OS: The Last Kiss

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Aquiline

@Aquiline

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

GASP! You idiot, Arnav, don't just stand there and wave: JUMP! Get on that damn train! Oh wait! Kushi! Kushi! Pull the cord. Stop the train! Somebody! Don't separate...NOOO!!

Sigh! Loved it, R! Seriously. No, I'll not interpret. But my best picks in the story were:

1. The sindoor segment. loved it to the core!

2. Him walking away after leaving her at the platform. Felt his emotions right down to the tears.

3. The paradoxes:

him trying to protect her from her fears only to realize he must probably be her biggest fear

the darkness outside, the darkness within

the helpless embrace and the determined separation

You rocked again...dragon!

Every OS you write, whether hot or emotional, is well-written...But do you know what? Hot OSs are fun to read. But which OSs last? Which OSs touch? Which OSs make us realize the beauty of ArHi's love? These kind, of course! Thanks for making this lovely OS for us.

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Yellow.

@Yellow.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

you truly made me crying reading this OS.. 😭 i couldnt hold my tears when i was reading the last line 😭😭😭😭😭
this is wonderfully written 👏

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meera

@jblueday

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

I was picturing barun and sanaya acting this scene and what to say...i was crying like a mad person😭😭

very well written👏 thanks for the pm😊

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--Sobi--

@--Sobi--

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Loved it!!!

It was so amazingly written...yet very sad!!!

So she finally left him...I think so eventually Arnav's haal would be something like this after the truth comes out!!!

But then I really do want a happy ending in the serial!!😃

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anodaksgfan

@anodaksgfan

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

amazing os!!!

i loved every bit of it...

how ASR inside him died on realising the truth..

the part when both are on opposite side of the door wanting the same thing..!!

the end was beautiful..im really not a fan of sad endings but this i loved..!!

sometimes letting go is the best thing to do..!!i had tears in y eyes..damn..im emotional..

P.S-im not removing u from my buddy list!!

hot or not..good stuff is always a treat!!

forgot to mention..the sindoor part was very good too..

sarun wud perfectly do this!!

but but i wont b able to watch it for sure..

Edited by anodaksgfan - 13 years ago

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SanzBarbie

@SanzBarbie

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

i was crying like hell..😭
such a tear-jerker os 😭
😭
how come u write so beautifully👏

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

so beautifully written cant believe he let her go though had me in tears and everything

thanks for the pm

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sandy_nivren

@sandy_nivren

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Amazing os

But it was so sad 😭

Thanks for the pm

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nj123

@nj123

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

That was beautifully written!👏 You put it so perfectly...and till the last sentence I was hoping she'd jump off the train and run back to him but I guess love is always a mystery.

I need a box of tissues now.😭