TUM MERE HO ~2 (RTMC FF) Last Part Pg 16 - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
thanks for update n pm
sorry for late comment
loved the update!!
so prithvi got sweetest thing for himself
loved romantic n hot scene of prini
wow nandu not nervous this time
and prithvi too understanding her responsibilities
and helping her with tht and making nandini smart like him
but anyhow nandu have to bear comments for taking long time to get ready (last time it was renuka aunty this time richa)
hope all goes well with our prini
coz if something will happen to richa
then also nandini will blaimed
which i din't want

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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
really an amazing one...👏
ud soon...luv u...😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
pls agla update de do di. hum wait kar rahe hain
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44

Part 72



Nandini "yes we have met before at Devika aunty's house..."

Gaurav "oh yes...so how are you and hows everybody else?"

Nandini "good...my friend Richa wants a check up..."

Gaurav looked at Richa "can you please lie on the bed..."

Richa walked towards another corner of the room...there was a huge bed...she lay on the bed for her check up...

Gaurav "Nandini could you please wait outside...until I finish my check up"

Nandini "oh sure..." she went outside...

Gaurav "right Richa...you have to breath slowly... I have to examine now..."

Richa "my doctor went out of town and Nandini suggested me to see you"

Gaurav "sure...how many months is it?"

Richa "three months now"

Gaurav "good...it seems everything is normal...but I have to examine internally"

Richa "internally??"

Gaurav "oh yes...it will take few seconds... you have to take off your clothes and wear this gown..."

Richa "alright"

-----*****

Nandini picked up her phone "yes mom...i am at the doctor with Richa...will come as soon as her check up is done"

Renuka "no problem...i have called you to tell you that I am going to Devika di's house...and will return at night...we have a small kitty party..."

Nandini "alright mom..."

Renuka "is Prithvi still sleeping??"

Nandini "i...i think so mom..."

Renuka "alright...call me if anything urgent"

-----*****

Gaurav came towards Richa...

Richa didn't looked at him... she was ready for her check up...

Gaurav did an internal check up...Richa wasn't happy but she realised something "doctor you aren't wearing gloves??"

Gaurav "yes because I wanted to examine properly and nicely"

he took few minutes...

Gaurav "everything is alright...you can get up now..."

Richa "thanks doctor"

after few minutes

Nandini saw Richa coming out "all good?"

Richa "yes..." she wasn't so happy...

Nandini "what happened?? you look so dull?"

Richa "nothing...i...i wasn't comfortable with this doctor"

Nandini "why?? didn't he do any check up??"

Richa "he did...he examined properly"

Nandini "then...whats the matter???"

Richa "nothing..just leave...lets go..."

Nandini wanted to ask Richa...but Richa didn't talk much...

soon they reached home...

Richa "i need rest...will catch you later..."

she went to her room making Nandini think over...

Nandini went to her room... she opened the door...Prithvi was in the shower...she sat on the bed thinking about Richa...

Prithvi saw her "you are back..." he was looking for his clothes... "can you help me find my clothes...this isn't a wardrobe, its a well...Nandini's well" he said angrily... "can't find a single thing"

Nandini wasn't listening to him, he again said angrily "i am standing in a towel Nandini...i am asking you something"

Nandini didn't reacted...

Prithvi came closer and kissed her lips... she looked at him "Prithvi"

Prithvi "what are you thinking...can't you see I am standing in a towel...can't find anything in that well..."

Nandini "oh sorry...i was...i will find your clothes..." she got up and looked in the wardrobe... "i will arrange it today...but again you will make a mess..."

Prithvi looked at her...he smiled and thought of something... he pulled the strings of her blouse making it loose... she immediately turned "what are you doing...??"

Prithvi "you are looking so sexy...what can I do??"

Nandini "now I have to tie them again..."

Prithvi "i like your blouse and this saree..."

Nandini angrily "now tie my blouse again..."

Prithvi came closer and hugged her tightly from behind... "i just can't do that..."

Nandini "why not? Is it so difficult??"

Prithvi "putting on clothes is not my job...my job is taking your clothes off..."

Nandini tried to turn around...but his grip was strong for her...

Prithvi "no use sweetheart...don't apply your strength...you can't escape unless I want"

Nandini "its hurting me..."

Prithvi "my grip is hurting you??"

Nandini "yes..."

Prithvi "fine..." he pulled away and turned his face other side...

Nandini "please don't be angry..." she said while tying the strings of her blouse...

Prithvi didn't say anything...

Nandini "alright, I am sorry...now please look at me."

Prithvi didn't turn...Nandini turned around and saw him smiling "so you were just pretending"

Prithvi hold her "of course sweetheart...you know I can't get angry with you"

Nandini "leave me..."

Prithvi "no..."

Nandini "what do you want??"

Prithvi "i don't have to tell you what I want..." he came closer and kissed her lips gently...then kept his one hand on her waist and other hand on her cheek and kissed her harshly on her lips... she didn't stop him instead her left hand squeezed his arm in pain... and right hand curled around his neck...

after sometime she pushed him...and ran towards the door... he quickly got hold of her saree... "please Prithvi don't"she said

Prithvi didn't listen to her and pulled her saree... it unwrapped as he pulled with force... she leaned against the wall...he came closer and was about to hold her when she escaped towards the other side of the room.

Prithvi smiled "where can you go Nandini?"

she laughed "fine...catch me if you can"

Prithvi walked towards her while she rushed towards the bathroom...he caught hold of her hand...she was about to run away when she slipped over and fell in the tub filled with soapy water with Prithvi on top, she looked at him and curled her arms around his neck and embraced him tightly... she was all wet now... he took off her slip and bra...and rested his face on her breast... she closed her eyes and rubbed her fingers in his hair... she kissed him on his forehead... he rubbed his hand on her smooth back and hips... he lifted up a little to kiss her red lips...It was not a gentle kiss...he kissed her passionately and fiercely... he sucked her tongue...she was all wet under him... he made love to her...

After few hours...

Richa was still thinking of what all happened with her... she thought it was not less then a sexual harassment...she was angry and pulled the sheet of the bed.

Nandini was brushing her hair when she again thought about Richa...she thought of telling Prithvi...but first she has to herself got to know what happened with Richa that made her so quiet...

_____*************



Edited by Freethinker - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
😆it was a ud that i enjoyed...😃...

the gynecologist-that idiot gaurav, making richa a fool...😡...
i mean even she being a 😡fool...
if that stupid n characterless man is not having gloves😡, than y d hell is she having the check up frm that chap...😡...
he is harassing her...😡...
this one she shudn't have hided frm nandini...😡...
i mean, this is not a matter to hide...😡...surely to slap him, even complain to restrict his licence...😡

prithvi is prithvi......neva gonna change...😳...
''this is not wardrobe, it well...nandini's well''.🤣...well this mess is urs prithvi🤔, then hw is this wardrobe nandini's well😆.

he even pretends, and nandini melts...☺️...awesome...so sweet.
their romance is always ''cho romanticcc...☺️..
love them...

punchline-😎
di r u amazing......
love u.🤗


ud soon.

Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
Nic ud di
w8ing for next
Edited by princesspriyart - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
i love u 4 this update
its a vry lovely and romantic update
i liked prini scenes
prithvi getting naughty day by day
but i hv a doubt on gaurav
feel bad 4 richa
hope everything will fine with her

update soon
thanx 4 pm
luv u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
nice ud dear...
i hate tat gaurav...
dhanvi... agle uds mein nandu aur richa ki naari shakti dikhana...
gaurav jaise logo ke saath bahaut bura hona chahiye...
aur prithvi...well wat can i say , he'll never change...
ud soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
Nice update
loved PRINI scenes, was so romantic😳

Feel very Bad for Richa 😭 😭

that doctor 😡 😡 😡
How he could abuse his profesion 🤢

Nandini is so tensed , hope so she can help Richa , 😊
update soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
😃😃lovely update dear...

i didn't like this fellow gaurav... first i thought that he is a nice person but ...

WAT TO SAY!!!!!!
😔
and i dnt understnd one thing...
WATEVER CHECKUP IT MAY BE... ESPECIALLY IF THE DOCK'S HANDS R COMING IN CONTACT WITH ORGANS OR BLOOD HE SHOULD WEAR GLOVES...
wat so ever may be d reason he shouldn't remove them...

now wen actually thinking about it richa shouldn't have allowed him to touch her on the first place...
and nandini instead of going to a male gynac she should hav gone to a female gynac...

well its not even nandini's fault
she didn't knew he would do this to her...


and talking about prithvi..
i don't want him to change ...

but i found him a little chauvinist ...
common har baat mai grumbel karna zarrori nahi...
this irritates me like hell

al i can say is ...nandini forgets al her tensions and worries wen she is with him ...
and i like that...😃



Edited by nitali - 13 years ago

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