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Amor. thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update darling 👍🏼
loved it
shruja thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for update after long time!!
loved improvisation in all parts except mouli!!
coz i don't want her to come again in between rajjy mugz!!
love feeling improvisation of rajjy
so he was dreaming his true love i..e. mugz!!
he was staring at mugz without blinking!
she was as beautiful as she was before
only thing u stopped experiencing/realising it!
loved he called jungli billi in front of all instead loved whole scene
loved he covered it with scene improvisaion
Yes we were n are crazy abt jungli billi n bigade rais
it reminded me beautiful prc days!!
ohh he want to know abt evening with mehul and is getting possessive abt her!!
loved he taking it as his mind business!
loved these lines
After a few moments of awkwardness he left without saying anything but left so many questions in mugdha's mind.

plz mouli keep ur realisation upto u
don't come between our cute pair now!

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update!!!!!!!!!!😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Ruchi dear, is ny chance of getting an update??


Even a small one will b appreciated, just like last time. Plz give us an update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey...just caught up with this ff, and just loved it!! Though I'm not a PRC fan but the way you are taking this ff forward, I feel like I'm falling for its characters. It was just some hours ago when I found your ff and here i am commenting up after reading the latest part. The way you are taking this ff forward, I mean the no nonsense writing with absolute no mushy cheesy scenes...the way i like it!! Well..I see that you haven't updated since a while, but when you do please pm me. A buddy req. is on its way. Once again I would say that your ff is just amazing and your writing too.

-shreya and kanishtha
Edited by muzzy_sk - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
kaha gaye ?????????

ek chota sa brilliant update dene ki baad

fuurrr ho gaye ?????

jaldi update dedo...

PLZZZ😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank u so much for liking previous part...😊

Chapter-12

'Its never too late..'

"If you ever see love,don't let it go...for once lost,you'll never get it back..."

It was her favorite novel and whenever she read these lines she felt like it was written for her only.
Mugdha brought it today at set so that she could easily pass her time during break without breaking her head into rajat and his disgusting talks.She was lost in her favorite book when he waved his hand in front of her,he...Mehul.

"Ohh God not again...she dint want to create a scene on set...she knew very well that rajat is upset with their coffee meet.She raised her head towards him.

"Lost?"he smiled.
She closed her book and kept it aside...Mehul picked it up quickly...

"Ohh this book is really good...u like love stories?"he asked.

"Pretty much!"

"have u read 'whitney,My Love',its great!"he said excitedly.

"umm..no...what is it about?"Now she was having interest in chat.

"Ohh its about a girl who has a childhood crush...she is a princess and very beautiful and her crush is her childhood friend...in her young age she is liked by a duke and he wants to win her...but she was very stiff about her crush and never love that duke...now u ahve to read what happens afterwards..."

"Childhood friends..."Mugdha mumbled and lost in her childhood crush...well not exactly crush but she never ever had thought of anyone else in her life..then y did she let him go...why she dint stop him...dint claim him as her...why..???

He waved his hand and she got back in present...

"I'm sorry..."she said awkwardly.

"m sorry if you feel bad,but can I ask you something?"he said politly.

"errr..yeah.."she said hesitately anticipating what he might going to ask.

"do you love someone?"he asked directly.

She looked at him shocked..she knew he would ask something like that but too directly..she never thought so.Now it was the hardest question for her to answer...for she herself was walking away from this question from so long...if she believe in her heart then it will be almost impossible to explain to anyone...why so..!! ufff...this heart without neurons is the most stubborn part of human organ..!

"yess"she finally quoted.

Mehul's eye went braod with surprise,"Really???who is the lucky one?"he asked in excitement and then realized it immediately,"Sorry!None of my business."

"its ok!"said Mugdha.

Rajat was watching them talking and sitting so comfortable with each other...he was feeling a burning sensation yet he was trying to behave normally and dint do anything that would create a scene.
After sometime spot boy called them for another shoot.

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"HECK!!!"Rajat punched on staring of car in annoyance...after all his efforts it refused to start and the worst thing was that it stopped at the place where there was no garage near by.He called his secretery for help and he reached with in 15 minutes.

"Its gone!take it to some garage.."Rajat tossed the keys to his secretery and started walking on endless road...his secretery called him from back,

"RT,wait I'll call someone to manage for you..."

But he ignored,or he dint listen...the sound of his own thoughts was so high that he was not able to listen to anyone...he was walking in his own world where he was fighting with his own feelings...annoyed he lit up a cigarette...

As soon as he lit it up,a coughing sound started echoing in his ears...it's intensity was increasing with each passing second and soon it became too loud to tolerate...he put his hands on ears...his breath had increased and he was all wet with sweat...the sound went silent...his breath became a bit normal...everything was silent when he heard a someone calling him...

"RAJAT...Rajat..." again that coughing sound...not that loud though..."Rajat plz don smoke...plzzz"
she was coughing and requesting him...

"offo jungli billi...let me try it once...I want to smoke once"said he inhaling his first cigarette...

"Its not a good habit...u should'nt do it.."she tried to explain him.

"Oye..I am not going to make it my habit...I just want to try once.."he said.

"But u'll be addicted...I bet!!!"said she.

But he did'nt pay a heed and continued doing the same.

A tear escaped from his eye..."You were right my jungli billi...it had become my habit...but I want to overcome it..not only smoking but drinking...everything that u don like...but how...how..!!!

He was unable to understand why suddenly these feelings are arising in his heart which he had been pushed away..why he wants mugdha back in his life..why...??? May be coz he is alone now..after Mauli broke up...he is all alone and now he wants someone who can understand him...someone who can be by his side in all ups and downs...

"Rajat!!!"someone called him from back.

He turned,it was Mugdha...ohh no two mugdha's..no three..OMG there was a crowd of mugdha's...he shook his head..have you gone mad!!! he again shook his head...a crowd was coming to him...ohh all his fans were behind him for his autograph...he realized that he was on a busy road walking openly so what else can you expect for a celebrity.

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At 12'o clock in the night,he gave up fighting with his heart and surrendered so he picked up his ph. and called mugdha,

"Rajat!"voice came from other side full of fear and shock.

It was expected...she must be a little shocked by his call.

"Yeahh...Am I disturning u..?"he asked politly.

"umm..not really..what happened?"

"I wanted to say..."he gulped hard...how to say it...he closed his eyes..ok its not a big deal..say it!!!

"yes??"her voice came.

"I wanted to say..sssooorr"

"Its ok rajat!"she replied even before he could complete the word 'sorry'

He leaned his head on wall and closed his eyes...how could be she so understanding,so observant ..or she has no expectations from him..?

"Anything else?"she asked

"Mugdha...I want to talk to you..."

"Say"

"Not on ph.plz meet me..."

"Right now...??"she asked confused

"No..tommorrow..."he said.

"Ok..anything else?"

"what are you doing?"he asked hesitately.

"Packing"said she

Packing...!!! "Ohhh Freak!!!!"

"What happened?"she asked

"I forgot that we r gng for outdoor..I have to pack.."he said getting panic.

"Its ok..rajat..go and pack...'its never too late'"

"yeah..ok..bye."
"Bye"

He hung up ph. but her last words kept echoing in his ears.."Its never too late..!"
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So that's all for now...hope u liked it..please press 'Like' if so.😊



Edited by --Ruchi-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
me first!!!!!!!!
Awesome update!!!!!!!!!!
Loved It!!!!!!!!!!😊😊😊😊😊😊
Amor. thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
mast maza aa gya
👍🏼❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
Woww..it was a really nice one. Rajat is slowly understanding his feelings for her. Hope he understands them fast.
And love the titles you give to each part, they have a strong relation to the story.
Thanks for the PM. Update soon.. :)

-Shreya and Kanishtha

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