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Posted: 13 years ago
oa! hoa!
kya baat hay year
abto update ddeedde
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: samu_khamkar

Ruchi, u hav promised dat u'll ud today, so i m waiting...


I am writing...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: samu_khamkar


wowww 😍 👏 👏 u r right rashmi, shruja is queen of siggy making but from where u got this pic?


Shruja had deleted that..she changed the siggie a bit and now its more beautiful...I'll post it with update today😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter-10

When life takes turns

Mugdha could'nt ask rajat for help,her hope for portfolio and being selected as sanyogita were going down with each second passing...it was half past mid-night and she still was at the same place with zero progress...suddenly baba's pale face came in her mind and a tear rolled down on her cheeks...she was walking to rajhans,as it was very late so she had decided to take a short cut from rajat's home to rajhans...

Her mind was working fast as to whom she could seek help,several faces came and went...suddenly Rohit's face came into her mind..."Yes...he can help me out..!"she thought and called him immediately.Rohit was an struggling actor and he learnt acting from Rajhans...mugdha knew him from these days.

"Hello!"

"Hello rohit...mugdha here.."

"Yes mugdha..how come u call me late night?is everything fine"he asked concerned

"yeahh fine..I need ur help"she said

"Yes..tell me"

"I want a photoshoot right now...I have to mail portfolio this night only.."

"Right now???But...ok let me talk to my photgrapher.."said he and hung up.

After 5 minutes he called back and told her the place she have to come for photoshoot.Mugdha's lips curved in a

big smile..her problem had been solved.

It was 3 o'clock in the night when they had done with portfolio...mugdha thanked them almost ten times before leaving.
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Next morning she was waiting there in Mehra arts office reception...there were many new girls sitting there...she was feeling hell nervous and her heartbeats were to fast to count...some were keeping portfolio in hands,other like mugdha who have mailed them in night were not.Between her thoughts rajat's pale and sad face was coming in her mind..she dint want to think of him but still she had no control over her thoughts,they were coming and running...from her childhood days to the time they were together...how he always backed her in times where she felt nervous,she was certainly missing his presence,his words which indirectly gives her strength...

She was lost when someone waved his hand in front of her eyes,she came back from her trail of thoughts,her sight fall on one pair of legs fitted well in denim ,she raised her eyes slowly ,a tall,fair-colored handsom guy in chocolate brown shirt was looking at her with a smile on his face...her eyes crawled upto his face and stopped on his eyes...the delighted glim was making them lively...

"Hello!!"he waved again.

Mugdha gained her senses.."umm..yes!"she squeezed her eyes as to recognize him.

He smiled even more..."Hey...I am Mehul vyas...u must have come for auditions right?"he asked

"yeahh..."she said hesitately.

"for nandini's role?"he asked scanning her from head to toe.She had wore a light pink shifon suit and had a little make-up just eye make-up and a lip-liner...though sharp kajal in her eyes was making them beautiful and she was looking elegant in that simple attire.

"Nandini...no..."she replied confusedly.

"So must be lead's mother..."he said with a grin.

That make her a bit annoyed,"I think u should mind your business..."she turned her face in disguest.

"Hey sorry sorry...was just kidding..."he make space beside her and sat.

Mugdha made a face.."huh...disgusting!"she mumbled.

"sorry...did u say anything?"he asked

"not yet!"she snapped.

"huh...showing attitude as though she is a lead..."he thought but apparently he smiled,"I' also for auditions...for main lead...prithvi.."said he heading up with proud.

Mugdha just nodded...he again tried to get her attention,"you should try to be friendly with me...who knows next day I might become famous as PRC and u remain inquisitive to get a glimpse of me..."he smirked.

"Ohh really..!"mugdha was about to say something when her name was called..she just passed him a glare and went inside.

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"Rajat...u have a call from Mehta arts...I had fixed time for meeting on this sunday evening.."said Ritu.

"I am not going.."

"You have to...u also left wo chand si..that stage show...and now.."

"Mom please!!!"

"What please??what r u trying to do...to ruin ur career???"Ritu was getting worried as well as angry.

"I need a break..."he protested.

"Listen!!!you are going to have a talk with PH this sunday!!!"said Ritu firmly.

He just looked at her helplessly and went to his room...opened a brand new vodka bottle and drank directly

without having a glass.

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One and the half Months later

Mugdha came out of her vanity van...she was looking breathtakingly beautiful in princess attire...with heavy jewellery appeasing her beauty...

All eyes raised towards her...rajat was standing there at the site in prince attire having a golden color stripe around his head crossing in the middle of forehead...his hair were a bit long than usual for giving him a royal look and the sword across his waist was comprehending his royal manliness.he looked stunned seeing mugdha...for a minute he could'nt put his eyes off from her face...

She came at the site...the assistant director was explaining about the scene,

"so its like sanyogita is coming from that side and prithvi from opposite...u both have to carelessly colloid and then sanyogita fell down on grass...ok...we'l take two separate shots first..."

It was the first scene for which rajat and mugdha were shooting together,before it they had shot their scene with other co-stars but not together...both were feeling very awkward...

They reached at their places...first rajat sequence of coming was shot and then mugdha...now the scene of collision...they took almost 15 re-takes for that 15 seconds collision scene increasing director's frustration to the extreme...

"PACK UP!!!"he said all frustated.

Mugdha was going to her vanity when mehul called her from back,

"Hey!!!"he smiled.

"Hey mr.superstar..how are u?"she said sarcastically.

"Superb!!"he said ignoring her sarcasm.

"so autograph??"she said and smiled.

He laughed,"Plz...don take me wrong..I am just like that.."he said sheepishly.

"I know...anyways...u were right..I'll play nandini soon.."she giggled.

He laughed,"see I am always right...but u noe I am liking my character..its true that I had come for lead

audition and they give me a side character but it is also a strong role..."he said.

"hmm..I know a bit..have read script..."she said.

"so what are u doing in evening?"he asked

"Its half past eight..."she raised her brows.

"c'mon..just one coffee..plzzz"he insisted.

"okay!"she smiled a bit,"Lets change first..."

They both moved to their respective vanities but they dint notice that someone was there,listening them and watching them...at some distance Rajat was there.

He felt a gitter in his heart seeing mehul with mugdha...although he had become good friend with whole PRC gang and they all shared a good raport yet mehul's closeness with mugdha was making him restless.
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P.S. someone give me link of some good Priyo scenes...I badly need them😉 😆

Edited by --Ruchi-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
A big thanx for giving an update 🤗 🤗 I liked the whole part nd really liked dat u didn't waste time on explaining , how rajat left dat rotten stage show nd that crap show with dat ***** 😡 😡

Actually i thought Rohit is d third character but when i read the later part , my confusion got cleared 😊

I liked dat now Rajat is being jealous by seeing mugz nd mehul together 😃 😃

@Ruchi u r a ⭐️ ⭐️ but y do this always??? y u stopped at this point, 2-4 lines aur likh deti abt RAJAT's JEALOUS FEELINGS 😡 😡 😡

dats not fair now my same dialouge "PLZ UPDATE SOON" 😆 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update!!
liked mugz din't took help of rajat and made her own way
thanks to rohit who helped her!!
liked mugz nervousness n remembering rajat before audition!
mehul n mugz first meeting was superb!!
liked convo n interaction between them
mehul showing attitute😆
but he guess true our mugz got role of female lead
but he din't of prithvi areh tht is toh fix for our rt 😳 no 1 else
but he still happy in getting side role as it is imp
liked +tive side of mehul
thank god rt left woh chand si n tht stage show😃
poor guy want break but he had to work
ohh our princess looking beautiful in sanyo's costume n rt couldn't take his eyes off her!!😳
heheh oh god 15 re-takes!! is tht coz of mugz nervousness or rt?
i remember they had many re-takes at mugz slapping to rt scene they told in their prc interview!!
so rt is jealous with mugz n mehul closeness!! did u thot abt mugz when u r with tht bitch mouli😡

for priyo scenes ask rashmi 😃 ya koi bhi prc-rtmc fan😊
Edited by shruja - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
reso jii..

siggy- kya siggy h, i mean, yup its kinda animated rite..
pehle black and den it truns colored..
rt ka chroma n mc.. so perfecto...

lovely jii, awesome

~~EDITED~~
sry, unres karne k liye late ho gya,
but i ws busy wid ma today's pmt exa,. so i hav a valid reason for delay...
now wid, ud.

yipieee... humari mugz ne rajat se help nhi mangi, yehh!!!..
but her friend ws really gud,
so mehul hs a cute character here...
he is kinda flirting wid mugz...but i like him,
coz he is vry effortlessly able to make rt jealous.. i hav listened a many times, jealousy wrks,..
wanna see it here too...

but i saw a change in mugz too,
she has developed a attitude, vry similar to dat of rt...

but u noe wat...
sanyo ki atire main , she is d most innocent...
i lov her dat way...
evn as ananya in dharamveer...

dey took, 15 takes... o mannn!!!...
lagta h, kuch kuch alag alag lag raha h rt ko,
he is not comfortable wid mugz's closeness wid mehul,

deing to read more,
plz ud soon...
Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow nice update...👏
i really wanted that this time mugs didn't seek help from raj,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,rohit was nice and a true fr8,,,,,,,,,
so mehul was trying to flirt with mugdha,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,mehul gandi baat apni honi wali bhabhi se flirt,,,,,,,,,,,,achi baat nahi just think about your brother,,,,,,,,,,
n raj left that stage show good,,,,,,,,,,,,n love his mother couz she is the only reason raj got ready for prc,,,,,,,,,,,,,,n raj too was stunned to see her in her new avatar...well raj you never paid attention but she is the most beautiful girl,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
n that scene,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,prc wala scene,,,,,,,,,,,,their first meeting,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,but they took 15 re-takes...oh i am sure they never took that much re-takes in their actual shoot in prc,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
so rajat was jealous...bachu now you will understood mugs feeling when she saw you with that mouli bitch,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
continue soon...
luv u...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update di!
I loved the fact u included Mehul...mujhe woh PRC ke friends mein se sabse zyaada achha lagta tha
aapke update ke wajah se woh collision scene ki yaadein tazaa ho gayi...thx for that!!
Eagerly waiting to see more Rajat-Mugdha interaction..
Lov u...
P.S The banner is amazing!!! Great work shruja di!!!
Edited by glossyglassy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was awesome
loved it
plz try to update soon...

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