TUM MERE HO ~2 (RTMC FF) Last Part Pg 16

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TUM MERE HO (RTMC FF)
Second Thread



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Thank you so much for all your love and support...love you all...🤗

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Second thread

Part 70 Pg 1
Part 71 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/54620316
Part 72 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/54765592
Part 73 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/55316918
Part 74 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/55885279
Part 75 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/55986165
Part 76 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/57655115

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Part 70 🤗

Renuka "wow...its a lovely house Di...i liked it"

Devika "i knew...you would definitely like it...you took so long to come and where's Nandini??"

Renuka "she is coming...she took so long to get ready...firstly she wore her golden color saree then changed and wore red color...i tell you Di, girls now a days take so much time to get ready...we all were waiting for her..."

Prithvi was taking the gifts from the car "now will you come out or should I pick you as well"

Nandini "no need...i will come...this saree is heavy...you won't understand...its easy to walk in pant."

Prithvi "what??? pant???? its suit Nandini...suit" he said firmly looking at her giving her a stern look...

Nandini "i know that..." she picked up the saree a little to walk... as she adjusted her hair...she walked inside...

Devika "Nandini my child...come" she hugged her...

Nandini "hello Aunty...how are you?...this is such a nice house..."

Devika "really...thanks beta...i thought I must buy a new house closer to your area...so that I can invite you whenever I want"

Nandini smiled "thanks aunty...i will come myself"

Devika looked at Prithvi who greeted her "how are you beta..."

Prithvi "very well Aunty...nice house...nice location"

Devika "thanks Prithvi...well you should go around and have a look" while she was talking to Renuka...

Richa looked at Nandini "go..."

Nandini nodded

Richa "come on...go"

Nandini didn't looked at Prithvi but walked beside him...

they climbed upstairs...

Nandini "wow...such a big house...and its so beautiful..."

Prithvi didn't say anything...

Nandini looked at him... then saw a huge bedroom...very nicely decorated "wow..."

Prithvi "wow...for what??"

Nandini "for...for...its very nice bed" she said confusedly...

Prithvi "nice bed!!! but why are you saying this..."

Nandini "why am I saying this!!! means???"

Prithvi "yes why are you saying this...do you like this bed???"

Nandini "of course...it is nice..."

Prithvi came closer "really..." he said smirkingly... "in what ways??"

Nandini was now nervous... "hmmm...well it looks comfortable...and..."

Prithvi "and..."

Nandini "and...one can have good sleep..." she didn't look at him

Prithvi came more closer and looked into her eyes... "lets try..."

Nandini gulped "what????"

Prithvi "yes..." he said casually

Nandini "i...i didn't mean that...i..."

Prithvi "then what???" he said with a frown on his forehead...

Nandini "i '..i am going..." she said...

Prithvi slowly came closer and moved his hand towards her bare waist visible from her saree...he caressed the soft skin and pulled her closer...

Nandini "Please Prithvi...don't..." he wanted her lips, as he bent down to kiss her, he heard someone coming upstairs... he moved back...

Nandini looked at him and slowly moved towards the door...

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Sameer "hi Prithvi...long time...how are you?"

Prithvi "very good...how's your work?"

Sameer "too good...here's my friend Gaurav"

Gaurav "hi Prithvi...heard lots about you from Sameer"

Sameer "he is a boxer...and yes a very good fighter...and a successful business man"

Prithvi "alright alright...how are you Gaurav...so you work with Sameer"

Gaurav "no I am a gynecologist...i have my clinic in Delhi."

Prithvi "ok...anyways nice to meet you"

Nandini came to ask something... Prithvi introduced her "she's my wife Nandini...and Nandini you know Sameer...and this is doctor Gaurav"

Nandini "hello"

Gaurav "hello"

She left after sometime...

Sameer "...well we have to leave now...will see you sometime later...and yes are you still going for the boxing practice...??"

Prithvi "yes I do...anyways will catch up sometime..."

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It was late night...

Nandini was keeping her clothes neatly... Prithvi was doing his work on his laptop... she heard Richa calling out...

she immediately left...

Nandini "Richa...are you alright??"

Richa "yes...i hurt my foot...and couldn't control the pain..."

Nandini "oh...let me have a look..." it was little sore...she applied some antiseptic...

Richa "ouch...that's alright Nandini... I am fine..."

Nandini "i got scared...you please take care"

Richa "i am alright now...you tell me...is everything fine between you two??"

Nandini "yes...don't worry...you better go to sleep...tomorrow you have to visit the doctor..." she said and suddenly remembered "you know I met a famous gynecologist at the party this evening"

Richa "really...but I have a very nice doctor..."

Nandini "well you must go for the best...its for your baby..."

Richa "Nandini '.can I ask you something..??? if you don't mind"

Nandini "of course you can ask anything...i can never mind what you say"

Richa "are you planning for a baby?"

Nandini "i want to...but..."

Richa "if you both are ready...then what's the problem?"

Nandini "i don't know...we are married since a long time now...you know I had a miscarriage and after that...what all happened..."

Richa "i know...but I think you should check with some doctor...it could be something else"

Nandini "something else???" she said worriedly

Richa "don't get scared...its a normal thing...most couples don't have babies immediately...it will be a normal check up"

Nandini thought for a moment... "alright...now you go to sleep..."

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Nandini was sitting on the bed and watching Prithvi doing his work "when will you sleep??"

Prithvi didn't look at her "i have lots of work to complete Nandini...its better you go to sleep"

Nandini "i...i wanted to ask you something..."

Prithvi "is it important??" he said while checking his files...

Nandini "hmmm...don't know if it is for you or not"

Prithvi looked at her "what is it??"

Nandini "leave it...we can talk tomorrow..." she pulled over the blanket and slept...

Prithvi "fine..." he went back to his work...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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so here is our second threat.👏🥳
tum mere ho rocks n rulzzz...🤗...

i m happy that i m first here to comment...😉...

hope i may prove a lucky charm for u this time...

so back to ud.😳

loved the way he defended his suit...
''nandini suit...its suit!''...🤣...
ab pata chala saari ki uljhaan...😆

wearing a saari is really a big task, almost equal to going on a war...
i experienced it in ma farewell party...it ws a terrific experience.
next time, na saari at damn cost.

men will be men, more importantly, PRITHVI WILL B PRITHVI......
KAHIN BHI SHORO HO JATA HAI......

gynecologist...🤔...ummm. new entry...🤔
now ma detective is working...😎...

is there a prob with nandu...or prithvi..
lets see...😕...
i love ur story n u too.🤗


Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wao new new thread 😊
hahahahahaha 😆 prithvi... Jha nandini ko akela dekha whi suru lol
nandini bachke 😛
waooo ab prithvi n nandu ka bi baby 👏
do do baby 👏
i love babies 😊
w8 for babies
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats for the new thread...haye hamare PRINI ka second thread...🤗
the update was awesome...👏
what to say about prithvi...prithvi just look it's not ur house...😆
n nandu...why it's looking that she always trying to run away from prithvi...
n new entry...gaurav...
n now nandu is thinking about baby...good...😛
but why she didn't said anything to prithvi...???????...😕
update soon...
luv u...😊
Edited by ridzzi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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muah muah muah di.wonderful and such a surprising update lov u please please update soon you know i am your fan.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats on the new thread...
nice part...
plz make things alright between both of them...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats for the new thread!!!
please remove the tension b/w them ...
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Congrats for new thread
Edited by Shifat - 13 years ago
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congratulations on 2nd thread🤗🤗🤗
thanks for update n pm
beautiful update
prithvi always passionate for nandini ☺️
but poor nandini always had to feel embarrassment due to him😒
n prithvi don't understand this
Renuka "she is coming...she took so long to get ready...firstly she wore her golden color saree then changed and wore red color...i tell you Di, girls now a days take so much time to get ready...we all were waiting for her..."

but he is always ready for her😆😆😆
Prithvi was taking the gifts from the car "now will you come out or should I pick you as well"
🤣
kahi bhi shuru ho jata hai😛 n makes nandu nervous😆
but i don't know y she feels such when with him😕pehele toh secured feel karti thi
ohhh nandu thoda dhyan prithvi p bhi do na!! instead of worrying abt all
n y nandu want baby so early her miscarrage was in her early age
how much time they spent together with all sudden shocks n separation in their life😭 i miss their days of their college!! ohh those lovely days😍


Edited by shruja - 13 years ago
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nice part dhanvi...
n congrats for the new thread...
i guess gaurav is d next villan in d story...
i hope everything is fine between our fav luv birds...
luv u...
ud soon...

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