Do Pal *Rajeev And Amna* - Page 6

Bauhat din ho jaatay hain ..aur yeh donon ek doosray se baat bhi nahin kertay ..!!
Karan Tia ko har waqt phone kerta rehta hai
lekin Tia us ka ek phone bhi nahin utha ti ..!!
Karan bauhat udaas hota hai ..!!
Tia in her mind(crying) : mein kya keroon?? mujhay itnee mushkil se mera pyaar mila
aur woh bhi bat gaya..!!! mein kya keroon...lekin yeh bhi ho sakhta hai k mein ghalat hoon..!!
Aur yahan Karan bauhat udaas hota hai ..!!
Karan : Tia mujhay kyun nahin samajhti ...mein aisa nahin ker sakhta hoon..!!!
Song Time.....

"Na jee sakein yahan, na mar sakein yahan
Hasne ki baat chhoro, na ro sakein yahan
To jaaye hum kahan, to jaaye hum kahan
To jaaye hum kahan

Yeh dard ki aahein juda huwi raahein
Bhula denge tumko sanam dheere dheere
Mohabbat ke saare sitam dheere dheere
Bhula denge tumko sanam dheere dheere
Mohabbat ke saare sitam dheere dheere
Abhi naaz hai toote dil ko wafa pe
Abhi naaz hai toote dil ko wafa pe
Ke tootenge saare bharam dheere dheere
Bhula denge tumko sanam dheere dheere

Dil mera chaahe ke seene se dil main nikal ke phaink doon
Bedard is berehem ko hawa mein uchhaal ke phaink doon
Dhoka diya mujhko dhoka diya dil ne mere haaye yeh kya kiya
Dil mera chaahe ke seene se dil main nikal ke phaink doon
Lamhon se haare bujhe nazarein
Ab to saheinge yeh gham dheere dheere
Bhula denge tumko sanam dheere dheere

Tanha akele mein yaadon ke mele mein tum gaye chhod ke
Waado ki rasmon ko chaahat ki kasmon ko tum gaye tod ke
Ghariyan sitamgar katti nahi, ulfat ke manzer se hatti nahi
Tanha akele mein yaadon ke mele mein tum gaye chhod ke
Jahan bhi jaoon tumhe hi paoon
Rukeinge humaare kadam dheere dheere
Bhula denge tumko sanam dheere dheere
Abhi naaz hai toote dil ko wafa pe
Abhi naaz hai toote dil ko wafa pe
Ke tootenge saare bharam dheere dheere
Ke tootenge saare bharam dheere dheere
Bhula denge tumko sanam dheere dheere
Mohabbat ke saare sitam dheere dheere"

Tia : nahin mein aisa nahin ker sakhti ..ager mein ghalat hui to mein apnay aapko
kabhi maaf nahin ker paaon gi..!! mujhay us Manisha k paas jaana hoga..!!
Aur Yahan Karan kya soch raha hai..!!
Karan : Yeh sab Tia ko zaroor us Manisha ne bataya hoga..!!! mujhay Manisha se
baat kerni hogi..!!
Karan Manisha k paas jaa rha hota hai ...
Aur doosri taraf Tia Manisha k paas jaa rahi hoti ...
Lekin Karan pehlay wahan pauhanch jaata hai..!!
Karan Manisha k ghar k ander jaata hai ..!!
Karan Chilaata hai : MANISHA...!!
Manisha bahir nikalti hai ...
Manisha : aray Karan tum idher ...ander aao na
Karan : Yeh natak tum kisi aur k saamnay kerna ..!!
Manisha : Karan ..!! yeh tum kya keh rahe ho?
Karan : mein achi tarah jaanta hoon k Woh ghatiyaan baatein tumne hi Tia ko batayi hain ..!!
Manisha : kaisi baatein?
Karan : zyada bholi mat bano ..!!
Karan Holds Manisha tightly..!!
Karan : tum Tia ko batao gi ..k meine kuch nahin kya..!!
Peechay Tia khari hoti hai
Manisha Tia ko dekh leti hai
Manisha : lekin tum mujhse Kyun jhoot bolnay ko keh rahe ho ..!! mein Tia se jhoot
nahin bolon gi..!!
Karan : hamarey beech kuch nahin hua tha yeh tumhein Tia ko batana hi hoga
Manisha : mein jhoot nahin bolon gi..!!
Karan ki nazar Tia per perhti hai..!!
Karan : Tia..!!
Tia wahan se chali jaati hai .!!
Karan bhi us k peechay peechay jaata hai
Karan : Tia merii baat to suno..!!
Tia : Abhi bhi kuch sunnay ko baaqi raha hai Karan...!! tum Manisha se jhoot bolnay
ko keh rahe the..!!
Karan : nahin Tia mein..!!
Tia : mein to yahan aayi thi kyunki meine socha k shayad mein ghalat hoon..!!
lekin nahin mein bilkul sahi thi..!! tum aur Manisha ..
Tia roti hai ...aur wahan se jaa rahi hoti hai..!! Lekin Karan us ka haanth pakar leta hai
Karan : bas bauhat ho gaya ..thak gaya hoon mein thak gaya hoon mein apni safai
detay detay ..ab nahin ..ab aur nahi Tia..!!
Ab dekhtay hain Manisha kya ker rahi hai ..!!
Manisha (talking to herself) : Ohh Manisha ..!! u r too Goood..!! tumne kaisay
us Tia ko Karan ki zindagi se nikaal phenka ..u r just too good..!!
Manisha peechay murti hai to Karan aur Tia wahiin kharay hotay hain ..!!
Tia Manisha k paas jaati hai aur usse zor se thapar maarti hai..!!!
Tia : Miss Manisha ..!! yeh thapar hamesha yaad rakhna ..!! aur ainda meri
zindagi mein dakhal mat dena..!! aur tum ager Karan se pyaar kerti hoti
to kabhi us ko haasil kernay ki koshish nahin kerti ...kyun pyaar sirf denay
kaa naam hai lenay ka ...lekin shayad tum yeh kabhi nahin samjho gi..!!
Yeh keh ker ..Tia wahan se chali jaati hai..!!!
Ab Karan Manisha k paas aata hai ..!!
Karan bhi Manisha ko ek thapar maarta hai
Karan : Ainda aisa kernay ki soch na bhi nahin kyunki is baar to shayad mein tumhein
chor doon lekin agli baar tum zinda nahin bacho gi..!! aur yeh Karan Raichand ka waada hai..
yaad rakhna ..!!
Manisha wahiin kharay ro rahi hoti hai aur Karan bhi wahan se chala jaata hai..!!
Ab Tia road per akelay chal rahi hoti hai..!!
Aur Karan gaari per hota hai ..!!
Karan Tia ko dhoond raha hota hai ..lekin usse Tia nahin miltee..!!
( Tia bhoot thi ...ab gayab ho gai..lolz...)
Phir Karan Tia ko road per akelay chalta hua dekhta hai ..!!
Woh gaari se utarta hai aur Tia k paas jaata hai ..!!
Tia chal rahi hoti hai k Karan us ka haanth pakar leta hai ..!!
Karan : Kya hua Tia???
Tia chup rehti hai
Karan : kya hua ...tum kuch bol kyun nahin rahi ???
Tia : I m sorry Karan ...i m Sorry (crying bitterly)...!!..meine tum per visvaas nahin kya
I m sorry..!!
Karan : Tia ..!! is mein tumhari koi ghalti nahin ..ager mein bhi tumhari jagah hota
to shayad yahi kerta ..!!
Tia : Nahin Karan...mein ghalat thi ...or yeh baat tum nahin jhult la sakhtay ..!!
Karan : dekho Tia poorani baaton ko bhool jao..!! aur nayi zindagi ki taraf barho..!!
Tia : Karan I m Sorry ..!! I love u Karan I love u ..!!
Tia Karan ko tightly hug kerti hai ..!!
Sab log in donon ko dekh ker taaliyan bajatay hain ..!!
both of them were embrassed..!!!
Kher phir Karan aur Tia ghar jaatay hain ..!!
Nandini Raichand : aray Tia tum aa gayi ..chalo acha hai ..tumharay baghair
tu Karan ki bauhat buri halat ho gai thi..!!
Tia : koi baat nahi mama ..!! ab mein aa gayi hoon na ..ab Karan bilkul theek rahe ga..!!
Nandini : chalo achi baat hai ..!! beta tum abhi aayi ho ab aaram kerlo
Tia : ji mama..!!
Tia apnay room mein chali jaati hai aur Karan bhi us k saath hota hai ..!!
Kaafi raat ho jaati hai ..!!
Aur aaj phir Tia aur Karan ko alag lait tay hain ..!!
Tia : karan tum itnee dinon se Sofay per so rahe ho..!! aaj mein lait jaati hoon ..!!
Karan : Nahin tum itnee dinon se nahin thi na ..to mein aaram se bistar per lait ta tha..!!
Tia : acha??? chalo phir to tum sofay per hi so..!!
Karan apnay sofay per lait ta hai aur Tia apnay bed per..!!
Kaafi der ho jaati hai aur donon mein se koi bhi soya nahin hota..!!
Tia : Karan..!! (halkay se kehti hai taa k ager Karan so gaya ho to uthay na ..!!)
Karan : hmmm
Tia : tum jaag rahe ho ..!
Karan : haan ..!!
Tia : mujhay bhi neend nahin aa rahi ..!!
Karan : to mein kya keroon??
Tia : mujhse baatein..!!
Karan uth jaata hai ..!!
Karan phir Tia k paas aa ker beth jaata hai ..
Karan : hhhmm to kya baatein kerni hain aap ko??
Tia : Karan ..tumne mujhay maaf ker diya na ??
Karan : Tia ..tum phir shru ho gai
Tia : Karan sach sach batao tumne mujhay maaf kerdiya na ..!!
Karan : haan baba..!! ker diya maaf
Tia : Thank you Karan..!!
Tia rona shru ho jaati hai ..!!
Karan : Ab tum mujhay kyun saza de rahi ho??
Tia : saza....... kaisi saza???
Karan : tumharay yeh aansoo saza hi to hain mere liyeh..!! waada kero aainda in
keemti aanso ko nahin behnay do gi..!!
Tia : mein vaada kerti hoon..!!
Karan : lo bhi kaafi der ho gai hai ab mujhay neend aa gayi hai ..!!
Karan jab Tia ki taraf dekhta hai ...to Tia bhi bauhat neend mein hoti hai ..!!
Karan : ab tum bhi so jao
Tia ( sleepy) : nahin mujhay neend nahin aa rahi
Karan muskurata hai ..!!
Karan : acha lekin mujhay to aa rahi hai na..!! is liyeh tum bhi so jao
Jab taq Karan apna yeh sentence poora kerta hai Tia so chuki hoti hai
Karan Tia ko dekh ker muskuraata hai aur usse bed per lita ker jaa raha hota hai
k Tia us ka sonay mein hi haanth pakar leti hai ..!!
Karan Tia ko bas dekhta hi rehta hai..!!
Phir woh apna haanth chorwanay ki koshish kerta hai ..lekin naakaam ho jaata hai
Is liyeh Karan wahin bed k paas zameen per beth jaata hai ...aur us ka sar(head) bed per hota hai
Aur phir woh bhi so jaaata hai ..!!
Subah hoti hai ..!!!
Tia jaaagti hai ..!!
Tia Karan ko us position mein dekhti hai ..!! aur muskuraati hai ..!!
Tia uthti hai ..aur ek blanket Karan per daal deti hai..!!
Phir Tia wahan se chali jaati hai ..!!
Karan thori der baad uthta hai ..!! aur apnay ooper blanket para hua dekhta hai
aur khush hota hai..!!
Tia aati hai room mein
Tia : tum uth gaye??
Karan : nahin abhi so raha hoon..!!
Tia : very funny..!! office nahin jaana kya aaj??
Karan : oh haan office bhi to jaana hai..!!
Tia :tumharay kapray nikaal diyeh hain ..change ker k neechay aa jao ..naashta kerlo..!!!
Karan : theek hai thanx..!!
Tia : Thanx kis liyeh???
Karan : sab kuch jo tum mere liyeh ker rahi hoo..!!
Tia : Karan mujhay sharminda mat kero plzz yeh sab mein nahin keroon gi to kaun keray ga??
Karan : acha ab nahin kahoon ga..!!
Karan tayar ho ker neechay jaata hai naashta ker ta hai aur phir office chala jaata hai
Karan Tia ko office se phone kerta hai ..!!
Tia : Helloo ..!!
Karan : Tia..!! aaj taq hum donon kahiin bhi ek saath ghoomnay nahin gaye na ..!! aaj chalatay hain
...mein pandra minute mein aa raha hoon tum tayar rehna..!!
Tia : theek hai ..!!
Tia bauhat khush hoti hai ..!!
Karan ghar aata hai ..Tia bilkul tayar hoti hai ..aur bauhat achi lag rahi hoti hai hamesha ki tarah
Yeh log pehlay shopping kertay hain ..aur phir restaurant mein khana kha rahe hotay hain
Tia : thanx Karan ..!!!
Karan : kis liyeh??
Tia : sab kuch k liyeh jo tum mere liyeh kya..!!
Karan : Tia ab tum mujhay sharminda ker rahi ho..!!!
Tia : Oh sorry..!!
Karan : acha ab aap ka khaana khatam ho gaya ho to chalein..!!
Tia : haan chalo..!!
Karan aur Tia phir ghar chalay jaatay hain ..!!
ghar jaatay hain to dekhtay hain k karan ki mama ki tabiyat bauhat kharab hoti hai ..!!
Karan ko us ka nauker bata ta hai k acha un ko heart attack aaya hai ..!!
Karan nauker se poochta hai : abhi kahan hain mama ???
Nauker : un ko Tia koi madam hospital le ker gayee hain ..!!
Karan : kaun???
Nauker : pata nahin ..!!
Karan Tia ko le ker hospital jaata hai
Karan wahan pauhanchta hai to dekhta hai k Manisha hai wahan..!!
karan Manisha k paas jaata hai
Karan : Kya kaha tumne mama se..un ki is haalat ki zimedaar tum hi hogi..!!
K achanaq doctor aata hai
Doctor : yeh kya ker rahe hain aap Mr Karan yahi to aap ki mom ko hospital laayi hain
Karan was shocked..!!
Karan : doctor meri mama theek to hai na .???
Doctor : abhi kuch nahin keh sakhtay..un ko kisi baat ka bauhat bura sadmalaga hai ..!!
Karan : sadma kaisa sadma??
Doctor : yeh to aap hi jaantay hongay..!!
Phir ek din Karan Tia aur Manisha Hospital mein hi rehtay hain ..!!
Tia Karan ko dilaasa deti rehti hai ..!!
Phir aglay din Doctor Karan se kehtay hain : ab aap ki mom bilkul theek hain..!!
aur aap ko bula bhi rahi hain..!!
Karan Tia ko le ker ander jaata hai
Nandini Raichand : Karan ko dekh ker bauhat khush hoti hain ..!! lekin Tia ko bauhat
gussaay se dekhti hain..!!
Tia samajh jaati hai k koi na koi baat to hai ..!!
Karan bhi yahi dekh raha hota hai k us ki mama Tia k saath sahi se pesh nahin aa raheen..!!
Tia wahan se chali jaati hai ..!!
Karan : kya hua mama aap Tia ko aisay kyun dekh rahi theen??
Nandini : us ki baat mere saamnay mat kerna ..!! woh is qabil nahin
Karan : maam yeh aap kya keh rahi hain ..!!
Nandini : haan ..!! woh aisi hi hai ..us ka kisi aur larkay k saath najaiz rishta hai
Karan : mama yeh aap kya keh rahi hain ..!!
Nandini : haan Karan beta ...mujhay Manisha ne sab bataya hai..!!
Karan : mama woh bauhat bari jhooti hai ..!!
Nandini : wo jhooti hogi lekin yeh tasweerein to jhooti nahin hai ..!!
Kuch photoraphs hoti hain jin mein Tia aur ek aur larka hota hai..!!
Aur yeh sam Manisha k chaal hoti hai ..us ne hi aisi photographs ban wai hoti hain ..!!
Karan ko yaqeen hi nahin aata
Nandini : dekha Karan Tia aisi hi hai..!!
Karan wahan se chala jaata hai
Karan wahi photographs le ker Tia k paas jaata hai..!!
Tia : Karan mama mujhse kyun naraz hain???
Karan kuch nahin bolta ..!!
Tia : Karan tum kuch boltay kyun nahin ..!!
Tia KAran k haanth mein photographs dekh leti hai..!!
Tia un photos ko dekh ker shock reh jaati hai..!!
Tia : Karan yeh mein nahin hoon..!! Karan mein sach keh rahi hoon yeh mein nahin hoon..!!
Karan waisay hi khara rehta hai ..!!
Tia : haan mujhay maaloom hai tumhein meri baaton per yaqeen nahin aaye ga ..lekin sach mein
karan yeh mein nahin hooon..!!!
Karan : Tia..!! mujhay tum per poora bharosa hai ..!! aur i m sure yeh us Manisha hi ki koi chaal hai
tia ko yaqeen nahin aata k Karan us per itna bharosa kerta hai ..!!
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Lo ji yeh part khatam hua ..aur yeh acha khaas lamba bhi tha..!! hain na..!!
ab lambe comments bhi de na sab log..hehehe

lambe comments to de sakte hain lekin kiya app inka jawab de sakain gi?? kher de dengi itna acha part jo likha hai 👏 👏 👏

pehle bhi dono juddah howe the aur abh bhi 😭 😭 😭 tht's not fair aur yeh bhi iss stupid larki ki wajaah se 😡 😡 i just hate her itna bara jooth samjhti kiya hai appne app ko??
waissay Karam ki mother Tia ko bachpan se nhi janti?? 😕 😕

kher uss stupid secretary ko yeh samajh kyun nhi ati ke woh usska nahi ahi? 😡 😡 galiyan main deti nhi lekin yahan ussko deni chahyeh she deserves it!! how dare she!!!!!!!!

anywes nice part lekin bar bar Karan aur Tia ko judah hon wali baath na kiya karain plzzzzzzzzz kuch kuch hota hai 😛 😛 lolzzzzzzzzzz

aur han continue sooooooooooon
can't wait

hey main poochna bhool gayi yeh song kahan kah ai? kis singer ka hai???
kabhi suna nahi hai 😕

luved ths part....fianlly tia's misunderstandingz ver gone...but stupid manisha....now i won't mind even if i ve 2 go 2 jail after killin her...lolz......ths part was jus awsum.....i really like da way ur story z shapin up.....sooo sweet of karan to still trust tia....gud job....ths part waz fantastic.....will b eagerly waitin 4 da nxt one....r dese long enuff....don't worry...i ll make mi nxt onez longer....abhi inhi se hi kaam challa lo... 👏

nice one yaar....
waiting 4 da next part.......
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Dnt say thnx.....
post da nxt part fast!!1 😉

Hey iman nice part indeed.... 👏
gr8 gng.... 👏
par yeh manisha..... 😡 😡
ab aapki tarah likhna toh aata nahi... 😆
isliye lambe comments nahi de sakti.... 😉
but aapka lambawala part bahot achha tha.... 😛
plz cont soon.... 😊

hila kya story hai.a very beautiful part ab apni baki ki bhi stories cont karo na yaar. 👏

iman dear just too good.. & thanku so much for such a long part really enjoyed reading..👏 ab karan manisha ko din mein tare dikhyega kyunke manisha ne is baar tia pe joh waar kiya hain.. 😆
plz cont soon......😊