TUM MERE HO ~2 (RTMC FF) Last Part Pg 16 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats on new thread dhanvi
Awesome upd

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Posted: 13 years ago
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All my lovely RT fans Plz Join

Rajat Tokas#2||Come Back Soon||Invites Only
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congratulations !! n celebrations !! 4 d 2nd thread !!🥳
Tum Mere Ho rox !!! 👏
"what??? pant???? its suit Nandini...suit" hillarious !!🤣
Prithvi is...impossible ...
aunty ke ghar mein bhi !!!
prini's baby !!!! wow...
i hope evrythng's all right wid both of dem !!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats for the new thread di...

i really liked the part..

it was awsum..

but plzz dont want anything bad now..

thnx for the pm...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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for second thread dear 👏...'Tum Mere Ho' rocks😊...'PriNi' r the best couple😳...& u r a superb writer😃...love u 'Dhanvi' dear for a fabulous RTMC FF🤗...



nice update😊...so now starts 'baby track'😍...hmm...looking forward to it...plz update soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats for the new thread...! as usual nice part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats congrats congrats 👏 👏 👏

Dhanvi for New thread
I m very glad read this new update Of ''Tum Mere Ho''
loved It
Thank u so much dear 😛 😛 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 71

Nandini was drying her hair when Richa came in "you aren't ready?"

Nandini "don't worry...i won't take more than five minutes..."

Richa received a call... "hello Doctor Nidhi...i am just leaving in few minutes..."

Nandini looked at her face...

Richa "what??? oh...but...anyways...alright...thanks Doctor"

Nandini saw her face "what happened???"

Richa "nothing...my doctor is leaving the town...she has handed over my file to some other doctor...its my choice to visit that doctor or not"

Nandini "well what can I suggest...i don't know much about this"

Richa "Doctor Nidhi was a wonderful doctor...i can't trust another doctor"

Nandini "wait...i told you about Doctor Gaurav...he's a gynecologist as well...i can take you to him..."

Richa "are you sure he's a good doctor..."

Nandini "oh yes...we can visit him"

-----*******

Prithvi was reading his newspaper...and at the same time eating something... he was about to put his hand on the plate when he touched her hand... she shyly took the plate... "its empty" she said...

Prithvi smiled a little, she looked beautiful...he wanted to hold her...there wasn't anybody around... he walked upstairs... "Nandini...Nandini..."

she quickly washed her hands and went in her room "yes...what is it?"

Prithvi "i ate something spicy..."

Nandini was surprised...she knew Prithvi doesn't eat spicy food... "well...what did you have???"

Prithvi "don't know but can I have something sweet..."

Nandini "alright..."

She went downstairs and got a chocolate... "here...this will help"

Prithvi had a bite... "no, didn't help much...get something else..."

Nandini was getting irritated now... she quickly got ice cream "here...try this..."

Prithvi tasted a little "no...no...get something sweeter...this is not that sweet"

Nandini "what...??? ice cream is not sweet...what should I get??? I don't have anything now"

Prithvi came closer and hold her tightly "let me take it myself" he bent forward and kissed her red lips...there was a taste of the lipstick... she didn't stop him...he lifted her towards the bed, and kissed her passionately... his hands were caressing her breast... she felt her hands cold and sweaty...she turned a little he stopped "Nandini ...what happen?"

Nandini "so my lips are sweeter?"

Prithvi "do you love to hear about you...?? well if you do...its yes..."

Nandini looked at him and laughed...

Prithvi "why are you laughing...??"

Nandini "look in the mirror..." she looked at herself... then shyly looked at him in the mirror...

Prithvi got red color on his lips...that was Nandini's lipstick... he quickly wiped it... "doesn't matter...its just the lipstick color..." he again grabbed her and sucked her lips...then took off her saree...she stood against the wall with a blouse and a slip... he came closer and kissed her on her neck and chest...then bent down while she leaned against the wall...he kissed and nibbled her waist... she closed her eyes...he kissed and sucked her navel... she was completely lost and came on her knees...she gasped sharply at the feeling and embraced him tightly...

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Richa was looking for Nandini... "aunty...where is Nandini??"

Renuka "she must be in her room...i haven't seen her since morning..."

Richa went upstairs... she knocked the door... "Nandini...Nandini..."

Nandini opened her eyes while she was lying under him...

Richa "please come fast...we have to leave..."

Nandini whispered "Prithvi, please let me go..." her hands were entangled tightly between his hands...she was sweating under him... her hair was wet...he sucked her lips again... "i love you" he said and smiled...

Richa "Nandini are you sleeping...??"

Prithvi whispered "tell her you are getting ready"

Nandini smiled at Prithvi who understood her "Richa I am coming...just getting ready..." she hugged him tightly...he was inside her...both kissed each other...

------******

After some time

Nandini got ready, while Prithvi was lying on the bed...she covered him with a sheet... "bye"...she whispered and kissed him on the lips... he smiled lazily...

Nandini "yes Richa...lets go..."

Richa "where were you??? you took so long to get ready"

Nandini "stop complaining...lets go..."

Richa and Nandini were driving towards Doctor Gaurav's clinic...

Richa "i hope he's a good doctor..."

Nandini "don't worry...i am sure he's a very good doctor..."

soon they reached the reception...

Nandini "we are here to see doctor Gaurav"

Receptionist "sure maam...please have a seat..."

Nandini and Richa seated on the couch in the reception

Receptionist "maam, are you the new patient??"

Richa "yes"

Receptionist "please fill in this form" she gave a form and a pen...

Richa filled the form and handed back...

After some time...

Receptionist "maam...you may please go inside..."

Richa "thanks..." she turned to Nandini "come"

Nandini "do you want me to come inside..."

Richa "of course...now please"

Nandini "alright..."

Richa opened the door...

Doctor Gaurav "hello...please have a seat..." he looked at Nandini …. "i have seen you somewhere"

_______*************



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

so here is our second threat.👏🥳
tum mere ho rocks n rulzzz...🤗...

i m happy that i m first here to comment...😉...

hope i may prove a lucky charm for u this time...

so back to ud.😳

loved the way he defended his suit...
''nandini suit...its suit!''...🤣...
ab pata chala saari ki uljhaan...😆

wearing a saari is really a big task, almost equal to going on a war...
i experienced it in ma farewell party...it ws a terrific experience.
next time, na saari at damn cost.

men will be men, more importantly, PRITHVI WILL B PRITHVI......
KAHIN BHI SHORO HO JATA HAI......

gynecologist...🤔...ummm. new entry...🤔
now ma detective is working...😎...

is there a prob with nandu...or prithvi..
lets see...😕...
i love ur story n u too.🤗


Thanks for your lovely comments sweetheart...love you too 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: maria_awan

Thanks 4 updating dear

Thanks dear...😊

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