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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#141

very well written OSs; something that could have very well been seen on the show as well.😊

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applesauce.

@applesauce.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#142

Beautifull.I think you are one of the few writers who have stick to character depth to the best.Its actual reflection of Arhi in the show which unfortunately the CVs lost their connect with.

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Pramiti

@maverickmartin

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#143

I know this will not continue, but, man, wouldn't I like it to. It just made me miss IPK terribly. Well-written, as usual. I love how you always bring the characters to life so beautifully. Sometimes just the dialogues are enough.

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#144

Wish the show gave us a closure like this. A chance where she stood up for herself & for a change he listened.

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#145

Meera meera i am blown away by this 2 shot.

This was so well written. I could almost see the entire thing right in front of my eyes. The build of this confrontation was so much more believable and good compared to that obnoxious and stupid 'suicide track' which led to the whole confrontation scene in the show.

And your Arnav actually understood and realised that he had made a bad judgement...Why oh why couldn't the original ASR have some brains like this one. *Sighs*

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golpokobita

@golpokobita

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#146

I still do not understand what the writers of the show had in their minds...

I so much wanted the misunderstanding to get resolved.. everybody wanted.. but it never happened.

More than ASR, I am disappointed with Khushi. I wonder how could she be such a fool? How could she not guess something like that as the reason for ASR's sudden change.. Its really unusual.

Anyways, the more I read your stories, the more i see a Khushi, I always wanted to see.. but that khushi never came...well, its kind of impossible in Gul's shows, in fact in any Indian TV show. For our TV audience, strength of women lies in hiding truths for the sake of family and in sacrifices.. So did Khushi!

Beautiful Story!

I read at least one of your pieces whenever I feel like reading something.. Thank you leaving such a treasure for readers!

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#147

Meera...loved it... How do you manage to put thoughts to words so amazingly...this was just perfect...

Your writing is so lovely..blissful and beautiful!

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Zoah

@xbeyondwordsx

Alumni

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#148

That was beautifully written! Something the show needed to have but alas! Wishful thinking! Sighs! I liked Khushi the most here. She was a strong, indpendent, level-headed lady. The show turned her into something like a joke. I was watching IPK re-run today and it was the episode where Khushi blasts at Arnav when she comes to RM to give her resignation letter. That was the Khushi I loved and I saw the glimpse of that Khushi in this OS(s)

Amazing work, girl! Keep it up :D

Love, Zoah x

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Jammy-

@Jammy-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#149

Khushi deserved better (treatment). She deserved his apology. Your OS reminded me of all the accusations by Arnav to Khushi. It breaks my heart. Beautifully written! 👍🏼