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Part – 120

Next day.

Geet, Maan & Dadima Golden temple chalthe hai……

Maneet back in Golden temple…..

Babaji ne yahi geet ko apne jeevan saathi ki ishara di…..

Kaise Babaji ne Geet ko rashta dikhaya…

Uski manzil ki…aur Geet ki zindagi kaise Maan se judgayi….

Maan se milke Geet ki duniya kaise badal gayi…

Maneet ki safar toh yahi shuru hui thi….

Ab toh woh babaji ko shukriya kar rahi hai….

Apne liye sahi rashtha dikhane ke liye…

Aur Maan ko apne zindagi banana ke liye….

Maan toh bas Geet ki kushi ki dua kartha….

After a mast week at Amritsar…..

Dadi: beeji, ab humme wapas jaana hoga

Beeji: itni jaldi bhi kya hai? Aap toh bas abhi aayi hai

Maan: Beeji, ab toh humme ijazat dijiye

Dadi: Geet bete aap chahe toh thode din aur rukh sakthe hai

Maan: dadi, Geet toh hummre saath nahi aarahi hai

Maan ko patha hai ki Geet wahan rukhegi nahi….

Phir bhi woh geet ki reaction dekhna chahatha hai….

Geet: Dadi, aap akhele kya karenge? Mein bhi aap ke saath aathi hoon

Beeji: Geet puthar, seedhe seedhe pathao kit um apne pathi ke saath

Hi jaana chahathi ho, haina Dadiji?

Get: haan Beeji, aapne sahi kaha, ye donno toh ek dusre ke bina do din bhi

Nahi rehsakthe hai, haina Geet?

Geet: aaise koi baat nahi dadima, mein toh bas aapke madat karma chahathi

Dadi: toh phir Maan bete, chaliye hum chalthe hai

Maan: bye Geet

Geet toh shock hogayi….

Maan leaves…Dadi too…..

Sab unko chodne bahar chalthe hai….

Geet toh wahi rukh jaathi….

Geet: kya? Maan chale gaye? Mujhe chodke?



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Geet toh bahar nahi chalthi…woh kyun jaayegi…..

Ye Maan ne bhi usse akhele chodke chale gaya hai…

Geet toh bahut tension ho jaathi…..she is about to weep….

Geet hears Maan's car horn…

Maan keeps blowing the horn…

Maan apni Mishty ko chodke kaise jaa saktha?

Geet hurries to the car……

Beeji: hare puthar, sambalke, kahi ghir jayegi

Geet kushi kushi sabko bye karthi….like a kid going out with the family…

They drive back toh Delhi………

Back in Delhi….

Itne din ke baat wapas aaya toh Maan subhe jaidi KC chale jaatha…

As usual everyone is tensed as Maan is coming back after a while…

Adi toh bahut pareshan hai…

Adi: Pinky, sab tayyar haina?

Pinky: haan sab tayyar hai…Pinky keeps munching her chips…..

Adi: Pinky, Maan sir aanewale hai, presentation tayyar hai ki nahi?

Pinky: woh….woh toh meine kal hi tayyar kardhi…

Adi: chalo Maan sir ke aane ke pehle mein ek bar check kartha hoon

Pinky: apne table pe gayi..

Adi: hare Pinky, jaldi karo, kitne dher lagayegi?

Pinky: Adi…….Pinky toh bahut pareshan hai

Adi: kya hai?

Pinky: woh Pendrive toh mein ghar pe hi bhool gayi

Adi's trademark laughter….

Adi: aaj toh mein gaya…Maan sir itne din baat aarahe hai aur

Presentation nahi hogi toh

Pinky: ab kya karein?

Adi: mujhe kyuin poochthi ho? Ye sab tummare wajhe se hi hua hai

Pinky: tum bhi toh ghar pe the, tum bhi pendrive lekhe aasakthe thena?

Adi: par mujhe kya patha ki pendrive ghar pe hai?

Tasha: kya baat hai? Pinky presentation tayyar haina?

Pinky: woh….woh…

Tasha: woh…woh..kya hai?

Pinky: mein abhi ghar jaake pendrive lekhe aathi hoon

Tasha: kya? Tum PD ghar pe chodke aayi ho?

Tumme patha haina woh kitna important hai?

Maan sir toh ghar se nikhal chuke hai, ab kya hoga?

Tasha toh kush hogayi…

Aaj toh Adi aur Pinky toh gaye hai…

Pinky jaldi jaldi ghar chale jaathi…

Adi tries to delay things a little….




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Maan aagaya….sab ko signal miljaatha hai…

Sab apne apne jagah pe chalthe hai….

Adi: Maan sir aagaye, ye Pinky ab tak aayi nahi

Adi: gu….gu….gud mor sir

Maan: mor Adi

Tasha: gud mor sir

Maan: Tasha sab tayyar haina? Sharp 11'0 clock clients aa rahe hai

Tasha: Maan sir, woh…woh…

Maan: kya baat hai?

Adi: kuch nahi sir, sab tayyar hai

Romeo abhi abhi office aatha hai….Maan ko dekhke shivers…

Romeo: gud mor sir

Maan: ye waqt hai office aane ki?

Romeo: woh..woh…

Maan: aaj ho kya gay hai sabko? Mujhe koi excuse nahi chahiye

Romeo: yes sir

Maan: ye KC hai, yahan kaam karma toh waqt pe aana, warna

Tum KC chod sakthe ho

Romeo: yes sir

Maan: toh Tasha Romeo ki termination order type karke lao

Romeo: no sir

Maan: kya yes sir no sir?

Romeo: kal se waqt pe aajaoonga sir, yes sir

KC chodna nahi chahatha hoon sir, no sir

Romeo baat katam karke dekhtha toh wahan koi nahi hai…

Maan has left….

Romeo: bal bal bachgaya

Tasha: aaj toh bachgaye ho, mein toh tummare terminatiom order

Type karke rakhthi hoon jaldi kaam aayega

Romeo: mere ya tummare?

Tasha gets angry & leaves….

Romeo uske peeche peeche bagtha hai…

Romeo: Tasha….tasha….

KC as usual chal raha hai…..

Pinky waqt pe aathi hai….

Adi: achcha hua tum aagayi warna mein to hiss kidki se bahar jump kartha hoga

Pinky: Maan sir aagaye?

Adi: woh toh aaj jaldi hi aagaye

Pinky: aur clients

Adi: woh bhi aajayenge tu jaldi kar

Pinky: thank U babaji pinky continues her snack…

Adi: Pinyyy

Meeting shuru hothi……



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Geet Maan ko lunch lekhe aathi….

Par Maan toh meetong mein hai….

Geet Maan ki cabin pe uska wait karthi….

Maan ki meeting toh chaltha ho jaa raha hai….

Geet toh wait kar karke tak jaathi……

Maan comes after a while…..

Geet is sleeping on his chair….

Maan ko ye dekhke Geet ki pehle din yaad aagaya…

Aaise hi sorahi thi uss din bhi….

Geet ko aaise dekhke hi Maan fida hua tha…..

Maan apni Mishty ko gurraha hai…he just gets closer to her…

Uski zulfein adjust kartha….

Geet aaj bhi Maan ki Mishty hi hai…..kitni cute lag rahi hai….

Maan usko disturb nahi kartha…..he just leaves……..

Geet utthi toh 3 baj gaye…

Geet: ye maan ab taka aye kyun nahi?

Geet goes to find Maan in the conference room….

Meeting toh katam hogayi….

Geet: koi hai? Yahan toh koi nahi hai, ye Maan kahan gaye?

Conference room ka door band hogaya…

Geet tries to open….but it is locked….

Geet: ye door ab tak teek nahi hua hai kya? Koi hai? Maan…

No response…

Geet feels that someone is inside the room….

Geet: ye AC ab tak kyun chal raha hai?

Geet goes & switches on the light…

Maan toh wahan so raha hai….

Itne lambe safar ke baat woh bhi tired hai….

Geet: Maan….Maan…..

Maan : Geet tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?

Geet: Maan aap so rahe ho yahan, mein toh aapki wait kar rahi thi,

Par aap toh aaram se so rahe ho, isska matlab aap lunch bhi kar chuke ho, haina?

Maan: Geet …hare Geet meri baat toh suno

Geet ko gussa aajatha…

Geet: mein toh aapke liye kitne pyar se lunch nanake laya tha

Par ye toh MSK hai…aaise hi karenge

Maan: Geet….

Geet tries hard to open the door, but in vain…

Maan gets the key & tries to open the door…

Geet: aap takleef kyun kar rahe ho? Mein ye door open kar sakthi hoon

Maan uske muh pe haath raktha…

Maan: chup…bilkul chup…

He gently drags her, opens the door….

Lifts his Mishty…carries her to his cabin….

Sab dekhte rehte hai…..





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Adi as usual hastha hai…..

Maan seats her on the couch….

Takes the lunch box. & serves the food….

Geet toh bas dekhte hi rehthi hai….

Maan apne haathon se apne Mishty ko khilatha hai….

Now its Geet's turn….

Geet: toh aapne ab tak lunch nahi ki?

Maan: Geet pehle tum khao,jab pet kali hotha toh

Aaise hi gussa aatha hai

Geet: kya? Mein gussa toh nahi hoon

Maan: Geet , jab mein aaya that um so rahi thi

Meinne socha ki tumme disturb nahi kar saktha issiliye mein

Tummare jagne ki wait kar raha tha takki hum saath mein

khana kha sake

Geet: sorry Maan

Geet ab Maan ko khilathi hai….Mahi……………

Next week….

Maan: Geet, jaldi karo

Geet: haan Maan, bas do minute

Maan: Geet mein ghadi mein wait kartha hoon

Geet: ye Maan ko itni jaldi kyun hai? Aaisi kaunsi badi baat hai ki

Maan itna tension ho rahe hai

Maan: Geet, hum late ho rahe hai

Maan blows the horn…..

Geet rushes to the car…..

Maan: Geet humme 6'0 clock ki appointment hai, tum ab tak make-up kar

Rahi ho….Geet gets angry…..

Geet: mein kya kar rahi thi? Aapne dekha hai kya?

Waise hum kahinshoot pe jaa rahe hai kya ki mein saj saj ke chaloon

Maan: Geet tum bina make-up hi achche lagthe ho

Geet kush hothi: haina, thanks Maan

Maan: make-up mein toh bhootni lagte ho, kabhi aaise Tara ke samne

Mat chalo, woh dar jayegi

Geet: par aap ne kitne bar mujhe dekhke dare the?

Maan: Geet mein MSK hoon. Aaise chote chote bhoothon se nahi dartha

Geet: achacha ji, ab toh bathao hum kahan jaa rahe hai?


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Maan: lo hum pohanchgaye…tum khud hi dekhlo

They are at the City Hospitals….

Geet: Maan humyahan kyun aaye hai?

Maan: Geet hum gynecologist ko milne aaye hai

Geet:Aap ki tabyat toh teek nahi hai kya?

Maan: mein toh preg hoon na! issiliye

Geet: Maan kaise baat kar rahe ho

Maan: kya karoon geet, tum toh kabhi apni parwa nahi karthi

Geet: Maan aap kitne achche ho, mere kitne khyal rakte ho

Maan: Geet tumme galatfami hogayi, mujhe tere nahi mere bachche

Ki parwa hai

Geet: Maan aap kitne badal gaye ho, ye kab aapka bachcha hua?

Geet is annoyed….

Maan: Geet, tension mat lo, mein toh joke kar raha tha

Geet: Maan aap kyun ye sab kar rahe ho? Comedy aapko suit nahi

Kartha, aap toh angry young man hi raho

Maan: Geet mein kitna bhi achcha banne ki koshish karoon, par

Log toh mujhe DD banne hi chahate hai

Geet: kya karein, hum hai aadat se majboor

Nurse: Mrs.Khurana…..Mrs.Khurana…..

Maan: Geet chalo…

Maneet doctor se milke aathe hai….

Maan: Geet yaad haina doctor ne kya kaha

Geet: haan maan

Maan: aaj se tum waqt pe khaoge aur waqt par sooge

Geet: Maan, mujhe sab patha hai, aap tension mat lo

Maan: Geet har baat ko itne aasani se nahi lethe, kuch toh responsible bano

Geet: Maan mujhe ice cream khana hai, chalo chalet hai

Maan: kaha?

Geet: ice cream parlour

Maan: ye ladki kabhi nahi sudhregi

Geet is very excited….

Geet ice cream lekhe aathi….ice cream melts…

Geet licks her arms….

Maan: Geet kabhi kabhi mujhe shak hota kit um choti ho ya Tara

Geet: Maan yehi toh moka hai, ab Tara aayegi toh aap ko sirf wahi dikegi

Maan: aaise koi baat nahi hai Geet

Geet: dekhte hai

Maan calls Annie & speaks to Tara…

Geet: dekho kaise uski naam sunte hi mujhe bhool gaye

Maan keeps on chating….

Maan: chalo Geet, dher ho rahi hai

Geet: kaise chalte?

Maan: kyun?

Geet: apne toh paisa hi nahi diye

Maan: oh…bhool hi gaya…rukho ahi aatha hoon

Geet: Maan aap duniya ke sabse achche papa ho, haina?

Maneet leave…………..

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Next week Tara, Sam & Vicky arrive……

Dadi: Tara bete, aayiye aayiye, Dadi net oh aapko bahut miss ki

Tara: papa…papa kahan hai?

Dadi: woh toh upper hai

Tara goes upstairs to see Maan…….

Sam: Dadi, kaise hai aap?

Dadi: Sam bete, aapka trip kaise tha?

Sam: bahut badiya thi Dadi, Annie bhi hummare saath gomrahi thi

Dadi: Vicky bete, kaise hai aap?

Vicky: Dadi, ye dekho Mysore silk saree, ye meine khas aapke liye li

Kaise hai?

Dadi: bahut achche hai bate

Sam: Dadi Geet kahan hai?

Geet: Sam mein yahi hoon

Sam: Geet, Sam rushes & hugs her….

Sam: congrats Geet

Geet: thanks Sam

Sam: Geet ye dekho, ye Annie ne tummare liye bheja hai

Geet opens the gift….

Ek chota sa cradle ke andhar ek cute sa baby hai…..

It says welcome soon baby….just waiting for U………..

Geet: ye toh bahut sundar hai, haina Dadi?

Dadi: haan bete

Geet: ye Maan ko dikhake aathi hoon

Geet goes to see Maan…

Maan Tara ke saath khel raha hai…..

Maan had bought some dress for her…

Tara looks pretty…..

Geet: Maan….Maan…

Tara: ye kaisa hai?

Maan: bahut cute

Tara: mein nayi dress ko Vicky ko dikhati hoon

Tara leaves…..

Geet: Maan ye dekho, Annie ne kya bejha hai

Maan: that's beautiful Geet bilkul tummari tarah

Geet usko apne table mein rakhthi hai….

Maan: Geet mujhe lagtha hai ki ya baat humme Tara ko bhi bathana chahiye

Geet: par woh toh bachchi hai

Maan: par usse bhi ye ye baat patha hona hai ki ab uske saath

Khelne ke liye ek naya mehman aanewala hai, tabbi woh bhi usse kushi se welcome karegi

Geet: ye baat toh sahi hai

Maan: mein Tara se baat kartha hoon

Geet: teek hai Maan….Maan…….Maan…….ye Maan kahan hai?

Maan toh Geet ke peche hi kada hai…..Maan hugs her………

Maan: thanks Geet

Maneet passionate hug……Mahi…………



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One morning…..Maan apne tai-chi practice karne jaa raha hai….

Tara comes to him crying……

Maan: Tara kya baat hai? Aap kyun ro rahe ho?

Tara: papa aap abhi chalo mere saath

Maan: par kaha?

Tara: woh…usko daatne

Maan: kissko?

Tara: Geet ko

Maan: kyun? Usne kya kia? Geet…….Geeet……..

Geet bhi wahan aathi hai……

Maan: Geet tumne Tara ko kya kaha? Woh kyun ro rahi hai?

Tara: aaise nahi, zor se daaato

Maan apne aawaz uncha kartha: Geet ye tumne teek nahi kiya,

Kaise hummare princess ko ruladhiya

Geet: Maan aap isske bathon mein mat padho

Geet: Tara…tara…suno

Tara: mujhe aapse koi baat nahi karna hai

Maan: Tara aap goodgirl haina? Aaise nahi kehte

Geet ye sab kya hai?

Geet: usse hi pooch

Maan: ye Geet mere saath khelne nahi aathi

Maan: Tara mama ko aaise nahi pukarthe, chalo sorry bolo

Tara: nahi ye bahut badgirl hai

Maan: Tara

Geet: Maan chodo usse, thode dher royegi toh apne aap teek ho jayegi

Maan: Geet tum isske saath khelti kyun nahi?

Geep: Maan ye mere saath skip karna chahathi hai

Now Maan understands what's the problem…..

Maan: Tara, yahan aayiye aap papa ke saath nahi kheloge? Mama ke saath hi kheloge hai kya?chalo hum khelte hai

Tara: par aapko skip karna nahi aatha

Geet hasne lagi…….

Maan ko gussa aatha, woh Geet ki madat karna chahatha hai aur woh toh

Maan ki mazak kar rahi hai…..

Sach mein Maan Tara ke saath skip kar nahi paya….

Woh toh aaj tak akhele hi skip kartha haina……

Par Maan Singh Khurana har maanewala nahi haina……

Woh try kar karke Tara ke saath skip kar hi gaya…

Tara is very happy….Geet too……

Aaise hi din bar din Geet ke sara Kaam Maan karne laga….

Tara ki padayi…khana…phina….nahana….sab ab Maan hi kartha….

Like a loving father….woh toh Maan hai hi….

Geet ko ye sab ajeeb lagta…. KC ke malik MSK kahan ye

Tara ke papa Maan kahan…..Maan kitna badal gaya…..

Maan Geet ko bhi yoga classes, baby ki shopping, doctor se milne,

Aur kabhi kabhi chaat khane bhi lekhe chaltha….



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A few months later………

Dadi: Maan bete hum aapse kuch zaroori baat karna chhate hai

Maan: bathayiye Dadi, kya baat hai?

Dadi: woh humne Pnnditji ko bhulaya hai

Maan: Dadi ghar mein koi pooja hai kya?

Dadi: nahi bete, hum toh Geet ki godhbharayi ke tariff fix karna chahate hai

Maan: haan Dadi, mienne to hiss barein mein socha hi nahi

Dadi: humme lagtha hai ab usski samay aagaya hai

Panditji: pranam Dadiji

Dadi: hare Panditji aayiye aayiye

Maan: toh aap baatein khijiye mein chaltha hoon

Dadi: teek hai bete

Panditji: aapne apni bahu ki godh barayi ki baat kit oh agle budhwaar usskeliye bahut uchchit hai

Dadi: toh phir ussi din hum function rakhte hai, Panditji aap usske tayyarian shuru kijiye

Aapko job hi chahiye toh aap Adi se list bannake dedhijiye par function mein koi kammi nahi honni chahiye

Panditji: jaise aapki marzi, hum chalte hai

Dadi: Geet…Sam….jaldi aajaao

Sam: Dadima kya baaat hai? Aap toh bahut kush lag rahe ho

Dadi: Sam bete humne abhi abhi Panditji se baat ki, Geet ki godhbarayi next Wednesday hogi

Sam: ye toh bahut achchi baat hai Dadi

Geet: Sam kya goodnews hai?

Sam: Geet Dadi tummare godhbarayi ki baat kar rahi hai

Dadi: haan bete, humne aapki godhbarayi next week fix kiye hai, Wednesday,ab humme kitne sare arrangements karna hai, aap bhi apni shopping shuru kijiye

Humme pehle guest list tayyar karna hoga, Nakul…Nakul…..

Sam: toh Geet hum aaj hi shopping shuru karte hai, kitne saman khareedna hai

Specially tummare liye lehenga matching jewels, jaldi karo Geet mujhe toh samaj mein nahi aatha kahan shuru karein

Geet: Sam aaram se, tu toh Tara ki tarah excited ho

Sam: haan Geet ye toh meri pehli function hai hummare ghar mein woh bhi meri pyari si dhost Geet ki godhbarayi hai, meinne toh tummari shadi miss ki par iss function mein toh mein full masti karnewail hoon

Geet : haan baba tu jaise bhi chaho sab waise hi hoga

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