Untamed and Fragile-RTMC FF update page 32 - Page 21

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow, thanks Ruchi for this update

I loved it, so finally RT is realizing his love for MC

but I hope soon he confess his feelings to her

hey, one doubt r u planning to end this story soon???
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Posted: 12 years ago

wow nice update rajat is realising his feelings for mugdha great.waiting for their outdoor shoot where more drama is gonna take place
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh u hv updated it after a very long time but that was really great
so Mr. RT is getting jealous with mehul n mugs fr8ship...but what about mugs RT when unwantedly she has to saw u n that mauli together
n he is so much involved in his own thoughts that he didn't even realise that he is on the busy road...ha ha ha...fans chasing him...ha ha ha...poor raj n now he is remembering her words...raj she is right it's never too late...
update soon...
luv u... :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
bahut khub👏

kya update year...

next update v jaldi de dena

sweetu😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
diii sorry late ho gyi mein bt mujhe is part ka pm nhi mila

aj kal sab mujhe bhulne lage h😭
bhot rona aa rha h

but i just loved this part

its a mixture of jealousy n realization

kash ki usse pehle hi realize ho jata ki she is his life😉...to yeh sab nhi hota

sorryyy bola😃 gud gud acchi baat h
or mugs ne use maaf bhi kar diya

u r very lucky rajat that u have mugdha like girl in his life😃plsss regret for ur mistakes😊

overall loved it

next part ke liye itna wait mat karana di plsss
ud soon
love u😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for update n pm
sorry for late comment
loved whole update divided in three part
liked its tittle which is very apt
liked comfort frndship level mehul n mugdha sharing which is making rajat feel jealous!
mugdha thing in right way! y she let him allow to go from her life?
why she din't claim him when he was her only!
loved the entire scene n each line n word of 2nd part!
yeh me too don't like smoking n mugdha bet won! he got addicted! we get attracted n addicted to wrong things first evenif it makes loss of us!
loved the scene u wrote in the way how he imagined her everywhere n it was not reality!!
last part was too awesome! he atleast decided to talk to her open his heart to her! loved "Its never too late..!"
excited abt wht will happen at outdoor shoots!
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Posted: 12 years ago
well starting hi its never too late se hoi h...

so i felt like u were teasing me wid dat...
coz mei bhot hi jyada late cmnt kerr rhi hun na..
dats why...

but koi nhi..
kisi mahan ne kaha h- JAB JAGO TABB SAVERA..
so fr dis update , i stick to the quote...
brilliantly writing.. as u alwayz write..
truely binding..
the bestest description of heart y have given here...
really, heart is so self-self rite???

its myogenic((self excitable).. self reliant...,, it far frm brain...
but still life is not possible wid out it...

mc is so cool abt rt..
but rt is nw being a observant...evn better..
he is realising his lov fr mc...

gr888.. so nice n dreamy ...

mc alwayz anticipate him the rite..
she knows him better than himself...

totall in lov wid dis rtmc couple..
its fits so gud to real rtmc...

brilliant wrk di..
superb writing..
lovd it..

thnx fr updating



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Posted: 12 years ago
hey..when are you gonna update next.. please do it soon... 😔
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
plz upd soon i m waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter-13

Once again...

It was a beautiful sight...the droplets of rain water on leaflets were shining like pearl... cool breeze paved its way inside car through window and brought a smile on mugdha's face.She sided down window and took out her face ...

"Wow!!!"she smiled appeasing the beauty of nature.

Rajat looked at her,"wow!!" he smiled appeasing the beauty of her.

They were on their way to baroda where outdoor shoot was scheduled.

Its true that nature makes you feel calm and peaceful and its also true that love blossoms in the heart which is filled with solace...you can feel love when you want ur heart to embrace it with open arms...Rajat was feeling that now..he was falling for his only and forever love Mugdha...once again he wants to make her feel special..to make her happy and to make her his forever...

He was gazing her...suddenly she turned..he escaped an eye contact but she caught him...he felt embarracement and started looking outside..looking in vein...

By afternoon they got settled in their rooms...All the cast and crew stayed in same hotel and adjusted in two floors.Rajat's room was two room ahead of mugdha's room.As soon as they got their rooms they slept out of tiredness.

He was also sleeping...suddenly he realized that someone is caressing his cheeks...it was amazing...he could feel the softness of touch and could figure out that it was some girl...his eyes were closed and he was enjoying it...suddenly the hand stopped and he felt as if the girl had removed her hand...he could'nt understand why???Why she removed her hand???it was so good to feel..it was giving him comfort,peace and solace then why ???He wanted it back...he opened his eyes and what he saw was that the
girl was none other than Mugdha...

She was looking at her with teary eyes as if he had broken her heart...but then she had broken his dream...both were culprit and guilty of each other...just then she started moving away...he wanted to stop her..he wanted to raise his hand to hold her back..but he could'nt..he tried hard but his hand was glued and he could raise it...she was going...and he shouted,

MUGDHAAA!!!!!!!!


And raised up...he was all panting...his breathing was fast and uncontrollable...a few moments later he realized that it was a dream...and slowly became normal...

He got up and drank a whole glass of water...now he was normal but the dream had left him to think.He suddenly started feeling lonely...

He checked time...it was half past six in the evening...so he decided to go out and have a walk.He took his black jacket and opened the door...and what he saw was that Mugdha was also standing out of the door ready for going out...both confronted...

"umm..walk???" rajat asked hesitately.

She shrugged her shoulders and both went out.
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Walking slowly beside almost empty road they were quiet and feeling the silence of nature.The trees so high looking as they were touching the sky,the cool breeze and dawn the perfect ambiance for romance yet they were far away from this...
Rajat was one to break that long lasting silence...

"Nice scenery..."he said looking at the sky.

"hmmm..."said Mugdha and they again were quiet.

"You prefer hill stations or beaches?"he said next just to start a conversation otherwise he knew that she loves hill stations.

She looked at him in disbelief and then taking a deep breath said,"Hill stations...they have a charm!"

Saying so a slight smile curved on her lips...it was worth watching..she was looking cute ...rajat noticed that she looked innocent at the same time beautiful...her hair strain was playing on her lips which she was again and again pushing back..he was lost so lost that he could'nt sense when his hand moved up holding her hair strain and pushing it slightly behind her ear...his finger touched her soft cheek in the course for which she felt a bit hesitant yet shy...she started looking down...he came closer stopping her in middle road...holding her in hand in one hand and his finger was moving on her face everywhere down making jaw line,he finally tilted down and buried his face in her neck...rubbing
with his nose and making her warm by his warm breath.

She felt a shiver ran down through her spine...she was feeling the heat...the desire to hug him tightly to have her only love back in her life...BUT!!!

suddenly she got her senses back..what was she doing..why was'nt stopping him...why..???
And now she was all in her senses...she pushed him away so hard that he got a jerk...he was away and shocked...

"What were you upto rajat???"she asked harshly and without giving him time to explain she started moving back fast.

It was so all of a sudden that rajat could't think what to do...she was going and he had to stop her..stop her from going away...he instantly kneelded down,

"Don't go mugdha..plz don't go..."he pleaded.

It was looking like the wind had stopped...everything was so silent...after few unbelievable moments mugdha turned back...looking shocked...!

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