TUM MERE HO ~2 (RTMC FF) Last Part Pg 16 - Page 13

so finally it finished...

a really sweet n cute end..

loved it..

really amazing..

will miss this ff..

thnx for sharing the wonderful story di...

Originally posted by: disha15

Diii 😃

Tum mere ho is an epic piece of fanfiction!

I cannt tell you how much i have loved this story.My gudness!

I seriously loved Shikar ok..n was like damn,di has very well written this story..really gud.N den i strtd readin Tum mere ho day bfore yest..n was like shit dude..this story is even more awesome! 😃

Gosh from the beginning di,the story was an audience captivator!I always was liek wat happens next?wat happens next? 😆 Not one boring scene eva!

The beginning only interested me sooo much!The college fun,the nok jhok btwn the frnz,the slowly budding romance 😳 the behind the bushes scene 😆 the car mein *ahem ahem* 😳

Seriously THE ROMANCE is one of the bestest things bout the story.Gosh i sooo loved it 😃

Seriously di,you are an absolute legend wen it comes to bold scenes!Evry bold scene was so well written!Damn!How awesome can you be?! 😳 Evry scene was sooo friggin hot! 😳

The characterisation,the plots,the twists n turns!My god di!Evrythin was soo gud!

I loved the college mein fun part 😳 boxer Prithvi n this innocent doll nandini 😆 so opposites do attract after all! 😃 gosh i soo love Prithvi 😆 how i wish i had Prithvi in my life 😳

I was really happy with the college mein jo chal raha tha,but then suddently wedding 😲 the fake father plot 😲 nandini missing 😲 shock after shock after shock 😲 I seriously cudnt bear nandini withstanding so much torture..abhishek made her life hell..the miscarriage..i mean if u see,nandini n prithvi bcame one for the first time n u know she was sooo happy..but then suddenly the very next day her whole life changes.She was the happiest person on earth that night n the very next day.. 😲..evrythin happened so fast! 😭

You are just tooo gud di! 👏 Wheneva i least expected somethin to go wrong,suddenly somethin goes BAM!nandini is in trouble 😲 Gosh the nandini ka death ka thing seriously made me go why her???!!!!?! 😭 Poor prithvi 😭 n im seriously not exagerrating,i literally was in tears when nandini came in frnt of him d day he was supposedly goin to marry esha!Khushi ke aansu ofcourse!I was sooo happy for Prithvi 🤗 but i knew since d time the nandini death thing was told..i was like no..she is alive somewer..n our Prithvi wil find her somehow.But turns out Richa bcame the hero wid dis one incident 😆

But i dinno this was a completed ff! 😲 it seriousy broke my heart when i came to the 76th part n read 'LAST PART'..i literally went like "nooo" 😭

Di i seriously want thsi story to continue..if at ol it is ever possible for u to re-open it n continue thsi story..i will be really very very glad! 😳

But neways,i love for you for writing such an amazing story.

Wheneva anybody used to ask me ki wich is fav ff?Though i adore many many ff writers,if was askd to choose,i used to always say ranju di's "Prithvi"..i love that ff..n dat was the first ff i had read n no oder ff captivated the way that story did.But now,i have found another story i love equally.if somebody asks me bout my fav's now,i will mention another one along wid ranju di's Prithvi...Dhanvi di's "tum mere ho". 😳 I am so glad i read this! 😳

I loved this story bigtime! SIMPLY EPIC. 👏 👏 👏