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Part – 104

Geet: hare ye kya? Kahin kal ki shadi walon gussa hoke hummare

Ghar mein toh nahi gus gaye?...

Geet toh hamesha ulta hi sochthi,,,par uski baat mein bhi kuch dum hai….

Koi KM mein band bhaja lekhe bina permission gus gaya….

Ye kaun ho saktha?...zarooor koi baharwala hi hoga, warna yahan toh

Sabko Maan sir ki gussa yaad haina……..

Sare naukar bhi ye music sunke apne kaam chodke Maan ki

Gusse ko bhoolkar bahar aagaye….tamasha dekhne……

Ab Mr.khurana toh rudra murthy bangaye……bas thandav ki bakhi hai….

Geet comes out to see what's happening……..

Geet: hare ye toh mamaji hai……

Laut aagaye jasooz mamaji…..indian 007…

Maan: ye kya tamasha ho raha hai? Aaplog ko kisne andhar aane diya…

Securiiityyy…………..

Geet: Maan…Man……ek minute

Maan: hare music band karo…stop………………

Maan ki aawaaz sunke sab chup hogaye….there is silence atlast……..

Mamaji toh dhar hi gaye….

Geet: Maan ye hummare mamaji hai Amritsar se aaye hai…..

Maan: kya? Mujhe toh pehle hi shak tha, ye toh tummare hi

Rishtedar ho sakthe hai…….hummare parivaar mein aaise log nahi hai..

Honge toh bhi Pagalkhane mein …….

Mamaji:Geet ye villain kaun hai? Ye tumme pareshan kartha hai kya?

Tum daro mat, ab tummare mamaji aagaye, mein patha kartha hoon ki ye

Balwant singh ka asli chehra kya hai? Mamaji laughs………….

Geet toh pareshan hogayi……mamaji phir shuru hogaye….

Geet: hare babaji mujhe bachoa……………

Maan: Geet ye kya kehrahe hai?

Geet: mamaji ye mere pathi hai, Maan

Mamaji: kya ye Maan hai? Toh balwant kahan hai?

Gee: Maan aap tension mat lo. Mamaji aaise hi hai, aap nastha karka office

Chale jao, mein baad mein aapko sab samjadhoongi….

Maan: Geet mein chaltha hoon……..

Geet: Maan apka breakfast……

Maan escapes……………


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part 103 n 104
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Part – 105

Geet: hare mamaji aap kahan jaa rahe ho?

Mamaji: woh mein Balwant singh detective ko assist karne jar aha hoon

Mein ab Balwnat singh ke assistant hoon, haina Balwant ji?

Geet: mamaji aap mere saath aayiye, mamaji ye log kaun hai?

Mamaji: mujhe kya patha? Aap log yahan kya kar rahe ho?

Geet yahan koi shadi wadhi ho rahi hai kya? Tummara pathi tumme dokha dekhe kissi aur se shadi karnewala hai kya? Mamaji becomes serious……..

Geet: mamaji pehle aap andhar aao, nakul unko paise dakhe wapas bejho

Mamaji fresh hoke breakfast karne aathe hai……

Geet: toh mamaji, beeji kaise hai? Aur teji paaji, Nabdhini, lucky veerji

Sab kaise hai?

Mamaji: Geet sab teek hai, par behen net oh mujhe kissi kaam se bejha

Tha, woh kya kaam hai? Tumme kuch patha hai?

Geet: mamaji….aap phir bhool gaye!

Mamaji: haaan…mujhe yaad aagaya, ye lo padlo, behen ne toh mujhe ye chitti

Dene ke liye bejha hai

Geet: kya aap postman bangaye? Toh aapka jamesbond business ka kya hua?

Geet reads the letter, woh toh nandhini ki shadi ki invitation hai, baaji ne uske saath

Apna phone no. bhi bejha hai, aur Geet ko call karne ke liye kaha hai

Geet calls beeji……

Geet: halo…

Nandhini: Geet didi……Nandhini bahut kush hojathi…..

Geet: Nandhini tum…toh tum itni badi hogayi, ab toh shadi bhi karnewali

Hai ….congrats…..

Nandhini: thanks didi…par mein toh tabhi shadi karoongi jab aap mere saath ho

Geet: zaroor…mein aaj hi mamaji ke saath Amritsar chalthi hoon, tummare jijaji

Ko bhi saath mein lathi hoon, tum beeji ko inform kardho

Nandhini kushi se nach rahi hai: wow….didi aarahi hai……

Beeeji..beeji………….

Beeji: kya baat hai puthar?

Nanadhini: Geet didi aarahi hai….delhi se………



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Part 106

Geet toh ye kabar sunthehi packing shuru kardhi….

Woh toh office bhi nahi chali….

Maan ko lagtha hai ki Geet mamaji ke saath rehna chahati hogi…..

In the evening…..

Geet toh Maan ka intrezar kar rahi hai…..

Maan comes……

Maan: Geet…..Geet…..

Geet: Maan aap aagaye? Geet toh bahut kush hai……

Maan: kya baat hai Geet? Aaj toh tum bahut kush lag rahe ho..Geet ko kush dekhkar

Maan toh majnu bangaya…..

Geet: Maan mein toh kab se aap ka intrezar kar rahi hoon….

Maan toh aur romantic ho gaya…: achcha toh aaj ka kya plan hai?

Geet: Maan……

Maan gets closer with his killer looks…..

He lifts her gently & carries her to the bedroom…..

On the way………

Geet toh speechless ho gayi… ab toh Geet kuch bhi kahe woh Maan ko sunahi nahi dega…

Tabbi mamaji aathe hai…..

Mamaji: hare Balwant tu? Tu yahan kya kar raha hai?

Geet: mamaji…shhh……Geet asks him to keep quiet….

Mamaj: whispers: ssshhh…….kya baat hai Geet?

Mamaji ko lagtha hai ki koi chor ghar mein gus gaya…..

Mamaji Maan ke peeche chup chup ke jaake usko pakadthe hai…..

Mamaji: chor……chor….Geet police ko bulao….

Maan: Geeet……..

Geet: mamaji chodiye…woh Maan hai

Mamaji: Maan? Woh kaun hai? Koi bada dhaku hai kya?

Tum kabrao mat… koi mujhse baj nahi saktha….

Geet: Maan ye mamaji hai

Maan toh mamaji ko pakadke sofa mein seat kartha….

Geet: mamaji ye aapke damad hai , MSK, mere pathi

Mamaji: oye! Mein toh bhool hi gaya, halo…my bond…Punjab da bond….

Maan: Geet ye kya keh rahe hai?

Geet: Maaan……

Maan: toh mamaji aaise achanak kyun aaye hai?

Geet: Maan meine kaha than a hummre beeji ke bhare mein woh Amritsar wali…

Maan: haan Geet….par Maan ko to kuch yaad nahi aatha….

Geet: woh Nandhini ki shadi hai, mamaji humme lene aaye hai

Nandhini ki shadi hai….kitna maza aayega!

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Part – 107

Maan couldn't believe what he is hearing….

Maan: kya? Geet tumne kya kaha?

Geet: hare Maan apke salli ki shadi hai, toh chalein?

Meine toh sare packing kardhi, Adi sir ne tickets bhi book kardhi

Maan: kya Adi ne mujhe kuch nahi kaha….

Geet: woh meine hi kaha ki ye apkeliye surprise hai

Toh kaise laga meri surprise

Maan ko toh zor ka jatka laga…..

Maan: Geet ye toh wakhay hi badi surpise hai, par tum aaise kaise

Jaa sakthi ho?

Geet: Maan tum…tum ka kya matlab…hum jaa rahe hai Amritsar…

Yaad hai jab hum pehle bar Amritsar chalet oh aap kaise mogambo

Banke beite the….

Geet goes to flashback…..

How can we forget Mr.Angry Singh Khurana ,unke attitude,

woh open jeep…dari hui Geet…sher singh khurana se milke

sherni kaise ban gayi aaj……………

Maan bhi yaad kartha woh haseen pal jo usne anjaane mein apne

Mishty ke saath bithaye……..

Geet: Maaan…..Maaan…jaldi chalo warna train miss hojayegi

Maan: kya? Kaha?

Geet: hare Amritsar, aur kahan?

Maan: mein? Amritsar? Nahiii

Mein iss comedy circus ke judge nahi banna chahatha

Geet: kya kaha apne?

Maan: Geeet, mere baat ko samjo, tum chaho to shadi ke din chale jao..

Abhi jaake kya karogi?

Geet: Maan ye kaise baat kar rahe hai aap? Ye mere behen ki shadi hai,

Mujhe toh aaj hi jaana hai

Maan gets angry…..

Maan: toh teek hai Geet, chale jao, par mein nahi aanewala…

Geet: teek haiMr.MSK, mein chalthi hooon, chaliye mamaji

Maan: kya? Geeet……

Geet toh sach mein gusse hoke chale jathi…

Maan: ye ladki kabhi nahi sudhregi, mein job hi kahooon uska ulta hi

Karthi..shayad agle bar mujhe reverse psychology use karma hoga,

Nahi nahi….woh toh tab bhi apne manmaani hi karegi, hare babaji

Mujhe bachaaao…..

Geet bag nikaalke chalne ki tayyari karthi…..

Maan: Geet…Geeet….

Geet toh kuch sunne ki mood mein nahi hai….

Geet: Maan apko nahi aana toh teek hai, par mein toh chal rahi hoon..

Maan: toh tummne decide kar hi liya hai toh teek hai Geet

Geet starts to leave…

Maan: Geeet….

Geet turns back….

Maan: apna khyal rakhna….aur haan mamaji se bhajke rehna…

Geet smiles & leaves…….


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Part – 108

At Amritsar……

Geet receives a warm welcome…..

Geet toh sabse milkar bahut kush hai…..

Aur toh aur Punjabi khane ko woh kitna miss karthi thi….ab toh woh toot padi…

Geet Nandhini ke saath shoping chale jaathi….

Aaise hi do din Geet enjoy karthi….

Par agle din woh Maan ko miss karne laghi…..

Nandhini: Geet didi jijaji kab aarahe hai?

Geet: woh toh kissi kaam mein fus gaye hai, mujhe nahi lagtha

Woh aayenge?...

Nandhini: kya? Woh nahi aarahe hai?

Geet: chodo unko, mein toh aagayi na?

Nanadhini: Didi ye dekho mehendhi designs….

Kaunsa design accha hai?

Geet toh shadi ke kaam mein busy hai…..

Next morning….breakfast ke samay……

Geet ko ulti aathi …..

Nandhini: kya baat hai Didi? Koi goodnews hai kya?

Beeji: ye aajkal ki ladkhiyan bhi na, hamesha dieting dieting

Kehke bhuke hi rehthe aur apni tabyat karab karthe hai

Tum fikar mat karo Geet, dekho iss dus din mein mein tumme kaise tayyar karthi

Nanadhini: sambalkhe beeji, kahin Maan jiju ko Geet Didi ko pehechan na

Paye toh kya hoga?

Geet: Nandhini, chup kar..

Beeji: hare lachi…..ye kahan gayi?...

Par Geet ko shak hotha hai….

Kahin Nandhini ki baat sach toh nahi?...

Beeji: hare gudhyon, sab kahan ho? Jaldhi karo, kal haldhi ka rasam hai

Aur dekho abhi bhi kitne tayyariyan bakhi hai

Geet ko apni haldhiwali din yaad aagayi…

Kaise Maan Geet ko chup chup ke haldhi kagaya tha……

Hai kitne haseen pal the………

Geet: hare beeji aap tension mat lo, mein hoona aap pehle kaho ki

Kya baat hai?

Beeji: Geet tum Lucky ke saath chalke ye list ke saman lekhe aao

Geet bazaar chalthi….aur woh apni shak ko confirm karma chahathi…..

Woh wahan ek doctor ko milthi……


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Part – 109

Geet ko kush kabri milthi hai ki nanne MSK aanewala hai….

Geet toh kushi se nachne laghi….doctor usko hosh mein lathi…..

Doctor: Mrs.khurana sambhalke…aap ab maa bannewali hai….

Geet: thankyou doctor……

Geet toh abhi ke abhi ye kabar Maan ko dena chhathi…

Geet: thankyou babaji, mein toh Maan ko ye gift den eke liye

Kitne din se intrezar karthi rahi…..

Par Gee tab tu Maan ko kaise bathaooge…

Tu toh Maan ko chodke yahan chali aagayi…..

Socho Geet socho….

Geet: babaji ye kya hogaya? Mujhe bhi abhi Maan se dhoor aana hai kya?

Ye baat toh mein phone mein nahi kehsakthi, mein toh Maan ko

Ye baat kaise kahooon, mein Nandhini ki shadhi ko

Choke nahi jaa sakthi, par Maan toh yahan aasakthe haina, haina babaji?

Gee tab Maan ko amritsar lane ki plan karthi…..

Geet ko idea milgayi…..

Woh ek phone booth se Maan ko phone karke kehthi..

" Mr.Maan Singh, Brij jail se bahar aagaya aur ab Amritsr mein hai"

Ab ye kabar sunke toh Maan Delhi mein ruk nahi saktha haina?

Maan toh bahut kabra gay…..

Maan: ye Geet ko akhele nahi bhejna chahiye, meine toh bahut badhi galthi

Kardhi…ab mein kya karooon, meine toh Geet se shadhi mein aane ke liye

Na boldhi..ab kaise jaoon….

Maan ko bhi idea aagaya….

Aakhir mamaji ke asar MSK ko bhi padgayi…

Maan bana Balwant Singh…….

Mein yamla bagla deewana……

Maan ki damakedar entry……….




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Part – 110

Ab Maan ko wahan koi nahi pehechantha…….

Maan: mamaji….mamaji…..

Beeji : ye kaun hai?

Mamaji: behen, ye Balwant hai, Delhi mein bahut wada jazoos hai

Ye mera student hai…

Maan: haan ji, meinne toh sab mamaji se hi seekha hoon

Geet toh Maan ko pehachangayi………

Geet: haan Balwant, tu Delhi mein kahan rehthe ho?

Maan: woh madamji mein toh noida mein rehtha hoon

Geet: tumme koi madat ki zaroorat ho toh tum KC aaooo

Mein apne pathi se kehke tumme koi kaam dilwathi hoon

Maan ko toh bahut gussa aatha hai….par ab woh Balwant haina……

Maan: ji madamji….mamaji ki hothe hue mujhe koi problem nahi hai

Geet: mamaji ye yahan kyun aaya hai? Woh Nandhini ki shadi mein madat

Karne aaya hai, kyun Balwant?

Mamaji: haan puthar, tumme koi bhi kaam ho toh Balwant ko bhulana

Geet: ji mamaji…

Maan: Geet……..

Geet: kya kaha tumne? Madam kaho

Maan stares her……….Geet gets away….

Geet Lucky, Pammi,Lachi sabko kehthi hai ki koi bhi kaam

Ho toh Balwant se karwana…..

Lucky: hoi.. toh tum Balwant ho?

Maan stares……

Lucky toh Maan ki body ko dekhke thoda pareshan hotha….

Lucky: hare Balwant tum bhi body shody banathe ho, very good

Tumme koi bhi tipps chahiye toh mujhse pooch, mein Amritsar da bailwan

Lucky Singh hoon….

Maan apni mushti ko dokatha toh Lucky wahan se escape hotha….

Lachi toh Maan se ghar ka kaam karwathi….

Geet chup chup ke ye sab dekhke enjoy karthi……

Mamaji: hare Balwant tu toh bahut achche kaam karthe ho

Maan toh mamaji se sare kaam karwatha….

Maan Brij ko doondhthe rehtha……

Maan: ye Brij kahan ho saktha, mujhe jaldhi patha lagana hai

Geet ki jaan ko kathra hai…..

Maan toh bahut pareshan hai………


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loved it...waiting eagerly for geet to tell maan the news about the baby...
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Part – 111

That night…..Nandhini ki sangeet………….

Laungda lashkara song sequence……..

Geet toh bahut kush hai………

Maneet have a wonderful time……..

Uske baat Geet behosh hojathi……

Maan Geet ko pakadtha & he takes her to the bedroom………

He lays her down & sprinkles water……..

Maan: Geet.Geeet………..

Geet ko hosh aatha hai….

Maan: Geet tum teek toh hona? Chalo doctor ke paas chalthe hai…

Geet: Maan….Maaan….Geet Maan ke haath pakadthi aur usko paas aane ki ishara

Karthi….Maan bends down….Geet Maan ke haath apne phet mein rakthi…..

Aur woh Maan ke kaan mein whisper karthi…..

"Maan junior MSK aanewala hai……"

Maan is on top of the world now…….

Maan hugs his Mishty & kisses her….

Maan: Geet kya ? sach mein?

Geet toh sharmathi……..

Wow how gorgeous she looks……..

Maan toh apne Mishty ki beauty mein ko jaatha…..

Maan keeps his ears on Geets tummy……..

Geet: Maan kya kar rahe ho?

Maan: Ssshhh…Geet chup raho baby kuch kehraha hai

Geet: Maan

Maan keeps his fingers oh her lips…….

Maan: chup…..bilkul chup……..

After a while….

Geet: Maan baby ne kya kaha?

Maan: Geet babay toh apne papa ko data raha hai

Geet: kyun?

Maan: uske papa ne uske mama ko akhele Amritsar bejha haina

Geet: par Maan galti toh meri hai…

Maan:nahi Geet mujhe maaf kardo…ab se mein tumme kabhi akhele

Nahi chodoonga…

Geet smiles………….

Maneet passionate hug…………..

Tabbi Amritsar party wahan aathi….

Beeji donno ko dekhthe hi sab samaj jaathi…

Woh door ko close karthi….

Beeji: chalo chalo sab neeche chalo shadhi ke kaam kitne bakhi hai

Ye pal toh sirf aur sirf Maneet ki hai….

Hum bhi unko akhele chodthe hai….Mahi…………



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