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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sonalimurat


n soon we will get to see Rajat's Mugdha ( in this story n in real life also 😉 )


hmmm sonali even i m dying to see Rajat's Mugdha in 3 places:

1. yaha is story me mujhe dekhna hai Rajat ki Mugdha ko Rajat k saath 😉 jo sirf Ruchi k haath me hai

2. Main Rajat ki Mugdha ko onscreen dekhna chahti hu sirf aur sirf Rajat k saath wo Sagar's aur Sony k haath me hai

AUR

3. mere dil ki tamanna hai ki main Rajat ki Mugdha & Mugdha k Rajat ko sirf aur sirf ek dusare k saath dekhna chahti hu... hamesha k liye... 😳 😉 aur ye Bhagwan k haath me hai

pata nahi kab puri hongi ye wishes?????????? 😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
samy 2 wishes to puri hone ke chances h bt 3rd one bhagwaan hi jaane 😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
arrey ruchi kaha gayi????

ny1 knows nything abt it???? plz reply yaar
Edited by samu_khamkar - 13 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
are year tum kaha geye
kuch ud to dedo
mera to intejar ki gari
khatam ho gayi year
plz plz plz ud dedo
💔 nehi to dil tut jayega
😭 😭 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
just came across ur story..
nice one..
pls do pm me wen u update the nxt part...:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for being patient and liking previous parts...here is next part.Hope u all like it.Pardon mistakes.😊


Chapter-11

Improvisation

He was walking on terrace restlessly...holding his mobile in one hand he was looking at it again and again...his restlessness went on peak and then he irritably asked to himself,

"What are you looking in mobile...who's gonna call you!!!"

Or he was intentionally ignoring his own expectations..."who he was expecting to call..!!but why!!!"

He closed his eyes..the turmoil of emotions needed to be break out...he squeezed his eyes tightly to hold himself...frequent deep breaths made him to compose himself...as his mind got out of turmoil,a blurred image formed its existence in it...a beautiful sweet girl...laughing freely...her hair strains were touching her cheeks...it was very pleasant to watch her...he found himself lost in her...suddenly a hand raised from somewhere and touched her cheeks...caressing them lovingly it removed her hair strains... crawling through her features...down to her neck...Rajat was feeling restless...whose hand was this...who was that girl...he was restless...tried hard to move through the picture and see his face...he was trying hard to shift the frame to man's face...slowly it shifted...and a blurred view of face came in front of his eyes...he squeezed his eyes even more to see the clear picture...it was
getting clear...it was...it was He,himself!!!

So it was his desire...but who was that girl!!! was she mauli??? No...!!! She has short
hairs...then who??? Was she...Mug...dha!!!

A shiver ran down through his spine...what was that!!! was it his desire which came as an imagination???He wanted to be with her...He wanted her closeness!!!

"Ohh Mugdha...do I love you???" he asked to himself.

He better knew the answer,yet he can'nt accept it...the reason , for which he broke her
heart...a heart which means more than his own life to him...was yet exist...then how could he accept it...No where he can be weak...Never..!!!

This was his improvisation to his own feelings.
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"Shot ready!!!"spot boy announced to him.

He got up with a jerk...shaking his head,he headed up in front of camera where his dream was waiting for him,Mugdha was ready in creamy-white attire with read squines in it...she was looking breathtakingly beautiful...he could'nt put take his eyes off from her face...

He was so lost..."is she the same girl who he saw in his dream"he thought.
It was a cute fight sequence between surya and nandini...she teases him and he supposed to irritately ran before her...as he sequence started he started running before her...

as he was running before her,his past was also running in his eyes,their childhood days where she used to irritate her and he like that ran before her shouting...

"jungli billi..." words escaped from his mouth...and they were so loud that everyone heard them...


"CUT!!!" director shouted.

Mugdha turned back startled...she was yet to believe on her ears..he unintentionally called her jungli billi or intentionally,it was a big question...rajat was startled to himself...

Director came to him...

"What was that!!!u dint mugged up dialogs rajat...?"

Rajat could'nt find anything to explain,he just said.."Improvisation...I thought this will be an added fun for teen-age."

Director became serious..."hmmm...actually we can add this ,teen-age will like it...Good!"he said with a grin.
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After shot they got lunch break...rajat was waiting for it,he needed to talk to mugdha...about her coffee date with mehul...she was sitting outside the cave like area...rajat went to her...seeing him coming her,she intentionally closed her eyes,resting her back on chair pretending that she was sleeping..he sat making a place beside her...

"Mugdha!"he said.

She had to open her eyes...she looked him questionably,he said

"How was ur evening?"he asked with great efforts.

"Which evening..?"she asked though she knows well about which evening he was talking about.

"Last evening...with M---Mehul.."he asked.

She took a deep breath,"good!"

"Means???"he asked paniky but then holding his emotions,he said"What was good about it..."

She looked at him in dis-belief...she was in no-nonsense mood so she silently ignored

him...but he continued,

"so tell me what was so good about it?"he again asked.

This time she could't ignore him,she snaped "This is none of your business!"

"This is my business!!!"he shouted "From past night I could'nt sleep...do you get that!!!I am thinking of you day and night..and u are saying this is none of my business..!!!"

He threw his fist in air...she was looking at him flabbergasted,he squeezed his eyes to compose himself... mugdha was still numb...she was unable to react for she never thought even in her dreams that it could happen...!

After a few moments of awkwardness he left without saying anything but left so many questions in mugdha's mind.

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Ancy,mauli's hair dresser and her close friend was noticing her friend's uneasiness from past few days.After her break-up with rajat,she never found her happy...she was combing her hair and watching her(mauli) lost somewhere.

"Fine!"she asked.

"yeahh.."said mauli lost.

She stopped combing and holding her chin up she asked,"what had happened babes?why so worry?"

Mauli's eyes became moist with tears...she wiped corner of her eyes ,"Nothing..its just I need some time to move on..."

"Move on???but u were fed up with that relationship..that's y u both broke up..don't tell me that u can't forget him.."

"I think...I'll..but need some time..."said she and got up as shot was ready.Ancy was amazed on her improvisation of her feelings.

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That' all for now...hope u liked it..Press 'Like' if so😊
Edited by --Ruchi-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was really a nice part
so slowly raj is realising what he had lost couz of that mouli n unknowingly he said her ''jungli billi'' n that too infront of whole set,even mugs was shocked with his reaction n see what story he is making IMPROVISION,ha youth will like it...youth or you raj ?
n he is asking her about coffee with mehul,ha jealousy n now what happen to this mouli yaa,.i mean pehle toh respect ni kia n ab ro rahi h,plz ab ise beech main mat lana
update soon
luv u :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks alot Ruchi for giving an update though it was a short one...
I was expecting more MURAT scenes but u divided the update in many parts, it was nice...
but plz dear don't take so much time for next update... mujhse intezaar nahi hota...
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Posted: 12 years ago
okies..
editing finally..
lovly shovely ud..
finally seeing rajat d way i wanted..
he saw her in his dreamz.. she is his desire...

mera tho sirf ek hi desire h ki, inn dono koek saath dekhon...

haye, kinne shone lagte h voh ek saath..

oye hoye!!...
rajat is jealous.. mujhe bhott psnd aaya voh scene, lovely desc.

d way he finally erupts on her, mindblowingly good...'

hey, ab iss mauli ko kya hoa h...idiot bitch...
cnt firget rajat..
forget him.. he is just mugdha...
n mugdha's is rajat's 😳..

ud soon di, plz
Edited by sweetsanyo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update di

wow what nice update😃der se hi sahi but he realized that he loved mugs only...happy realization rajat😛

aur ab yeh mauli ke kya drame shuru ho rhe ...i just hate her😡ab usse rajat ki yaad aa rhi h...i just kill her agar wo rajat ke aas pass bhi ayi to😡

oho mehul date n mugs...kya baat h...but rajat ka gussa haye...kya hussa tha but i love that scene bechari mugs ko kuch samajh hi nhi aya ...koi nhi jaldi sab samajh ayega jb rajat usse purpose karega...


jungli billi...wow what a scene yr😃prc ki yaad aa gyi😭

overall fultoo fatak update
loved it
pls cont soon
or pls soon han

😃

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