Untamed and Fragile-RTMC FF update page 32

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Nivi_princess

@Nivi_princess

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Lovely.😊

Ud soon and do pm me.

Eager to know more.😍

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riya

@Riyaa16

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

lovely part dear😛

so they meet after many years right????
i liked ur description and concept

its beautiful to read ur story
but why u stopped it😭i want to read more
yeh mauli yahan bhi aa gyi😡
yeh rajat ka picha kab chodegi😈

kahin bhi tapak padti h...but koi nhi mugdha h na😉
loved the rtmc scene in hospital

pls cont soon
eagerly waiting for next part
thanks for pm me😊

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Your first update is awesome, gr8 start.
I really like the flashback scene nd specially dat part wen he wanted stop her but she didn't stop...
Plz update soon the next part.

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chetna

@crazysky

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

its so cute n they r so innocent i just love them

n thanks 4 pm

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Sonali

@sonalimurat

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

one New RTMC ff 😛 😛

Nice story Ruchi 👏

Loved it 😛

first part was very nicely written 👏

continue dear 😊

waiting for next 😍

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Mayuri Dev

@mddmayuri

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

hey dear ...

u didnt pm me..😭

anyways lovely ud...😊

luv d way u write...

ud soon

Edited by mddmayuri - 13 years ago

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piuli

@prahelika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

lovely part dear...😃

and loved your writing style😊...

rajat drove rashly when he was drunk😕...OMG!!!! this kid is too much spoilt...

sometimes these media people are too much...😕

here someone's life is at a risk and they are busy in making cock bull story🤢...

but why this mouli pops in everywhere🤢???

poor mugz... so worried for him...

loved the way she was blowing on his wound to soothe the itching😳...

so they used to be bff once...😃 but what happened that now they are not even comfortable to talk to each other😕...

plz update soon dear...😊

and thanx for the pm...

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anumeha khanna

@anumeha_rajat

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

that was really amazing..

n superb part..

liked it alot..

so he got into an accident..

hopefully recovers soon..

thnx for the pm...

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Khushi Grover

@Amor.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

awesome part
start me hi hospital pahuncha diya mere bhai ko
bahut na insaafi hai but koi nahi mugz is here

continue soon

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shruja

@shruja

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

thanks for update n pm
sorry for late comment
awesome update though it is short!!
loved the way its started with candle light n ended with darkness
so rajat is much spoiled tht he drove car in drunken state n met with accident!!
wow mugz is near him!! n worried for him!!
he was trying to recognize her!! areh itani beautiful toh mugz hi ho sakti hai na!!
y he shrugged his mom's hand? any difference with her?
loved mugz cared for him!!
loved mugz blowing air on his wound n their eyelock taking them in flashback!!
so both know each other? but they r only frnds or else?
loved use of junglee billi!! and she said monkey to him
but tht written in diary tht he not wanted to read by mugz too?
they r not comfortable now too!! wht happend between them?
did mugz didn't met him after till then?
waiting for sunset to turn in beautiful dawn :)

Imp : u should changed ur ss in ff as the way of description n ur story is different and amazing⭐️

Edited by shruja - 13 years ago