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Posted: 12 years ago

Part -147

Annie: Sam tum Dev bhai ke barein mein Geet ko kuch mat kehna

Sam: mujhe patha hai Annie, mein ne pehle hi Dev bhai ko dekha tha, mall mein

Annie: kya? Tum Dev bhai se milli thi? Kab?

Sam tells Annie about that incident….

Annie: achcha hua Maan bhai usdin tummare saath the, mujhe lagtha hai ki Maan bhai ko Dev ki bail mein bahar aane ki kabar Maan bhai ko patha nahi

Sam: Annie kya humme Maan bhai ko bathana hai

Annie: nahi Sam, mujhe lagtha hai ki humme Maan bhai ko pareshan nahi karna hai

Sam: par Annie

Annie: tum fikar mat karo ye kuch nahi karsakthe, aaj bhi ye Maan bhai se darthe hai

Sam: chodo ye sab, humne toh Tara ko gift lena hi bhoolgaye

Annie: haan, chalo hum unko koi achche se soft toy lethe hai

Maneet gadhi mein chal rahe hai……..

Maan: Geet kya soch rahi ho?

Geet: Maan hum kahan jaarahe hai?

Maan: Geet tumne hi kaha ki tumme shopping karna hai, toh hum wahi jaa rahe hai

Geet: par Maan ye koi alag rashta haina?

Maan: nahi Geet tum itne din badh bahar aarahe hona, issiliye rashta bhool gayi ho

Geet: nahi mujhe patha hai, ye rashta ko mein jaanthi hoon

Maan: toh tumhi bathao hum kahan jaa rahe hai?

Geet thode dher sochthi hai….

Maan: chalo mein hi tumme bathatha hoon

Geet: nahi, mujhe achche se mallom hai, par abhi yaad nahi aaraha hai

Maan: achcha mein ek clue detha hoon

Geet: teek hai

Maan: aaj humaaise jagah pe jaarahe hai jahan pe pehle baar ye Dust Danav hamesha ke liye apni Mishty ki Jaan bangaya

Geet: haayeee mujhe patha hai mijhe patha hai

Geet is very excited…………

Maan: lo baarish bhi aagayi……………..

Geet: Maan humme yahan aake char saal ho gaye haina?

Maan: haan Geet par woh din ko mein kabhi nahi bhool saktha

Geet: haan mujhe toh lagtha hai ki hum kal hi mille the iss bearish mein

Maan: haan Gee tab toh mujhe iss bearish se bhi pyar hogaya

Geet is so excited…………

Maan: jab bhi tum mere saath ho Geet mujhe ye sare duniya pyara laghta hai

Bilkul tummare tarah……

Geet: Maan hummara dabba aagaya woh dekho….gadhi rokho gadhi rokho…

Gadhi toh tab se rukhi hai……

Geet gets down & dances in the rain………

Maan apne Mishty ko admire karthe karthe patha nahi kab uske saath judh gaya aur woh bhi dance karne laga…………..

Behne de mujhe behne de…………….

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Posted: 12 years ago

Part – 148

Dev is worried about Annie's reactions……

Phone rings……

Dev: halo

Caller: Dev Khurana

Dev: yah, speaking

Caller: aap Geet ko jaanthe haina?

Dev: haan, kya hua Geet ko?

Caller: aapko Geet ka raaz jaannna hai toh aaj raat old cotton mills pe mujhe millo

Dev: aap kaun hai?...halo…….halo…………

Call ends………..

Dev decides to go……..

That night……….

Dev waits for the caller…………Dev hears a gunshot……

Dev starts to flee…..someone is after him…..

It's Brij……Dev bhagthe bhagthe sadak pe aatha…..

He is hit by a truck………….

Brij ko police pakadthe hai……

Dev is at the hospital…..he has lost his right hand…..

But what hurts him more than losing a hand is that no one from the Khurana house has visited him….not even Dadi… Dev knows that by now everyone would have known about this accident as it is published in the newspapers….

Everyone at KM hide this news from Geet….Geet is happy with Maan & the children…..

Maan doesn't want to remind her about Dev & her ugly past……

Dev feels that there is no point in getting bail & running from the law…..he accepts his crime & goes to jail hoping that it would help his family to forgive him….

At KM…..

Geet: Maan

Maan: haan Geet

Geet: kya baat hai Maan? Aap pareshan lagrahe ho

Maan: kuch nahi Geet, mein teek hoon

Geet: aap joot bol rahe ho

Maan: nahi Geet

Geet: haan Maan, mein jaanthi hoon ki koi toh baat hai jo aapko pareshan kar raha hai

Maan: woh Geet aajkal office mein kuch zyada kaam hai aur Adi aur Pinky bhi chuti mein hai, issiliye thoda pareshan hoon, kal ek important deal sign karna hai

Maan successfully told a lie to Geet, he is actually worried that Geet would come to know about Dev….

Geet: haan Pinky kehrahi thi ki woh Chandigar mein hai

Maan: achcha Geet tum bhi sojao mujhe bhi kal jaldi office jaana hai…..

Geet: Gud night Maan

Maan kisses her Good Night………

Next morning…………..

Maan: Geet….Geet………..jaldi karo mujhe dher ho rahi hai

Dadi: gud mor Maan bete, aap beitiye aapka breakfast tayyar hai

Maan: par dadi Geet kahan hai?

Dadi: humme bhi patha nahi hai bete ki itne subhe subhe Geet kahan gaye hai

Maan: kya? Geet ghar pe nahi hai?

Dadi: haan bete aapko patha nahi?

Maan: usne mujhe kuch nahi kaha

Dadi: woh humse kehke gayi ki aapko inform kardhoon ki woh koi zaroori kaam se gayi

Maan kabragaya…Geet aakhir kahan gayi hogi?...Maan ka mann hi nahi katha office jaane ki…woh Geet ko dekhe bina kuch nahi kar saktha…..

Maan office jaatha…he wants to cancal his meeting & go & find Geet….

He calls Geet….but Geet doesn't answer………………..

At KC………

Maan finds everything organized & ready for the meeting…..

Gud morning Maan sir……….ye kaun hai?

Maan turns back to find out………

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Posted: 12 years ago

Part ? 149

Hare Maan sir??.its Geet??.Geet has come back to KC?..

Maan is so happy to see his Mishty??Geet hurries towards her DD?..

Geet ke pher fisal gayi?she is about to fall?..

Maan usko pakadtha?.mahi???????ab KC ki jaan wapas aagaya?.hare KC ki jaan to Maneet ki romance haina?...

Romeo: lage raho????ab lagtha hai ki ye KC hai?itne din toh Geet ke bina KC kitna boring thi?..hare babaji mere mahi kab hogi? Romeo anxiously looks at Tasha?.

One morning??.Geet kitchen mein hai?.

Maan Tara ko lekhe kahin jaaraha hai?.

Geet : Maan?Maan

Maan: hare Geet tu? Subhe ki char baje tu kitchen mein kya kar rahi ho? Geet tum aajkal kuch zyada toh nahi kathi?

Geet: hare Man mein Pawan ke liye dhoodh garam kar rahi hoon

Maan: ye achcha excuse hai, jab bhi poocho Pawan ke naam hi lethi

Geet: aap pehle bathao ki itne raat ko aap donno kahan jaa rahe ho?

Maan: Geet ye tummare liye raat hogi par ye early morning hai, shayad tumne pehle bar itne jaldi jagah hoga

Geet: par Maan bathao itne subhe Tara ko kahan lekhe jaarahe ho?

Maan: Geet hum running practice karne jaarahe hai

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan Geet, next week Tara ki school mein competitions haina

Geet: Maan aapki beti London Olympics mein India ko represent toh nahi kar rahi haina?

Maan: par Geet Olympics ke liye yehi shuruwaad hai, woh Olympics ho ya school ki race meri beti hamesha no.1 hi rahegi, haina Tara?

Tara: haan Papa

Maan: toh chalo humme losers se baat karke time waste nahi karne chahiye

Geet: kya? mein loser hoon? Toh aap pagal ho jo itne raat ko ek choti si bachchi ko choron ki tarah bhagne le jaa rahe ho

Maan: par Geet iss waqt koi traffic nahi hogi, hum aaram se rajpath pe practice karenge

Geet: Maan aap sach mein pagal ho gaye ho

Maan: Geet tum chalke sojao hum chalte hai

Geet: Maan ek minute

Maan: Geet tu Tara ki fikar mat karo, mein hoona uske saath

Geet: Maan mein bhi aapke saath aathi hoon

Maan: kya?

Geet: haan, aap yahi rukho mein Pawan ko lekhe aathio hoon

Maan: hare Geet, usko kyun jagarahe ho? Sone do usse

Geet: woh toh kab se jag gaya hai, aap car pe wait karo, hum aathe hai

They go??..

Geet: toh Maan aap donno race karo hum time check karte hai, achcha ready

3?..2?..1??..go???

Maan runs fats & comes first?..Tara looks disappointed?.

Geet: aapko itne fast nahi daudna tha

Maan: par Geet ye toh race haina?

Geet: dekho Tara kaise udaas hogayi

Maan:come on Tara aapko aur tez daudna hai

Geet: iss bar mein Tara ke saath race karoongi, aap judge banjao, aapko wahi suit kartha hai, ye lo stop-clock

Maa: par Geet

Geet: Maan hum tayyar hai

Maan: ready??go?..

Geet runs a little slower so that Tara can beat her?.

Geet: hey?Tara jeet gayi?.Tara jeet gayi?

Maan: par ye toh cheating hai

Geet: Maan aap chup raho, dekho Tara kitni kush hai

Maan: par Geet ye toh practice hai, aaise practice karegi toh kal race kase jaategi

Tara:papa ab aapki bari

Maan: comeon Tara iss bar aap Papa ko harao

Geet: Maan aap bade hai, ye barabar ki race nahi hogi

Maan: teek hai, ab Tara aap akhele daudo, hum time check karte hai aur usko improve karte hai?

Geet: ye teek hai?.

After a while?..thaey return?..

On the way Geet finds a chatwala??

Geet: Maaan gadhi rokho gadhi rokho

Maan sudden break lagatha?.

Maan: kya hua Geet? Ulti karna hai kya? Mein toh pehle hi kehraha tha ki itna mat kao

Geet: nahi nahi woh dekho chaat mujhe bhook lagi hai

Maaa: Geet itne subhe subhe chaat kaoogi, pagal hogayo ho kya?

Tara: mujhe bhi khana hai

Maan: Geet tun toh apne saath saath Tara ko bhi bikadrahi ho

Maan finally gets some chaat?..

Geet: Maan aap bhi lo

Maan: nahi nahi

Tara: khao papa?

Maan joins them?..family ho toh aaise!...

next post would be the last part of Maan Ki Geet,

hope U all enjoyed
Edited by ghsp2fan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry guys
mobile se update nahi karsakthi
will update last part in a week
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 150


A couple of years later………
One morning…….
Tara is practicing tai-chi…..
Pawan is trying to distract her……
He is also tring to imitate her….
Tara is annoyed…she asks him to stop disturbing her & leave….
Both of them start fighting…..
Geet hears them shouting & comes there….
Geet: Tara chodo usse
Tara: mamma ye mujhe disturb kartha hai
Pawan: mijhe bhi practice karna hai
Tara: par tumme toh patha hi nahi ki ye kaise karte hai
Pawan: mujhe sab patha hai
Tara: ye joot bol raha hai
Pawan: nahi tum jooti ho
Geet: Tara ye ppke chote bhai haina, usse pyar se samjao toh who samaj jayega
Tara: nahi aap isse abhi yahan se le jayiye
Pawan: mein nahi jaoonga
Geet: chup karo donno
Maan: ye kya ho raha hai?
Tara: papa dekho ye mujhe practice karne nahi detha
Pawan: jooti
Maan: Geet Pawan ko lelhe jao, humme practice karna hai
Geet: kyun? Aap pehle Tara ko samjao, who badi haina
Maan: ye kya baat kar rahi ho tum? Tara badi ho toh kya? Who toh
zindagi bar Pawan se badi hi rahegi, isska matlab who hamesha adjust
karte rahegi hai kya?
Geet: Maan aap hamesha uska saath hi kyun dethe ho? Pawan chota haina
usko ye sab patha nahi
Pawan: mein chota nahi hoon, mein bada hogaya hoon
Tara: nahi tum chote ho
Geet: Tara aaise nahi kehte
Maan: Geet tum hamesha Tara ko kyun dadthi ho?
Geet: Maan aap issko nahi jaanthe, ye badi chalaak hai, hamesha Pawan
ko rulathi hai
Maan: kabardar meri beti ke barein mein tum aaise kaise bol sakthi?
Geet: Maan ye sab aap ki wajhe se hi ho raha hai
Maan: kya? Meinne kya kiya?
Geet:Maan aapko tai-chi sikhana hai toh donno ko sikha, Tara ko hi
kyun sikhate ho?
Maan: Geet ye kaisi faltu batein kar rahi ho, Pawan abhi bachcha hai
Geet: toh Tara ko bhi wait karne do phir donno ek saath seekhenge
Maan: Geet ye Tara ke liye sahi waqt hai shuru karne ki
Geet: toh Pawan ko bhi sikhao, thoda easy steps
Maan: Gee tab tum bachchon ki tarah zidd karne lagi ho
Geet: kya? Mein ziddi hoon?
Maan: haan
Geet: toh aap kya kar rahe ho?
Maan: Geet ye teek nahi hai
Geet: kyat eek nahi hai, Mr.MSK?
Hamesha ki tarah Maneet ki ladayi shuru hogayi…..
Tara aur Pawan wahan se chalke Dadi ko bhulake aathe hai….
Dadi: toh aap donno subhe subhe shuru hogaye hai kya? Maan bete aap
toh kaise bachchon ki tarah ladrahe ho, dekho in bachchon ko kaise
samajdar hai, aaplog inse kuch seekho, aaplog inke maabaap hai, ab toh
bade ho jao
Maan: Dadi aaise teek se sajayiye Geet ko
Geet: Geet ko kyun? Dadi aap apne pothe ko samjayiye pehle
Maneet Tm & Jerry show continues…….ye tab tak chalegi jab tak Tom &
Jerry hai….forever………….
Geet gets angry & leaves……Maan also gtes ready & leaves for
office….Geet ko chodke hi chala gaya…..Geet bhi ghar pe hi rehtthi…………

Hanesha ki tarah KC mein aaj sabko patha chalgaya ki Maan ki mood teek
nahi hai….Maan bana Angry singh…..uppar se Geet bhi nahi aayi…..sab
Maan se chupke hi rehte….bechare Adi ke seva…who toh bach nahi
saktha…..
By evening Maan feels bad…he leaves early…..
On the way he gets ice-cream for the kids….no…no…for his Mishty….

At KM…….
Maan: Geet…Geet….
Tara: papa
Pawan: mere papa
Tara: nahi mere papa
Maan: bas karo tum donno, ye lo ice-cream khao, ab bathao aapke mamma kahan hai?
Pawam: who upper hai
Maan Geet ko ice-cream lekhe jaatha……
Geet abhi abhi nahake aayi hai….woh aaine ke samne bhaal sukharahi hai…..
Maan apni Mishty ko dekhte hi rehtha….
Maan slowly gets near her…..Geet could sense his presence…..
Maan hugs her from the back………..
Geet: Maan choda mujhe…
Maan lifts her & carries her to the bed…..
Geet: Maan ye aap kya kar rahe ho?
Maan: chup bilkul chup
Ab Geet ki bolti bandh…….
Mahiii………….ice-cream melts…………….
Geet bhi ice-cream ki tarah bigal gayi….
Maan suke saath hai toh bechari ki kya haal hogi?...
Mahi continues………………………….

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Posted: 12 years ago
hey ...khatam ho gaya ...kya ...plzzz write something new

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