OS: Unanswered Questions. (Update - Page 13)

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meera30

@meera30

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Posted: 13 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: tata_tata
One page in your OS will be 4 weeks of the episode i am sure.. but even if it is, why dont they move in that direction now.. i am tired of this entire Shyam track! i wonder why they dont want to move on to the other track which they have ready - the linked-past one.. sigh!!

anyways.. great writing again.. i liked how they dont need words to actually spell out whats bothering the other.. and the entire setting of doing it at 3 in the night by their beloved poolside :) nice touch!

keep writing :)

Thanks a ton! The past?Hmmm that seems so distant at this point, no? I mean the Shyam business is nowhere close to resolution. These makers have so much material to work with. Why wouldn.t they move a LITTLE faster?

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: lvishii
Awesome OS.. Loved the sequel.. How I want they show something like this in the show?? I mean how difficult it is to either of them to realise the truth??? But anyway serial is all together a different matter.

I loved this OS.. Both the parts.. Thanks for writing the sequel.. Appreciate it...

Thanks for the PM..

Yeah the show is an entirely different place. Latest is some fancy dress with the neighbours?

I think something like this happened on another show as well!

It'll be fun i know but why can't they just move on with the Shyam angle!

Btw, thanks for your appreciation. Glad you liked it!

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Rita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#123

love your writing style but I did feel the last sentence or the swift realisation was too abrupt

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meera30

@meera30

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Posted: 13 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: Rita.C
love your writing style but I did feel the last sentence or the swift realisation was too abrupt

Totally agree. That's the result of trying to fit it in an OS, I think. Maybe I should think of an SS atleast. Hmmm..

Btw, thanks for being honest. It is refreshing 😊

Edited by meera30 - 13 years ago

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mali

@mali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#125

this was fantastic. I really could envision this happening. The details were perfect.

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schiphaxa

@schiphaxa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#126

good one again... hope you continue it sometime..

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

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Posted: 13 years ago

#127

wow, what an update! truly, khushi walks away with her self-respect intact!

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#128

Nice nice nice nice, mind blowing! Dunno Wht else to say!

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--BumbleBee--

@--BumbleBee--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#129

Nice one.

at least somewhere the show was progressing!! 😆

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aquagal

@aquagal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#130

Beautiful...

I feel like crying reading this.. A man who couldn't trust his own love, his own heart.. A woman who is bearing all the hurt & insult without knowing her mistake.

And now when they know the reason for them being in such a relationship, it's still not enough. Sometimes truth alone is not enough..