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piuli

@prahelika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

thanx for giving us a beautiful ss on our favourite couple RT MC😃...

interesting cs...and just like other readers here...i hate mouli too😆...

but she's not really a big hurdle...😕

rajat himself is a hard shell😕...but mugz will crack it for sure😳...

plz update soon dear...😊

waiting😍

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shruja

@shruja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--

was it needed to mention😛😆 and I think u are pretty fast in understanding his character😆
Thanx so much dear for liking the concept...I am really glad 😃
thank u😊

areh tune nahi kiya so maine kar diya😆
😆😆😆and abt understanding character we will do it after u will start updating😉

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shruja

@shruja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--
SS means Short Story...as of now I thought of posting about 6-7 updates..if it goes longer or I'll get good responses then I'll drag it like FF...😊

don't worry abt tht hum all rtmc fans kis liye hai😆
tum bas update karti jao😃

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Smoking_up

@Smoking_up

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

wow... Nice concept... Looking forward to read more... Do write it sooonnn...
And plzz pm me too :-)

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Radhika Sharma

@ridzzi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

one more RT-MC FF...🥳...thank u so much for writing n sharing with all of us...🤗

sry for replying late ...actually my exam's are going on that's why it's become difficult to present her...

but i really liked the story line...n cs...too good...👏

do continue soon...

n thanx for the pm...

do add me in ur pm list...n pm me next time too...

all the best for ur updates...👍🏼

luv u...😊

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ruchi

@--Ruchi--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Thanks so much to all who liked the concept and commented.🤗

Some has requested me to make it FF through PMs...so I will definitely do if story demands so.

Thank you for your responses.

Regards

Ruchi

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ruchi

@--Ruchi--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Chapter-1

A flame of light

A flame of light which was broad and circular initially,now squeezing...a blurred picture of people huffing,running and shouting was occupying his vision...he tried hard, harder this time and could figure out a blurred image of a girl,he was

confused and tried even harder...now the image becomes a little clear...who is she???Is she Mauli??? a thought struck his

mind "But NO!Mauli has short hair but this girl has long hairs...she was worried...her hands and gestures were showing her

worry...he tried to open his eyes to watch her but he could'nt,another picture flashed quickly...he was drinking and

drinking...so much he had drank last night and shouting,

"Bloody hell!!! I don't know anything...I will not do that show at any cost...!"

His head becomes too heavy and the small flame of light finally engulfed by black and deep darkness...!

After 3 hours doctor came out of operation theature,the girl in her late teenage approached him quickly,

"Doctor!what happened??Is he out of danger...?"she asked

Doctor looked at her,she was looking tired and weak...her eyes were red and teary,lips were dry...

"Yes!Mugdha he is out of danger...you can relax now!"he said and went off.

Mugdha took a breath of relaxation,"Thank God!you saved him..."she ran towards Mrs.Ritu Tokas,mother of Rajat who had just

went for bringing water.

"Aunty!Operation is successful..he is out of danger now!"

Tears of happiness flowed from her eyes,"Really!!! Thank God"she ran towards OT where nurse stopped her.

"Sorry Mam!you can meet him only after doctor's permission!"she said respectfully.

They both went to doctor for permission.

"Mrs.Tokas...he is still uncouncious...as soon as he get councious,I'll do some check-ups and shift him in ward then only

you can meet him...till then please do these formalities..."said the doctor.

"What is this?"asked she.

Doctor became serious,"you know that its a police case...a case of drunk and rash driving...so you have to cooperate with

police!"

Ritu's throat chocked..."Okay!but before that I need to contact my advocate!"said she and left to talk on this matter with

inspector.

As she went outside she found whole hospital became a news room...reporters,interviews,public reviews on topics like 'youth

and drinking problem','today's youth','Stars and their attitude..' such endless topics and talks were taking on.

"They get some crisp for prime time!"said mugdha bitterly.

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Till evening the whole matter sattled...rajat was shifted into private ward and was given some liquid suppliments.He was

watching TV when mugdha and his mom entered,

"How are you feeling now?"asked Ritu caressing his head.

"Better.."he gasped and shrugged off her hand.

He was indeed shocked to see Mugdha there but dint asked anything.

She sat near her bed and put her hand over his,"Take rest"said she softly.

Rajat nodded positively and touched his head wound,"its itching!"said he

"Ohh..do not rub...it won't coagulate then..!"she hold his hand,"Let me.."said she and bend her head over his,softly started blowing and caressing...after few minutes he stopped her,

"Its fine now.."said he looking at her...that was the first time they looked directly into each others eyes...they were lost for sometime...old days memories were running between them...around 5 years back...

As mugdha was running and rajat was chasing her...

"Ruk...jungli billi!!! give my diary back..."he was screaming

"Nahi dungi monkey...himmat hai to le ke dikha..." she made faces to tease him.

He speeds up and hold her from waist..."dekha pakar liya..la meri diary wapas kar..."he tried to snatch it.

"Nahi dungi...mai bhi to dekhu..aisa kya likhta hai tu diary me..."she tried to open it when suddenly he snatched it from her hand and pushed her back,

"Dekh kuch bhi kar..I won't mind but don't ever try to read it..samjhi...!"he said pointing his finger towards her.

She felt hurt and a tear formed in her eyes,"Monkey...mujhe giraya..dekh lungi tujhe mai..."said she and moved from there.

"Arey billi..kahan ja rahi hai...okay I am sorry...I am sorry...!"he was shouting behing her,but she dint stop...sun was setting...she was going and finally sun sat and she disappeared...disappeared from there...he tried to stop her,ran before her..shout her name in the sky but she has gone...

A flame of light was engulfed by the darkness.

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That's all for now...hope you liked it...please press 'Like' if so...and if you want PM for update😊

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Gauri

@gauri_tvfanatic

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

yipppiiieee...i am first one to comment on first chapter😊...

superb start dear😊...loved it🤗...

he is already in trouble due to 'rash driving after drinking'😔...oh no😭...hope everything will be fine soon...

seems like they r meeting after long time as he was shocked to see her😲...did she bring him to hospital?...but i am very happy that u gave their meeting in first part😳...she was so worried for him...that blowing scene was so cute😊...

& FB was awesome😊...i am also waiting to know what is written in that diary😉...

looks like he has some problem with his mom...hmm...

me too want u to convert this SS in FF😳...i am very greedy when it comes to RTMC😆😉...plz plz update soon😍...

Edited by sanyogitaprc - 13 years ago