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Part 112

Next day ….Nandhini ki shadhi …Daman ke saath……

Geet toh bahut kush hai..uski behen ki shadhi hai….

Upper se woh maa bannewali hai…..

Maan ki bache ki………Geet is so proud now…..

She just keeps smiling & giggling…….

Maan just loves to see her like that…….

Shadhi toh Nandhini ki ho rahi hai….

Par ye donno toh waise behave kar rahe hai jaise ki ye

Nandhini ki nahi balke unki shadhi ho……

Chup chup k eek dusre ko dekhthe rehthe hai……

Maneet enjoy the party………

Nandhini ki bidaai……..

Beeji becomes emotional……..

Geet ko uski shadhi yaad aathi……

Woh kaise apne maike(OutHouse) chodke KM mein katam rakha…

Maan ki gajini style impressions…..

Kaise Maan apne Mishty ko hamesha ki tarah apne bahon mein lekhe gaya….

Maeet ki lift toh duniya mein sabse alag hai….

Jaise Geet Maan ki bahon mein aane ke liye hi banni hai……

How Maan lifts her with ease & how comfortably she fits in his arms……..

Geet toh flashback mein koi hui hai….

Maan : Geet……...Geeet………

Geet: haan Maan

Maan: Geet sab Nandhini ko sendoff karne bahar chale gaye

Tum yahan kya kar rahi ho…….

Geet: Maan woh mein…….she couldn't speak……..

She just goes & hugs him……….

Maan toh confused hai…….

Kush bhi ho Maan toh bahut kush hai……

Aaise moka bar bar nahi miltha……..

Next day………….

Maan: Geet ab toh humme chalna chahiye

Geet: haan mein bhi yahi soch rahi thi

Maan: teek hai tum beeji ko inform kardo

Geet: teek hai Maan, mein jaake beeji se baat karthi hoon….

Maan: mein bhi Adi se kehke tickets confirm kartha hoon

Geet leaves…………





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Part – 113

Geet goes to meet beeji……..

Geet: Beeji……

Beeji: haan Geet bolo kya baat hai?

Geet: woh beeji, Maan ko Delhi mein bahut zaroori kaam hai

Toh humme chalna hai…

Beeji: hare Geet, damadji toh kal hi aaye hai, aur shadhi ke

Tension mein unka swaghat bhi teek se nahi ho payi…

Geet: lekin beeji….

Beeji: lekin wekin kuch nahi Geet, hummare damadji pehle bar

Aaye hai toh unko do din rukhna hi hoga, tum bhi petse ho toh

Tumme Delhi bejne ki man hi nahi kartha..

Geet: par beeji, Maan toh keh rahe the ki unko kal hi jaana hoga…

Tabbi Maan wahan aatha hai….woh beeji ke bathon ko suntha toh usse

Bhi lagtha hai ki beeji teek kehrahi hai….

At this time Geet needs some caring & pampering by her family….

She has missed it earlier & now Maan wants to make sure that

She gets all the attention & love that she deserves this time….

Maan ko ye bhi patha hai ki agar woh Delhi wapas jayega toh

Geet bhi uske saath chalegi……Maan decides to stay there for a week…

Delhi mein bhi Dadima nahi hai toh Geet akhele hi hogi…

Geet: Maan mein toh beeji se hummare jaane ki baat hi kar rahi thi

Beeji: Geet meine kaha na tum kahi nahi jaanewali hai, haina damadji?

Maan: haan Geet, beeji bilkul teek kehrahe hai,

Humme koi jaldi nahi hai, hum agle hafte jasakthe hai

Geet toh shock ho gayi….

Geet: hare inko kya hogaya? Babaji kya mein sapney dekh rahi hoon?

Maan: nahi Geet

Geet: par Maan Kc…….

Maan: woh toh mein yahi se bhi sambal saktha, internet haina

Geet: thankyou Maan, mujhe bhi yahan thode din rukhne ki man kar rha hai

Maan: mein samaj saktha hoon Geet

Geet ki dil ki baat toh Geet se behthar Maan hi jaantha haina…

Maneet passionate hug….mahi…..

Tabbi mamaji aathe hai…

Mamaji: hare Balwant…..tu kya kar raha hai yahan?

Maan: mamajiii

Mamaji: chalo mere saath humme bahut wada case mil gaya

Maan: Geeet……

Mamaji: hammer shanno ki billi gayab ho gayi hai……..

Mamaji Maan ko drag karke jaahte hai………

Geet looks at this & smiles…………

Maan toh iss smile ke liye kuch bhi kar saktha haina?


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Part – 114

Next few days………

Sab Maan ko damad nahi koi prince ki tarah treat karthe hai…

Respect karthe hai seva mamaji ki….

Mamaji ke liye toh woh Balwant hi hai………

Maan mamaji se bachke rehtha….Geet bhi uski madat karthi……

Aaise hi woh donno mamaji se chupne ke bahane terrace mein

Fields mein…. garden mein …sare jagah romance karthe rehthe hai….

Maan ko ye royal treatment thoda embarrass kartha hai…

Par Maan ko aaisa treatment koi nayi baat nahi

KC ka aur KM ka bhi woh prince hi hai…..

But this is different, ye sara attention MSK ko nahi balki Geet Handa ki

Pathi ko milraha hai…Maan feels proud about his Mishty…

Akhir woh bhi Maan Ki Geet hai……………..

Geet thoda jealous feel karthi…

Maan: kya baat hai Geet tum kuch pareshan lag raha ho?

Geet: kuch nahi bas yuhi…

Pammi: Maanji ya lijiya juice, hare Lachi woh samose jaldi lana

Lachi: aayiii…jijaji ye lijiye garma garam samose.

Pammi: Maanji raatko aap kya kayenge? Shahi paneer ya dum aaloo

Beeji: ye kaise sawal kar rahi ho? Donno hi bannado

Pammi: tek hai beeji

Geet: hare mein preg hoon ya Maan? Sab unke peeche kyun padhe hai?

Maan: Geet, tumne kuch kaha?

Geet: beeji par inne toh bhaingan bhartha hi pasand hai

Geet knows that Maan hates brinjal

Lachi: toh teek hai Geet Didi, mein abhi jaake bazaar se taaze bhaingan

Lekhe aathi hoon, haina beeji?

Pammi: haan Lachi jaldi kar, mein bakki tayyari karthi hoon

Maan wants to divert their attention to Geet…

Maan: hare Geet…kya hua?

Maan suddenly catches hold of her & winks…..

Beeji: Geet kya hua?

Lachi: Geet Didi……

Maan: kuch nahi, lagtha hai thoda kamjori hai, kuch

Khayegi toh teek ho jayegi

Pammi: Geet beito, thoda aaram karoge toh sab teek ho jayega

Beeji: koi baat nahi puthar, kabrao mat, aaise samay mein ye sab hotha hai

Lachi: mein jaake Didi ko badam ki kheer bannake lathi hoon

Maaan: aur raatko aaloo parathe aur gol gappe banadena,

Geet ko woh bahut pasand hai

Lachi: teek hai jijaji

Geet feels that she is very lucky to have Maan in her life…..




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Part – 115

Next day….Geet's family arrive….

They have come to greet Geet….

Daarji, papaji, Rano, rajji, Titto sab aaye hai….

Sabke aane se Geet toh bahut kush hai…

Itne sare log ek saath ho toh hungama ho jaatha hai….

Bechara MSK! Usko toh ye sab ki aadat nahi hai…

Woh toh hamesha ye sab shor dhor se dhoor hi rehte hai…

Ab toh Maan nervous hai…aur toh aur woh apne Mishty ke saath

Chaiin se ek do baat bhi nahi kar paya…

Sab Geet ke peeche padhe hai….loi nahi ho toh ye Lachi ki bachi

Aajathi hai, kissi juice ya snacks lekhe…Geet Didi Geet Didi kehke

Ek din…

Lachi: Geet Didi…Didi……..

Maan toh wahan kadha hai toh ussne Maan ko dekha hi nahi….

Seedhe Maan ke upar takragayi….sara juice Maan ke shirt par…

Upar se Lachi hasne lagi…

Maan: Geeet………

Geet wahan aathi…ye kya ? Geet bhi hasne lagi….

MSK toh DD bangaya……..gussa ho gaya…

He just leaves…

Ye mamaji bhi Balwant Balwant kehke Maan ke peeche hi padhe hai….

Ab Maan to tak chukka hai mamaji ke saath reh rehka…

He needs a break from aal this madness……

Maan: ab mujhse nahi hoga, kuch toh karma hi hoga

Maan Geet ko kahin bahar lejaana chahatha hai…

Iss Amritsar circus se dhoor……..

Ab woh Rajji ki madat lekhe Geet ko bazaar mein milne ka plan banatha..

Par Rajji sochne lagi………

Maan: hare kya soch raho ho?

Rajji: jijaji Geet bazaar kyun aayegi?

Maan: mujhe kya patha? Woh toh tummari behen hai,

Tumme hi patha hoga ki uski teda dimag ko kaise sambalna, haina?

Rajji: jijaji aap Geet Didi ki mazak udathe toh mein usko bazaar lekhe nahi aaoongi

Maan: kya? Tummari ye himmat, tum MSK ko mama karegi?

Rajji toh dar hi gayi….

Rajji: jijaji……..

Maan: woh…woh tum kaise bhi Geet ko lekhe aao….pls………..

Rajji maann gayi………



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Part – 116

Next day……….

Rajji: Geet..Geet……

Geet kitchen mein kuch khan eke liye dhoondh rahi hai….

Rajji: toh geet tum yahan ho

Geet: hare Rajji lo tum bhi ladoo kalo

Rajji: Geet tum ab bhi chori chori ladoo khathe ho kya?

Geet: nahi toh

Rajji: Geet tum toh bahut bada gayi

Geet toh kuch sunthi hi nahi…woh toh ladooo kaathe rahi….

Rajji:Geet, meri baat toh suno

Geet: haan haan…sun rahi hoon

Rajji: Geet tum toh shahari guddi ban gayi ho, haina

Tummare kapde bhi badal gaye hai….mujhe bhi aaise kapde silwana hai

Geet: tum chaho toh mere kapde try kar sakthi hai

Rajji: nahi nahi

Geet: kyun? Tum toh hamesha mere kapde pehennna hi pasand karthi ho…

Kitne bar mere nayi lapde churake pehenthi thi..ab kya hua?

Rajji: woh …Geet….Maan jijaji…

Geet: kya? Maan! Kahan hai woh?

Rajji: woh nahi Geet, haan mein toh kehrahi thi ki ab mein tummre kapde

Kaise pehen sakthi? Jijaji ko achcha nahi lagega haina?

Geet: aaise koi baat nahi, yahan aao, dekho kaunsa dress pasand hai

Rajji: ye Geet bhi na abhi bhi nahi sudhari, bilkul buddu hai, bechare

Maan jiju…isko shadhi karke kaise fus gaye hai!

Geet: hare tu wahan kadhe kadhe kya bak bak kar rahi ho?yahan aao

Rajji: Geet… mujhe naye kapde silwana hai..woh bhi abhi..

Tum chalo mere saath, hum bazaar chalthe hai

Geet: par Rajji, tum itna ziddi kaise ho gayi?

Rajji: Geet tum pehle chalo mere saath….

Rajji Geet ko zabardasti lekhe chalthi…………

Maan toh mamaji ke saath fus jaatha….

Mamaji: Balwant

Maan: ji mamaji

Mamaji: itne subhe subhe tu kahan ja raha hai?

Maan: woh…mein bahar jaa raha hoon, aapkeliye videsi maal lene ke liye

Woh kya kehthe? Haan scotch

Mamaji gets closer to Maan & whispers….

Mamaji: Balwant, behen ko ye baat mat bathana….ye top secret hai….

Maan: haan mamaji aap fikar mat karo, mein yun gaya yun aaya

Mamaji toh Maan ko pappiyan dethe hai….

Maan: hare mamaji…chodo mujhe, mujhe jaldi jaana hai

Geet mere liye wait kar rahi hogi

Mamaji: kya? Geet? Woh bhi peethi hai kya?

Maan: maaamaaaji……meine kaha geetha stores, haan wahi scotch miltha hai

Mamaji: toh mein bhi chaltha hoon

Maan: nahi nahi, aap nahi aasakthe…

Mamaji: kyun nahi aasakthe ho tum?

Maan: mein nahi mamaji…aaap

Mamaji toh jeep mein chalke betgaye…

Ab toh Maan ko unko ssath hi lejaana hai……….


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PART – 117

At the marketplace……

Rajji toh bar bar idhar udhar dekhthe rehthi hai…

Rajji: ye Maan jijaji ab tak kyun nahi aaye hai?

Geet: ye dekho ye color bahut sundar haian?

Rajji: nahi nahi kuch aur dikhayiye

Geet: Rajji kya baat hai? Tummara dhyan kahan hai?

Subhe se 7 dukhan dekh chuke hai, tumme kapde lena hai ki nahi?

Rajji: Geet, ye toh tummare kapde jaise nahi hai

Geet: aaise kapde toh delhi mein hi milthe hai, tum mujhe yahan kyun

Lekhe aayi ho, chalo hum chalthe hai, aaise kapde mein tumme agle bar

Delhi se lekhe aathi hoon….

Rajji: rukho Geet, bhaiyaji ye dress pack kardho

Geet: rajji kya kar rahi ho? Ye dress toh tummne reject kiya tha, haina?

Rajji: Geet mujhe yahi pasand hai

Rajji Geet ko lekhe masterji ke paas jaathi…

Ab tak Maan bhi wahan aagaya….

Mamaji: hare Balwant kahan hai woh? Kya naam tha? matha store?

Maan: mamaji aap yahi rukho, mein abhi aatha hoon

Mamaji: nahi nahi, tum toh bahut chote ho, tumme nahi denge,

Mein chaltha hoon tere saath….

Maan: chaliye…..Maan is very upset……

Masterji ko lagtha hai ki woh kapde Geet ke hai…

Masterji Geet ki measurements lene paas chalthe hai…

Maan toh aagaya…..Maan masterji ke haath ko aaisa

Zor se pakadtha ki masterji agle do mahine kissi ka bhi measurements

Nahi le sakthe…unke haath toh toot gayi…..

Geet: Maan…chodiye

Maan stares masterji….masterji escapes…..

Maan: Geet tum kya kar rahi ho?

Geet: Maan ye aapne teek nahi kiya, ab Rajji ke kapde ko

Kaun silwayega,, aap?

Rajji: tu uski chinta mat karo…jijaji mein chalthi hoon…

Geet: hare rajji…Rajji…kya hua iss ladki ko?

Maan: Geet meine hi tumme yahan lane ke liye ye sab kiya hai

Geet: kya? Toh ye sab aapka plan hai

Maan: haan geet, tummare ghar mein toh hum baat bhi nahi karpathe

Ab yahan humme koi disturb nahi karega

Mamaji: Balwant…….balwant………….

Geet: mamaji aap yahan kya kar rahe ho?

Maan: mamaji………..

Mamaji: woh mera maal milgaya hai kya?

Maan gets a bottle from his pocket & gives it to mamaji….

Mamaji se toh chutkara milgayi……….

Ab toh Maneet ek dusre ke saath aaram se baat kar sakteh hai………

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Geet: Maan ye aapne mamaji ko kya diya hai?

Maan: Geet chodo mamaji ko, ab toh hum hummare bare mein baat karthe

Geet: Maan mujhe yahan kyun laye ho

Maan: ek samay hua kartha tha jab hum donno kahi bhi akhele ek dusre ko milthe the

Geet: par Maan tab toh hummre shadhi nayi hui

Maan: shadhi ho gayi toh kya hua? Maan toh apne Mishty ko kabhi bhi aaise mil saktha

Geet: haanji…ab kya Karen?

Maan: Geet mein tumme kuch gift karma chahatha hoon,tumme kya chahiye?

Bolo Geet, kuch bhi ho mujhe kaho

Geet ek chudi ki dukhan mein chalke kubsurat choodiyan lelkhe aathi….

Teek ussi chudiyon ki tarah jo Maan ne Geet se shadhi ke baat pehenane ki wada ki..

Lal aur safed…maneet ki pasand ki colors…..

Maan apne Mishty ko choodiyan pekenatha hai….

Geet shakes her hands & makes some noise…..

Geet: Maan kaisa hai? Achcha haina?

Maan: haan Geet, toh tumme ye chudi hi chahiye hai kya?

Geet: haan Maan dekho kitne achche hai

Maan: Geet, tum chaho toh mein tummare liye kuch bhi lakhe desakthe hoon

Par tumme ye chudi hi chahiye, kyun Geet?

Geet: Maan mujhe toh bas aapke saath hi chahiye, janam janam ke liye,

Ye chudiyan toh bas aapki aasha ko puri karne ke liye kareedhi hoon

Maan Geet ko apne paas keenchke hug katha…..Mahi…….

Maan: Geet mujhe toh bahut bhook lagi hai

Geet: mujhe bhi

Maan: toh chalo, hum kissi dhabe pe chalthe hai

Geet: par mujhe to ye khana hai….

Geet points to the cotton candy shop….colorful pink, yellow & white candies…

Geet bachchon ki tarah har color mein ek lekhe bahut maze se kathi hai…

Maan just watches her…………

Geet finishes it in a minute….

Geet: Maan aap nahi kayenge?

Maan: kaoonga na

Geet: par meine toh sab katam kardhi

Maan: nahi Geet, mere liye haina

Geet: kahan?

Maan gets closer to her…

Geet ki cheels par kuch candy chipak raha hai….

Ab kya hoga? Mahiii



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Part – 119

Next day………

Geet jaldi utgayi….

Maan abhi bhi so raha hai….

Geet Maan ko dekhte rehthi…..

Maan toh jagh gaya…par Geet ke samne sonne ka natak kar raha hai

Geeet: Maan toh ab tak so rahe hai…

Geet Maan ke paas chale jaathi….she juct caresses his cheeks….

Maan Geet ko pakadke apne paas keechtha….

Geet falls over him…Mahi……..

Beeji: Geet…..Geet puthar….kahan ho tum?

Geet: Maan chodiye…beeji bhularahi hai

Maan toh kaske pakadtha….

Gaat: hare Maan ye delhi nahi, Amritsar hai

Maan: toh kya hua? Mein toh apne Mishty ko kahin bhi romance kar saktha

Geet: haan haan…chodiye

Mamaji: Balwant…Balwant

Ab toh Maan washroom mein jaake chup jaatha….

Mamaji: Geet, Balwant kahan hai

Geet: mamaji Balwant yahan nahi hai

Mamaji: par meinne abhi abhi uski aawaz suna hai

Geet: nahi mamaji, yahan koi nahi hai, aap toh beeji kiaawaz sunaye hai

Beeji: Geeet……..

Geet: dekho Beeji aapko bhularahi hai

Mamaji kabra gaye…

Mamaji: par meinne toh kuch nahi kiya….aaya behen

Geet neeche chale jaathi…

Geet: aayi beeji…..kya baat hai Beeji?

Dadi: Geet bete…

Geet: dadima….

Geet is pleasantly surprised to see Dadi…

Geet: dadima, aap yahan?

Dadi: Geet bete, jase hum aapke bhare mein suna hai tabse aapko dekhne ka mann kar raha tha, toh hum mata di ki aashirvad lekhe seedhe yahan aagaye

Maan: Dadi aap ek phone kiye toh mein aapko lene station aajatha

Dadi: mein toh aap sabko surprise dena chahathi thi…

Geet: dadi aapne teek kiya, mujhe bhi aapko dekhne ki mann kar raha tha

Dadi: humme malum hai bete, waise yahan aake babaji ka darshan bhi hojayega




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