MANEET FF - MAAN KI GEET - GHSP continued... - Page 17

Part – 139

Ab Maan pareshan ho gaya……ye Geet ka koi barosa nahi….ye toh hamesha kuch ulta seedha hi sochthi hai…..mere bachka naam issne ramlal ya Shyamlal ya koi Yaspal Jaspal jaise rakhdhi toh kya hoga? Kaise conference room mein Geet watchman ko bhula rahi thi…..maan ko humtum ek kamre mein band ho….woh din yaad aagaya……

Usse yaad hai ya nahi….humme toh yaad haina………Geet ki bag…..uski ghudiya…..chaku….moombatti….matches…..jaise bhi ho, Geet Handa ki baat hi kuch

alag hai…..Maan toh Geet ki pagalpan ko lekhe bahut pareshan hai….

Maan: jaise bhi mujhe baby ka naam patha karna hi hoga, warna namkaran ke din sabke samna tamasha kada hojayega……..

Next day at breakfast……..

Geet sab ke saath baby ke barein mein baat kar rahi hai…

Dadi: Geet bete aap bikul teek kehrahe hai

Sam: Geet baby ke function mein bahut maza aayega

Geet: haan Sam, meinne ye bhi decide karli ki woh din hum kya kya……

Suddenly Geet chup hojathi…Maan aaraha hai…..Geet sab ko chup rehne ki signal karthi….Maan ko shak oajatha….kahin ye baby ke naam ki baat toh nahi kar rahe hai?

Maan: Gud mor Dadi

Dadi: mor Maan bete

Sam: Gud mor Maan bhai

Maan: Sam tumme baby ka naam patha haina? Kya tumme pasand hai?

Sam: haan bhai ye toh bahut cute hai, par miujhe thoda ajeeb lag raha hai, ye aapka choice nahi hosaktha? Haina Geet?

Geet: haan Sam, ye mera choice hai? Achcha haina?

Maan: Geet tumkud hi kaise decide kar sakthi ho ki achcha hai?

Dadi: Maan bete aap itna pareshan kyun hote hai? Aapko baby ka naam pasand haina?

Maan: ji Dadi, mujhe toh bahut pasand hai

Geet muskurathi hai….: bechare Maan, aap kitne bhi koshish karlo par aapko thoda aur intrezar karna padega

Maan: ye sab baby ka naam kyun nahi batha rahe hai, zaroor Geet ne hi mana kiya hoga, mein Tara se poochtha hoon

Part – 140

That evening….Maan comes home…..

Maan chup chap Tara ke room mein jaatha ……

Sam Tara ke saath hai…..

Maan: Tara aap kya kar rahe hai?

Sam: Maan bhai, aap kab aaye?

Maan: Sam tumme Dadi dhoondh rahi hai

Sam: par Dadi ko patha hai ki mein tara ke saath hoon

Maan: Dadi toh tumme hi bhula rahi thi

Sam leaves…..

Tara: papa dekho mera picture ye Tara ki drawing hai kaisa hai?

Maan: hare ye toh bahut achchi hai, hummare Tara kitne achchi drawing karthi!

Toh iss ke liye aapko ye milna hi chahiye haina? Come on come Tara bete papa ke paas aayiye aur dekhiye Papa ke haath mein kya hai?

Maan gives her a lot of chocolates…

Tara: ye sab mere liye hai?

Maan: haan khalo

Tara takes a bar & starts eating…Maan waits for a while….

Tara: papa aap bhi kahlo

Maan: Tara aapko apne nanne bro ke naam patha haina?

Tara: haan cutie boy

Maan: woh nahi, woh naya naam, mama aapko batharahi thina?

Geet comes…….

Tara: woh baby ka naaam

Geet: Tara…aap ne promise kiya hai

Tara: haan woh toh secret hai hum kissi ko nahi bathayenge

Tara leaves….

Geet: Maan aap yahan kya kar rahe ho?

Maan: woh mein tara ke saath khelne aaya tha

Geet: mujhe sab kuch patha hai

Maan: Geet ye kya bachpana hai? Sabko baby ka naam batha rahi ho par mein uska baap hoon mujhe pehle bathao abhi

Geet: Mr. Maan Singh Khurana ye aapka office nahi aur mein apki secretary nahi samje aap ab chup chap yahan se nikhlo

Maan: Geet ye tum teek nahi kar rahi ho, mein toh kaise bhi baby ka naam patha karloonga mein bhi MSK hoon

Geet: Maan zyada takleef mat lo, bas do din ki baat hai

Maan toh shock ho gaya……

Maan: Geet ye tum kya kehrahi ho?

Geet: Maan baby ka naamkaran shukrawar hai

Maan: mujhe toh kissi ne bathaya tak nahi, ab kitne arrangements karna hai, Geet tum itne laparwa kaise ho sakthi?

Geet: Maan aap tension mat lo, sara intrezaam ho chukka hai

Maan: kya? Ab mujhe naamkaran se bhi dhoor rakhoge kya?

Geet: Maan, Sam aur Vicky ne function ki sare responsibility le chuke hai

Maan: ab toh batha Geet, Baby ka naam kya hai?

Geet: kya baat hai? Mr.Maan Singh Khurana itni choti si baat ka patha nahi kar saktha? Hare babaji ab aap hi madat kijiye bechare Maan sir ko

Maan: Geet mazak mat karo

Geet: MSK ke saath koi mazak kar saktha hai kya?

Maan gets angry & leaves….

Geet: Maan…….hare Maan

Part – 141

Maan tries to find out from dadi, par dadi bhi Maan ki madat nahi karthi….

Ab Maan kya karega?

At KC….

Maan bahut tension mein hai….sab ka band bajraha hai……

Romeo ka toh full-on parade hua……

Tasha: kya baat hai? Aaj toh mr.Romeo bahut cute lag rahe hai

Romeo: Tasha itna kush hone ki koi zaroorat nahi, Maan sir tumme bhularahe hai,

Tasha goes pale,

Romeo: ab maza aayega Tashaji, hare haan woh Mr.Khanna ki project ki blueprints lekhe jaana, Maan sir maang rahe hai

Tasha: par woh toh Maan sir ke paas hi hai

Romeo: lekhin Maan sir ne kaha ki woh tummare paas hi hai

Tasha searches for it everywhere……

Maan: Tasha…………..tasha………..

Tasha: yes sir

Maan: ye kya ho raha hai? Kitne dher se blueprints maang raha hoon, kahan hai?

Tasha: woh….woh….

Maan: tashaaa……

Tasha: Maan sir, woh aapke paas hi hai

Maan: woh mere paas kaise hoga? Patha nahi yahan mein boss hoon ya aaplog? Aajkal koi bhi mera suntha nahi, Maan is thinking of Geet…….

Tasha: sir, kal aap blueprints check kar rahe the

Maan: yahan kade kade mera muh kya dekh rahi ho? Jaldi dhoondo

Tasha: yes sir…. Tasha leaves….

Tasha: Adi

Adi: kya hua?

Pinky: wahi jo hamesha hotha hai

Tasha: Pinky shut up

Adi: Tasha Maan sir ko kya hogaya?

Tasha: Adi Mr.khanna ki blueprints ko dhaando, Pinky tu bhi

Romeo: any help?

Tasha: yes, please tu yahan se chale jao

Sab KC mein pareshan hai…..

Maan: Adi…Adi….

Adi: ji sir

Maan: aaplog se ek bhi kaam teek se nahi hotha, sab useless hai

Adi: sir

Maan: kya hai?

Adi: woh BP aapke drawer mein hi hai

Maan checks his drawer….

Maan: yahan hotha toh mujhe patha hotha

Adi: sir woh woh raha

Maan: what?

Adi: sir woh aapke haath mein

Maan is so confused that he couldn't recognize it….Adi helps him….

Maan: achcha tum jao

Adi is about to leave….

Maan: Adi…..

Adi toh bahut karagaya….Ab kya hoga? Babaji mujhe bachao

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Part 142

Maan: Adi ek minute

Adi: yes sir

Maan: woh tumme patha haina? Kal ki function ke barein mein

Adi: ji sir, Geet ne phone ki sir

Maan: toh tumme baby ka naam patha hoga, haina?

Adi: woh…..woh….

Maan: woh kya hai Adi? Jaldi bathao

Adi: sorry sir, mein bhool gaya

Maan: Aadiii

Adi:sorry sir

Maan: Pinky ko maloom hoga

Adi: haan sir

Maan calls Pinky….

Pinky: yes sir

Maan: haan Pinky aao

Pinky: meinne kuch nahi kiya? Meine toh dekha hi nahi

Maan: kya?

Pinky: sir woh blueprints Tasha ke paas hi hoga

Maan: woh milgaya

Pinky thoda relax hothi….

Pinky:toh mein jaoon sir….Pinky starts to leave…..

Maan: ek minute

Pinky : ye phir se kya kogaya? Pinky bahut pareshan hai….

Pinky: yes sir

Maan: Pinky Geet ne tumme kal ke function ke barein mein bathaya haina?

Pinky: yes sir

Maan: woh Geet ne baby ka naam kya bathaya

Pinky: woh sir bahut hi cute naam hai

Maan: haan kya naam tha

Pinky: woh Geet ko patha hai sir

Maan:, Pinkyyy

Pinky: woh Geet ne mujhe nahi bathaya sir

Maan: teek hai tu jaa sakthi ho

Pinky tries to leave fast…….tabhi phone rings…..

Geet ka hi phone hai……ye Geet ko bhi abhi phone karna hai kya?

Pinky tries to get out…..

Maan: Pinky…kiska phone hai?

Pinky: woh meri phurani saheli

Maan: toh phone attend kyun nahi karti

Pinky: halo

Maan snatches the phone….Maan ko patha hai ki kaun baat kar rahi hai…..

Geet: hare Pinky, kya kar rahe hai DD, tumne unko kuch nahi bathaya haina?

Maan: Geeet……………

Geet cuts the phone…….

Maan: toh tum bhi issme shamil ho, sab milke mujhe ullu banarahe ho

Pinky: yes sir

Maan: kya?

Pinky: no sir

Maan: ab yahan kyun kadi ho, Geet ko mere eke k kabar dena hai kya?

Pinky: no sir

Maan: phir kya?

Pinky: mera mobile

Pinky mobile lekhe wahan se escape hothi…..

Part 143

Next day….everyone is busy……

Maan toh bahut gusse mein hai….ye Geet ko kya hogaya? Woh aaise kyun kar rahi hai?... Maan makes one last attempt…..

Annie abhi abhi aayi hai…..Annie ko baby ka naam zaroor patha hoga….

Waise Geet Annie se har baat share karthi hai….

Maan: gud mor Annie

Annie: mor bhai

Maan: Annie tummara job kaise hai?

Aniie: kya baat hai bhai? Aaj Geet ko chodke mere peeche pade ho?

Maan: aaise koi baat nahi hai

Annie: mujhe patha haiu, aapko baby ka naam jaanna haina?

Maan: toh tumme bhi patha hai

Annie: aap itne tension kyun le rahe ho? Seedhe seedhe Geet se poochlo

Hare haan mein toh bhool hi gayi aap toh Geet ke naam sunthe hi darjathe ho

Maan: Annie mein tumme poochraha hoon, bathao kya naam hai?

Annie: mein toh nahi batha sahthi

Maan:kya?

Annie: bechare Maan bhai, bahi aapne sabko poocha haina? Ab toh sirf Panditji hi bakhi hai, aap unse poochlo, shayad unko patha ho?

Maan: Annieee

Annie: Geet mein aarahi hoon….Annie leaves…..

Ab toh Maan ko thoda aur intrezar karna padega…….

Panditji aagaye hai……sab tayyar hai….

Geet baby ko lekhe aathi….Panditji Maan ko bhi bhularahe hai…..

Panditji: pehle bachche ki maa uske khan mein 3 bar naam lekhe bhulayiye

Geet is about to say the name….Maan ka dil dhak dhak kar raha hai….

Hare babaji please koi achche naam ho…….

Geet: Pawan Pawan Pawan

Panditji: ab aap kahiye

Maan is speechless……this is the name he had chosen & highlighted in the list….

Geet ko Maan ke list milgaya aur usse bhi Pawan pasand hai….woh Maan ko surprise karna chahathi thi….

Geet: Maan….Maaan

Maan: Geet Geet Geet

Sab hasthe hai…..

Geet: Maan aap kya kar rahe ho, Pawan kaho

Maan: haan Pawan Pawan Pawan

Annie: achcha bhai ab bhua ki bhari hai, lao Geet baby ko mujhe do, tum toh apne deewane ko sambhalo

Geet: kya?

Annie: hare Maan bhai ko sambhalo, warna phir se Geet nama shuru kardhenge

Maan stares Annie………

Geet: Annie sab dekh rahe hai…..chup karo apni bak bak…

Sab Pawan ko wish karte hai…..

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Part 1 144

Everyone is around the baby……sab ke nazar baby par hai……

Maan Geet ke haath pakadke side mein le chaltha….

Geet: Maan sab dekh rahe hai, chodo mere haath

Maan: aaise kaise chod saktha

Geet: Maan dadi bularahe hai

Maan: bhulane do

Geet: Maan annie mazak karegi

Maan: karne do

Geet: MSK dekh rahe hai

Maan: dekhne do

Geet: mujhe sharam aathi hai

Maan: Geet meri ho, ye sare dhuniya jaanthi hai…….

Song sequence…….

Jab se mere dil ko uff…..

Tujpe marna aagaya….

Sab ko chehre padne aagaya….

Sab ko iss shehsr mein chere panda aagaya…..

Aa aa aa aabhijaaa……na na nazrein chura…..

Ye zamaana bhi dekhe zara..ah ah ah…………

Maan: Geet

Geet: haan Maan

Maan: achcha hua ki tumme mera list milgaya

Geet: kya matlab?

Maan: nahi tumme mera list milgayi toh tumne baby ko itna achcha naam chunli warna

Geet: warna kya? Isse bhi achcha naam mein apne bachche ko chunthi

Maan: jaise

Geet: jaise …Geet sochne lagi……

Maan: haaan bolo Geet mein wait kartha hoon

Geet: jaise…………….

Maan: chodo Geet ye tummre bas ki baat nahi

Geet: kya?

Maan: thankyou babaji aapne meri dua kubhul kardhi

Geet: kaise dua?

Maan: yahi ki baby ko Geet ke naam se bachchao warna

Geet gets angry………: kya?

Maan: Geet tum aaise gusse mein mujhe dekhthi toh mujhe kuch kuch hotha hai Geet

Geet: Maan baat ko gumao mat, aapne kya kaha?

Maan Geet ke muh oe haath rakhke uski bolti band kartha….

Maan: chup bilkul chup

Geet tries to get back…..she hits on the wall….now she has no escape……

Maan locks her in his arma…..

Maneet eyelock…..mahhhiii……………..

Annie comes to call Geet….

Annie: Geet…Geeet…

Maan releases her…..they step back….

Geet: haan Annie

Annie: Geet tummare Mahi katam ho toh neeche sab tummare intrezar kar rahe hai

Geet leaves……Maan follows………………….

Part – 145

Next day….

Sam aur Annie Geet ke saath baat kar rahe hai…..

Geet: toh Annie tummara transfer ka kya hua?

Sam: haan Annie tum Delhi kab aarahi ho? Mein toh tumme bahut miss karthi hoon

Annie: mere transfer ko abhi thoda time lagega tahi 3 ya 4 months, abhi Bangalore ke project katam hone mein thoda delay hogaya

Geet: Annie tum Delhi ko miss karte hona?

Annie: haan Geet mein tum logon ko bahut miss karthi hoon, specially Tara ko, itne din woh mere saath hi thina toh uski aadat padgayi, now I feel very lonely

Geet: Annie tu job chodtho yahan tumme usse bhi achcha kaam miljayega

Annie: nahi Geet ye project mere liye bahut important hai, usse beech mein chod nahi sakthi

Sam: koi baat nahi Annie, bas theen mahine haina, uske badh hum saath mein masti karenge haina Geet?

Geet: haan Annie tu toh yahan ki sare masti miss karthi ho

Annie: Geet tummari pyar ki kahaani toh mujhe patha hai, Maan bhai ki pagalpan toh din bar din badraha hai, waise hummare Vicky bhi bada majnu hi hai, Sam ki pyar ki kahaani ki latest update dena. Koi nayi twist?

Geet: haan Annie tu yahan nahi ho phir bhi tumme sab patha hai, tumse so bachke rehna hoga

Annie: Geet Annie se koi bach nahi saktha, toh Sam meine suna hai kit um donno ki terrace trailer phir se shuru hogayi

Geet: Annie kaunsi film ki trailer? Sam ne toh mujhe bathaya hi nahi

Sam: Annie tu chup nahi kar sakthi hai kya?

Geet: Annie mujhe bhi bathao

Annie: Geet jab bhi humlog saath mein khelthe hai ye donno achanak gayab ho jaathe the

Sam: Annie purani bathon ko bhool jao

Geet: phir kya hua?

Sam: Geet yahan koi storytime chal raha hai kya?

Geet: Sam tum beech mein mat bholo Annie tum continue karo

Annie: hum toh inko dhoond dhoondh ke tak jaathe the, phir ek din jab dadi kissi kaam se terrace pe gayi toh ye donno wahan pakadhegaye, ye donno toh bahut kabragaye woh toh Dadi se request karne lage ki ye baat kissi ko patha nahi chale, par dadi net oh ye baat sab ko bathathi aur hum sab toh inke samne achche bache banjaathe the jaise humme kuch patha hi nahi

Geet: aur Annie tu toh chup rehnewali nahi haina, phir tumne kya kiya?

Annie: Geet hum toh kuch din muft mein Terrace trailer dekh rahe the par ek din Maan bhai ko sare sachchayi patha ho gaya

Geet: kya Maan bhi aapke saath trailer dekhthe the?

Annie: Geet Maan bhai toh tummare aane ki baat hi Romeo banne, uske pehle toh woh mogambo hi the, Maan bhai ne hum sabko itna sunaya ki hum Terrace ki naam hi bhool gaye aur Terrace trailer ka THE END hogaya

Sam: ab Annie tummare kahaani ki THE END karo abhi

Geet: Annie ab mujhe yaad aagaya

Annie: kya Geet?

Geet: Sam toh hamesha Tara ko khelne ke liye Terrace pe hi lekhe jaathi

Annie: toh zaroor Vicky bhi unke saath hi hoga, haina?

Geet: haan Annie, Geet winks…………

Sam sharmathi…….

Annie: toh Geet aaj mein bhi Tara ke saath khelne jaathi hoon

Sam: Annie ki bachchi……..tujhe toh mein……………

Part – 146

Geet: Annie tumme shopping karna haina?

Annie: haan Geet. Mein aur Sam toh wahi karne jaarahe hai, kyun Geet? Tumme kuch chahiye hai kya? Tummare delivery boy aajkal chutti mein hai kya?

Geet: kya? Kaunsa delivery boy?

Annie: hare Maan bhai

Geet: Annie tummari ye himmat mere Maan ko delivery boy kehte ho? Delivery man kaho

Annie: haan haan wahi delivery man

Geet: Annie aaj mera bhi gumne ka mann kar raha hai, mein bhi aapke saath aathi hoon

Annie: Geet tum Maan bhai se ek bar poochlo warna aoh mujhse naraz ho jaayenge aur sawal karenge " tummari himmat kaise hui mere Geet ko mujhse door le jaane ki?"

Geet:Annie mein unko call karke bathadhoongi, hum chalte hai

Maan comes……….

Maan: Geet…..Geet……

Annie: lo tummare majnu aagaye

Geet: Annie………….

Maan: Geet tum tayyar hona?

Geet: Maan mein

Maan: jaldi karo Geet, tumme baby ke liye kuch saman khareedhna haina?

Geet: Maan woh mein Annie ke saath jaa rahi hoon

Maan looks disappointed…………Annie sab samaj jaathi…………

Annei: Geet tum bhai ke saath chale jao, woh kya haina? Humme thodi privacy ki zaroorat hai, haina Sam? Annie giggles……….

Sam: haan Annie, chalo hum chalte hai

Annie: bye Geet, have fun……….

Maan: toh chalein?

Geet: kya Maan? Aap bhi………Annie bhura manjayegi

Maan: Geet tumme mere saath aana hai ya nahi?

Geet: hare babaji, ye har baat pe itna gussa kyun kathe hai?

Maan: kyunki mein Maan Singh Khurana hoon

Geet jaldi tayyar hoke aathi…..Maneet leave…………..

Annie aur Sam ek restaurant mein hai….wahan……….

Dev ko bail milgaya…woh bhi wahi restaurant meim hai…..

Dev sees Annie…..he goes to see her……

Dev: Annie tum?

Annie gets angry seeing Dev….

Annie: Sam chalo hum chalte hai

Dev: Annie tumne mujhe pehchana nahi?

Annie: Sam jaldi chalo

Dev: Sam tum toh Annie ko samjaao

Sam: hum sab samajgaye, aap kaise insaan ho

Annie: Sam ye toh insanan hi nahi

Dev: Sam plese tum toh rukho

Sam: nahi Dev bhai

Annie: Sam pagal ho gayi ho kya? Isse bhai kehte ho, tumme patha haina iss aadmi ne hammari Geet ki zindagi barbad ki

Dev: haan Annie mein maantha hoon ki mujhse badhi galti hogayi

Annie: gakti ye toh bahut bada paap hai

Dev: Annie

Annie: behthar hoga ki aap dubara mere samne nahi aaye toh, I just hate to see you

Sam & Annie leave………….

Dev ko zor ka jatka mila………..