mehreen/sadaf

@fakhra

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Posted: 19 years ago

#39

wow iman abhi abhi tumhare saare story parhi............bohot hi achi hai........hmmmmmm..........karan n tia nice name yaar.....tum to bohot achi writer hooooo......... 👏

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KulBin

@KulBin

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Posted: 19 years ago

#40

hey iman very nice finally tia is out of coma, 😛
n apna sujal bach gaya yaar varna manisha uski izzat pe hamla kar deti....hahaha... lol.... 😆 😃
hey cont soon... 😊

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