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Posted: 13 years ago

PART – 86

Geet: ye kaun hai?

Sam: Geet, yeAayush hai

Geet: par isse kaise patha ki tum Delhi mein ho

Sam: shayad Shyam ne inform kardhi, shyam Aayush ka

Dhost hai, woh yahan paas hi rehtha, kal meinne usko Mall

Mein dekha,ye zaroor ussi ka kaam hoga

Geet: woh toh teek hai, ab tummare yahan rehna teek nahi hoga

Ab hum kya karein? Mein tumme ghar bhi nahi le jaathi, jab tak

Maan ko sare sachchai ka patha nahi hotha tum wahan nahi aasakthi

Sam: mere chintha chodiye, mein toh koi ladies hastel chale jaathi

Geet: nahi Sameera, tummare jaan ko katra hai, ab tum akhele nahi

Rehsakthi, woh Aayush kabhi bhi wapas aasaktha

Geet thinks for a wohle…..

Geet: haan.idea aagaya…driver Adi sir ke ghar chalo

Sam: Geet ye aap kya kehrahe hai?

Geet:tum aaj raat Pinky ke ghar mein tehhro, kal mein koi

Aur intrezam kardhoongi…..Geet leaves her at Adi's house & leaves….

At KM……Vicky Tara ke saath khel raha hai…..

Geet: Varun…Varun…

Vicky: aapko mere naam kaise payha? Yahan toh sab mujhe

Vicky hi bhulathe, Tara bhi…..

Geet:Tara , chachu ko naam lekhe nahi bulathe

Tara: par ye toh mera friend hai

Geet: Varun tum Payal ko kaise jaanthe ho?

Vicky: Payal meri friend hai, best friend, aap Payal ko jaanthe hai

Geet: haan mein Payal ko jaanthi hoon

Vicky: toh mujhe uskke paas le chalo, please

Geet: aaj nahi kal hum Payal ko milthe hai, achcha Tara

Chachu ko goodnight kaho humme sona hai…


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Posted: 13 years ago
part 85 n 86
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PART – 87

Next day at Pinky's house……..

Geet: Adi sir ab hum kya karein?

Adi is so scared…..Adi's TM laughter………..

Adi: Geet Maan sir ko ye baat patha chalega toh mein to gaya

Geet: Adi sir Maan se itna darthe kyun ho? Mein hoon na, sab sambalungi

Pinky: Geet mujhe bhi bahut dar lagtha hai, tum toh Maan sir ki gusse

Ko jaanthi ho na, Geet mein kya karooon….so saying she munches some more chips

Geet: hare Pinky tum bhi…..

Sam: mein inko pareshan karna nahi chahathi, waise Adi ke ghar bhi Aayush ko

Patha hai, woh yahan bhi aasaktha

Geet: yeh toh tum teek hi keh rahi ho, ab toh KM hi tummare liye safe hai

Tum chalo mere saath

Geet takes her to KM & hides her ih]n the Outhouse….

Geet: tum yahi raho, kal mein Vicky ko lekhe aathi hoon, par galathi

Se bhi ghar ke andhar mat aana, tum toh jaanthe ho apne Maan bhai ki gusse ko

Sam: thanks babhi, aap toh bahut achche ho

Geet: ek baat kahooon, tum mujhe babhi mat bulana achcha nahi lagtha

Tum mujhe Geet hi keh sakthe ho, Annie bhi mujhe Geet hi kehthi

Sam: toh Geet tum bhi mujhe Sam hi kaho, sab mujhe aaise hi bulathe hai

Next day……

Geet chup chup ke Sam ko khaana lekhe aathi…Tara bhi saath hai…

Sam: Geet ye tummari beti haina? Ye toh bahut cute hai, halo I'm Sam

Tara: maa, ye kaun hai?

Geet: ye Sam aunty hai, ye ab hammare saath hi rahenge

Sam: haan mein Vicky ki friend hoon

Tara: par Vicky toh mera friend hai, haina maa

Geet: Tara meinne kitne bhar kaha ki chachu ko naam lekhe nahi bulahte

Sam: koi baat nahi Geet,ye toh bachchi hai, aur Vicky bhi bachcon ke

Saath rehna hi pasand kartha woh bhi ab ek bachcha hi hai

Geet par Sam kaise bhi ho Vicky toh Tara ki chachu hi hai

Sam: toh Tara mujhe bhi apna dhost banaoge?

Tara: woh toh mein Vicky se poochke hi batha sakthi

Geet: Tara tum jaake chachu ko yahan lekhe aao,

Koi bhi pooche toh kaho tumlog OH mein khelne jaarahe hai

Tara Vicky ko lekhe aathi…….

Mouni Roy


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PART – 88

Vicky Sam ko dekhkar bahut kush hotha….

Vicky: Payal……tum aagayi

Sam: Varun tum kaise ho?

Vicky: mein toh bahut kush hoon,patha hai yahan meri friend bhi hai, Tara

Tara: Vicky ye tummare friend hai kya?

Vicky: haan ye meri sab se best friend hai

Tara: toh phir mein

Sam: tum bhi usski best friend ho, toh friends…

Tara: friends…they shake hands….

Geet: toh aaplog khelo mujhe office jaana hai

In the evening…..

Geet Sam ko milne jaarahi hai….

Geet: Sam….Sam…….

Sam: Geet tumnne Maan bhai se baat ki hai kya?

Geet: nahi Sam, Maan bahut pareshan hai, woh pehle jaise ho gaye

Kissi se baat nahi kar rahe hai, mujhse bhi

Sam: par Geet mein kitne din aaise chup chup ke reh sakthi

Geet: mujhe patha hai Sam yeh tummmare liye kitna mushkil hoga

Par hum ab kluch nahi kar sakthe

Sam: Geet kahin Tara Maan bhai ko mere bhare mein bathathi toh

Geet: Tara ko meinne samjadhi, woh tummare bhare mein kissi se bhi

Baat nahi karegi, par Vicky toh keh saktha hai, ab toh woh Maan se

Thoda dartha hai

Sam: Vicky hamesha Maan bhai se dartha hai, dar nahi woh toh Maan

Bhai ko bahut respect kartha

Geet: Sam tumme nahi lagtha ab tumme Vicky ko usske asli naam aur

Asli pehchan bathatheni chahiye?

Sam: haan Gee tab mein ussko dhere dhere sab samjaoongi ki woh

Issi ghar ka beta hai aur MSK ka bhai hai

Geet: toh Sam mein chalthi hoon, Goodnight

Sam: GN geet….


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PART – 89

Next day at KM…..

Dadi: Tara….Tara bte…ye ladkhi kahan chali gayi? Hare

Nakul aapne Tara ko kahin dekha hai kya?

Nakul: ji Dadima, Tara beti aur Vicky sir OH mein khelthe hai

Aajkal woh donno OH mein hio rehthe hai

Dadi goes to find out what is going on in the OH…..

Vicky, Tara & Sam khel rahe hai……

Dadi Sam ko dekhkar bahut pareshan hojathi….

Dadi:aap? Aap yahan kya kar rahe hai?

Sam: dadima, woh Geet ne hi mujhe yahan layi

Dadi: kya? GEET? Geet toh aapko jaanthe hi nahi, aap jooot bol rahe hai

Tara: nahi Dadi, ye sach keh rahe hai

Dadi: kya? Ye geet bhi na, Maan ko jaanke bhi woh hamesha koi

Na koi musseebat mein fusjaathe…Geet ko toh aap ke bhare mein

Kuch bhi nahi patha, warna woh aapko kabhi andhar aanne nahi dethi

Sam: par Dadi ek bar mere baat toh suniye

Dadi: mujhe kuch nahi sunnna, aap foren yaha se chale jaayiye

Sam starts to leave……Vicky follows….Tara too…..

Dadi: Vicky….Vicky…appp kahan jaathe hai bte?

Vicky turns back….: Dadi mein bhi jaa raha hoon

Ye sunke Dadi toh bahut kush ho jaathi….Vicky ne kitne din baat Dadi kaha…

Dadi goes & stops them……:Vicky bte rukh jaayiye…Sam aaap hi kahiye…

Sam stops & tells Dadi abt what happened to them…..

Dadi hugs Sam……she tries to console her….

Dadi: Sam bte..aap ko apne Dadi ke paas aana tha

Sam: Dadi………..


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Posted: 13 years ago
part 88 n 89
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PART – 90

In the evening ….. Geet comes home……

Dadi: Geet bte…..

Geet: ji dadima

Dadi: aapko itnne badhi baat ko humse chupana nahi chahiye

Geet: Dadi aap kisske bhare mein baat karthi?

Dadi: Geet bte, hum Sam ki baat karrahe hai

Geet shocked…….:Dadi…woh….

Dadi: hum sab jaanhthe hai bte

Geet: toh aap sam se milli hai kya?

Dadi: haan bte, humme ye bhi patha hai ki Sam yahi hai

Geet: woh… woh… sorry dadi…mein aapko kehne hi wali thi

Par aap toh uss din Sam ko ghar ki andhar aane hi nahi diyye

Dadi: Geet aapne Sam ko yahan lakhe bahut achcha kaam kiya hai

Geet: Dadi Sam ko hummare madat ki zaroorat hai

Dadi: haan Geet bte, Sam bhi iss ghar ki beti hi hai

Geet: Dadi aap jaanthe haina ki Maan Sam se bahut naraz hai

Dadi: aap Sam ki fikar mat kijiye ab woh hummari zameendari hai

Aap kaise bhi Maan ko samjaayiye Sam ki bhare mein

Geet: mein koshish kar rahhi hoon Dadi, par aap toh jaanthe

Haina aajkal Maan DD bankke gumthe hai, kissi se baat hi

Nahi karthe

Dadi: haan bte Maan ko iss andhere se nikalne ke liye hummne

Kya kya nahi kiya? Par aap hi Maan ko teek kar sakthe hai bte,

Aapne ek bar ye kaam kardhi, ab toh aapko patha hi hoga Maan ko

Kaise DD se Geet ki Maan banana

Geet: par dadi Maan toh mujhse baat hi nahi karthe

Dadi: Maan toh Vicky ko iss halat mein dekh nahi sakthe,

Humme hi Maan ko dhere dhere iss musibat se bahar nikhalna hoga

Geet: haan Dadi

Dadi: Geet maan ko thoda waqt chahiye, ab toh hum Maan se Sam

Ko chupana hi hoga

Geet: ji dadi….

Aaise hi kuch din chaltha…..Maan Vicky ke saath zyada waqt rehtha….

Sam bhi Vicky ko sab bathathi….Vicky dhere dhere sabko apnane lagtha….

Dadi bhi Vicky ki badlaaw dekhke kush hothi…..Vicky Dadi, Maan , sam aur

Even Nakul ko pehechantha……

Geet office mein busy hai….Maan Vicky ki treatment ke kaam mein aksar

Bahar chale jaatha toh Geet hi KC ko sambalthi…….





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PART – 91

Ek din Maan office chale jaahta……Geet ghar pe hi hai…..

Vicky Sam ko ghar lekhe aatha…sab milke batein kar rahe hai…

Maan comes back to take a file……..

Maan pehle Vicky ko sab ke saath baat karthe hue dekhke kush

Hotha aur thoda dher chupke sabko dekhthe rehtha……

Suddenly he notices Sam….aur Maan bangaya angry young man…..

Maan: Sameera……………Sameera……….

Geet: Maan……aap……….

Maan: tummare himmat kaise hui wapas aane ki? Meinne pehle hi mana

Kiya haina? Ab chalo yahan se…..

Maan gets hold of her & drags her out………Geet runs after them….

Geet toh bahut tension mein hai……………."ab ye kahan se aagaye"

Geet: Maan…Maan… mere baat toh sunno…

Suddenly Geet hits somethind & falls…..she hurts herself & is bleeding….

Dadi: Geeet…….Geet bte….

Dadi ki awaaz sunkke Maan turns back & finds Geet lying on the floor….

Maan sab kuch bhool jaatha apnne Mishty ko dekhthe hi……..

Maan: Geeet……

Maan rushes to her, lifts her & her takes her in………

Geet tries to say something…………

Maan: chup…bilkul chup………

Maan first-aid box lekhe aatha aur Geet ki forehead mein patti baandhtha…

Maan: Geet tum teek toh ho?

Geet: Maan mein bilkul teek hoon, ab toh mere baat ko suniye…..

Maan thoda shanth hotha….

Geet Maan ko sab kuch bathathi…aur Aayush ke bhare mein bhi bathathi…..

Aayush Sam ke peeche pada hai aor Sam ki jaan ko katra hai………




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Part – 92

Dadi Sam aur Vicky ko lekhe aathi……

Maan Sam ko pass aane ki ishara kartha….

Sam: Maan bhai…..

Maan: Sam tum teek toh hona?

Sam: haan

Maan: Sam itne di tumme akale nahi rehna tha

Woh bhi Vicky ki iss haalat mein , tumme ussi waqt

Hummare pas aana tha

Sam: par Vicky toh coma mein tha aur Aayush toh Vicky

Ko marne wala tha, toh meine socha yehi Vicky ki jaan ko

Bachane ka rastha hai, aur itna sab hone ke baat mujhe

Himmat hi nahi thi aap sab se milne ki

Maan : Sam ab tum apne Maan bhai ke paas aagayi ho

Ab tumme darne ki koi zaroorat nahi, ab tum dekho kaise

Hummare Vicky bhi humme wapas mil jaatha, meine doctors

Se baat ki , woh toh kehthe hai ki Vicky ki yaadhaash jaldhi

Wapas aajayega bas usko hummari support ki zaroorat hai

Geet: haan sam tum fikar mat karo Vicky jaldhi teek hojayega

Dadi: Sam bete humme toh bahut kushi hai ki aap dono wapas

Aagaye,ab toh bas babaji ki aashirvaad se Vicky normal hojaye

Sam bete hum sab aap ke saath hai aap himmat rakhiye aur babaji

se dua kijiye ki woh sab teek kardhe….dadi hugs sam….

Now Maan slowly normal hojatha….

Sam Vicky ko treatment ke liye roz hospital le jaathi…

Geet as usual Maan ke saath KC chale jaathi….

Vicky shows some improvement…

Now he recognizes Maan, sam & Dadi…



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Part- 93

One evening at KM……

Geet sam ke saath baatein karthe rehthi…..

Maan toh Geet ka intrezaar kar raha hai…..

Geet: Sam ab toh Vicky bahut badal gaya , ye toh tummari

Pyar ki wajah se hi hua hai, Vicky toh bahut lucky hai

Sam: par Vicky ka ye haalat bhi mere wajhe se hi hua hai

Geet: Sam tum apne aapko doshi kyun maanthe ho issme

Tummhari koi galathi nahi hai

Sam: Geet mein jab bhi Vicky ko dekhthi hoon toh mujhe toh

Yehi lagtha hai ki ye sab mere ek galthi ki nathija hi hai

Naa hi mein shadi se bhaagthi naa hi ye accident hotha

Aur papa bhi aaj hummare saath hothe

Geet: par Sam tum uss shadi se kush hogi kya ? kabhi nahi

Humme toh apne haq ke liye ladna hai apne dushman se bhi

Aur kabhi kabhi apne apnon se bhi, mere saath toh Maan the

Jaane anjaane mein Maan ne mere har ladayi mein mere saath di

Par tum net oh akhele hi sab ko sambhal li

Sam: mere saath bhi Vicky tha hummare pyar tha

Geet: woh toh hai, mere saath bhi hamesha Maan ka pyar tha

Ab Maan aur intrezaar nahi kar saktha….woh Geet ko dhaaondthe

Dhoondthe neeche chale aatha…

Maan: Geet….Geet….

Sam: Geet lagtha hai tummre pyar tumme pukar raha hai, I mean

Maan bhai

Geet: mein abhi aathi hoon

Maan: Geet…Geeet…tum kahan ho?

Geet: Maan mein toh Sam ke saath thi

Maan: woh Geet mera night suit kahan hai?

Geet: woh toh aapke cupboard mein hi hai

Maan: par mujhe toh nahi mil raha hai

Geet: aapne teek se dekha hai kya?

Maan: ab tum aagayi ho toh tum hi dekho

Geet goes & finds it for Maan…

Maan: ye nahi hai Geet woh black suit…

Geet looks for the black one…but Maan is already wearing it…..

Maan toh bas apni Mishty ko apne paas bhulane ki bhahanne

dhoon raha tha….Geet gets angry…she didn't even notice

what Maan's wearing….

Maan: hare Geet….Geeet…ek bar meri taraf dekho toh sahi..

Geet toh kuch sunnewali hi nahi…..she keeps searching….

Maan gets closer to his Mishty…

Maan: Geet…Geet…..




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