TUM MERE HO ~2 (RTMC FF) Last Part Pg 16 - Page 10

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Posted: 13 years ago
#91
oh noo.. i seriously didnt like nandini here..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92

The update was good……………👏

But nandu is really fool……….he said too much rubbish things to her n then apologized and said that he is just joking………..N here she is…………..she forgived him………..n asking richa to forget all what happened……………..😡

Nandu have u kept ur brain in store room…………..😡

Richa n prithvi both were angry with her…………well that's obiyous……..she has to face it……..couz she is only doing foolish things………….n what's the prob with her………..why she doesn't tell anything to prithvi………??????...😡...she herself creat a building of problem around her...

She is only thinking about gaurav's family n career n what he had done with richa………what about that………….?????...😡

Nandu u really need to lesson something from richa…………….

Update soon…………..

Luv u………….😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
#93

nice update..

liked it..

bt didnt like nandu's behavior..

thnx for the pm...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#94
ahhh interesting part

continue soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
gr8 ud di !! 👍🏼
its amazng dat Nandani is still so innocent n pure at heart even aftr everythng dat happnd 2 her !!
she still believes in humanity n forgivness !!
but dat horrible doc doesnt deserve dat !! 😡
he shuld b behind bars !! 😡
sum thngs cant b forgivn !! 😡
Richa's anger is justified !!
she shuld tell Prithvi !!
nandu jab Prithi is...☺️... atleast tab to distractd mat ho...
luv u...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96

Part 75



Nandini woke up early morning...


she went to Richa's room '.


Nandini "Richa, please wake up..."


Richa woke up with her eyes half open "what??? let me sleep"


Nandini "i have cooked your favorite breakfast"


Richa wasn't so happy "Nandini please, you don't have to do that...i am not angry with you...i know you are so innocent that anyone can fool you"


Nandini "Richa, I can't see you annoyed with me..."


Richa smiled a little "Nandini come sit here"


she hold her hand...


Richa "even I don't feel good, alright if you want me to forget...but always remember one thing Nandini, never trust anybody blindly and never believe what anyone says"


Nandini "ok, I will remember...now please get up and come for breakfast...i am waiting for you"


Richa smiled and hugged her...



___*******



Nandini was happy that Richa was not angry with her... she went in her room with a cup of coffee...


Prithvi was still sleeping...


Nandini "Prithvi...wake up...your coffee" she said


Prithvi opened his eyes but didn't talk to her...


Nandini felt bad...but she tried to talk to him "i will take out your clothes out...you get ready"


Prithvi didn't look at her "leave it...i can do it myself"


Nandini "please Prithvi...don't be so angry with me" she hold his hand


Prithvi "Nandini, leave my hand"


Nandini "i won't '..first you have to smile"


Prithvi angrily looked at her then pulled his hand away with force "don't mess with me"


Nandini started crying... "Please Prithvi, I am sorry...please listen to me"


Prithvi "all you can do is cry..." he said and went towards the bathroom...


Nandini sat on the bed, helplessly she looked at the bathroom... she took out his clothes...and went downstairs...


After some time...


Prithvi came downstairs...


Prithvi "mom...i will have breakfast at work... I don't have time"

Renuka "ok beta"


Nandini came out of the kitchen...by the time she reached the door...he had left...


she felt bad...


Renuka "Nandini , beta you have your breakfast, I have to get ready for my conference..."


Nandini "yes mom..."


Richa looked at her sad face "Nandini, what happened???"


Nandini "nothing" she smiled...


Richa "stop acting Nandini...please tell me whats wrong??"


Nandini "Prithvi isn't talking to me"


Richa "Oh, not again...what do you do Nandini that he get angry???"


Nandini was quiet... "well...i didn't do anything"


Richa "oh...you didn't do anything...then is he just over reacting???"


Nandini "no no...i mean I did but..."


Richa "what did you do???"


Nandini "i...i..." she was nervous...


Richa "fine...if you don't want to tell...but remember he loves you a lot...call him, I am sure he will be fine"


Nandini looked up with hope "really??"


Richa "of course, he can't stay away from me..." she said and went to her room...


Nandini called him... he didn't pick up the phone...she tried again...


Prithvi "yes...what is it???"


Nandini "i am sorry Prithvi...please this won't happen again"


Prithvi didn't say anything "what were you thinking last night???"


Nandini "i wasn't thinking anything, everything is fine between me and Richa..."


Prithvi "what was the matter...???"


Nandini "nothing...it was...it..."


Prithvi "i don't have time Nandini...will talk when I come back home"


Nandini smiled "ok, bye"


she was happy that at least he spoke to her...


_____*******


It was evening...


Prithvi "sure, you can come to my place anytime after 7pm..." and disconnected the phone...


he came out of the car and walked inside...


he looked around... there wasn't anyone...


Prithvi "mom...Nandini"


Richa came out... "Prithvi , aunty went out for a conference, and Nandini is upstairs...i am just going out for a walk..."


Prithvi "thanks Richa...how are you?? how was your checkup?"


Richa was quiet for a minute "i am fine...check up was alright"


----

Prithvi went upstairs...


He looked around for Nandini... then took off his coat and tie... he lay on the bed... when he saw her climbing onto him... "Nandini..."


Nandini "yes" she whispered...


he looked at her wet hair...she came out of the bath with a towel wrapped around her body...


Prithvi smiled "are you trying to seduce me???"


Nandini "i am loving you..." she kissed him on his neck and chest


Prithvi laughed "well Nandini, its funny to see you behave like this...it doesn't suit you..." his hands touched the soft skin on her thighs...


Nandini was nervous...she moved back and stood near the bed...


Prithvi pulled her closer... "let me kiss my sweetheart"


his hands curled around her waist... with one hand he opened the knot of her towel...she embraced him tightly... he took off his shirt and pushed her to the bed...


____

He knocked the main door...there wasn't anyone around...he walked upstairs when he saw a door closed...he bend down and peeped through the whole of the door... he could see her lay under Prithvi...his lusty eyes were piercing at her...


____

Prithvi kissed her passionately... she closed her eyes...his hands explored her body... he rolled her over, kissed her back hungrily...


____

He kept on looking at her...her body was far more than beautiful then he had imagined...he walked back downstairs...


After some time


A servant saw him sitting on the couch "how can help you sir?"


"Can you please inform Prithvi, that Dr Gaurav has come to meet him" he said smilingly...


______*************



Edited by Freethinker - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97

nandu is so cute!

no one can b annoyed wid her long,

she is sweetheart

ma lovey dovey nandu!

richa is a sweet friend too, she is rite!

ny1 cn fool nandu easily!

prithvi is perfect husband.-perfectly equipped wid arrogance, loving, caring, everything...amazing!.




He looked around for Nandini... then took off his coat and tie... he lay on the bed... when he saw her climbing onto him... "Nandini..."


Nandini "yes" she whispered...🤣 wat is this!. so🤣 funny, tote(parrots)🤣 udd gaye ...by god!🤣


he looked at her wet hair...she came out of the bath with a towel wrapped around her body... ooo😳ooo😳ooo😳,😳 damn sexy!☺️


Prithvi smiled "are you trying to seduce me???".....yes, may yes, nono, not may, bichari sacchi main try kr rhi h!


Nandini "i am loving you..." she kissed him on his neck and chest......carry on! nandu u rock man!😆, good going!...some day u will be really good in this, i believe!🤔


Prithvi laughed "well Nandini, its funny to see you behave like this...it doesn't suit you..." his hands touched the soft skin on her thighs... awww!....come on prithvi, she is trying so much, don't make her moral down😡


Nandini was nervous...she moved back and stood near the bed...


Prithvi pulled her closer... "let me kiss my sweetheart"


his hands curled around her waist... with one hand he opened the knot of her towel...she embraced him tightly... he took off his shirt and pushed her to the bed...

thats good!, actually too good!☺️



okay di, take a shovel...

were r going out!...😈...


where????????😕


to dig gaurav's grave!.😡

come on fast!.

Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
great part
this gaurav is creepy
hpoe nandini understands this before it is too late
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
very nice update
loved it by god

aakhir nandni ne prithvi ko mana hi liya
afterall they love each other so much

awww.,this gaurav is so cheap man yr i just kill him
laato ke bhut bato se ni maante na

update soon
thanks 4 pm
luv u
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Posted: 13 years ago
di mast tha update...👏
finally nandu richa n prithvi ko manane main successful ho gae...
n loved prithvi n nandu scenes...nandu is trying to seduce him...n prithvi ne toh uski saari mehnat pe paani pher diya...😆
gaurav...🤬..🤬..🤬..🤬..🤬...moron...😡
maar dalo ise jaldi se...jaldi jaldi jaldi...😡
update soon...
luv u...😊

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