TUM MERE HO ~2 (RTMC FF) Last Part Pg 16 - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
nice update di...😃
it's good that richa finally opened up...🤓
and nandu is standing for her...😃
brave girl nandu...
but that filthy doc is laying his dirty hands on her😡...
pick up the phone prithvi...she needs u...😕
plz update soon dear...u left it at such a high point...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
hey dear... finally u updated anywayss loved the part...but hope nothing happen with our dear nandiniii
humesha aisa uske saath hi kyun hotaaa hai????(why all the time this happens with her only huh??)
i mean i know she's the main character but still this is completely not fair 😔
hey u understand hindi rite?????????
if not i do wrote it in english too 😉😉
but on a serious not ur an amazing writer
do continueee sooonnn

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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
thanks for update n pm
sorry for late comment
liked richa told nandu everything
loved nandu getting strong
but now she need prithvi
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84



Part 74

Nandini was red with anger...she was about to leave when Gaurav smiled at her "i am sorry Nandini...i wasn't serious about whatever I said...and regarding the checkup...i was wearing the gloves when I was internally examining her...but I took them off later...and Richa misunderstood me..."


Nandini didn't believe him "i don't think Richa will lie over this and whatever you said didn't seem to be a joke..."


Gaurav "Nandini...you can punish me...but believe me I didn't mean anything...i know your husband is Sameer's good friend...why will I do anything like that..."


Nandini "that was what exactly I was thinking...why would you do that???"


Gaurav "i apologize if I hurt you...it won't happen again...i am terribly sorry about what I said..."


Nandini looked at him "fine...you have to apologize to Richa...let me call her in"


Gaurav "of course...but one more request...please don't tell anything to your husband"


Nandini thought something and nodded her head...


She called Richa in...who did not believe what Gaurav said... "no Nandini...he's lying...he's just trying to be smart..."


Nandini "i know Richa...but he has realized his mistake and apologizing me and you"


Richa "i don't even want to see his face...lets go"


Richa left and went out... while Nandini went towards Gaurav's room...


Nandini "Richa doesn't want to see your face...i am leaving now...next time don't do that with anyone...not everyone will spare you"


Gaurav "you have a good heart Nandini...i realize my mistake...please say to Richa that I am terribly sorry..."


Nandini didn't say anything and left...

-----*****


Richa was angry with Nandini …


Richa "how could you leave that bas***d???"


Nandini "Richa, listen to me...if someone is regretting his mistake...and apologizing then we must forgive him..."


Richa "you are too much Nandini...he doesn't deserve the kindness after what he did...he should be behind the bars..."


Nandini "don't be so aggressive...its not good for you...now forget it..."


Richa "Forget it!!!!!!...how could you say that Nandini...you are my friend...and you are taking his side...how could you???"


Nandini "i am not taking his side...i am just telling you..."


Richa "no don't convince me...please...i don't want to talk about anything..."


both were quiet...Nandini knew Richa was angry and she didn't wanted to say anything until she was calm...


-----*****

Late night...


Richa wasn't sleeping...she was still thinking about what all happened with her...


Nandini "can I come in"


Richa didn't say anything


Nandini "here...have your milk..."


Richa "i don't want anything...please leave..."


Nandini "are you still angry???"


Richa "Nandini if that would have happened with you...what would you have done???"


Nandini "please Richa...don't be angry...we won't go to his clinic again...he has a family and if we put him behind the bars, his whole career would come to stake...and now if he's realizing his mistake and is ready to apologize then please leave this matter..."


Richa "Nandini...you are far different then what I am...i can never forgive a person who has committed a crime...now please let me sleep..."


Nandini quietly went out of the room...she wasn't happy that Richa is angry at her...


she entered her room...Prithvi was as usual doing his work on the laptop...


he didn't look at her...she lay on the bed and slept silently...


Prithvi was little surprised by her behavior... "what happened...???"


Nandini didn't turn to look at him "nothing...i am sleepy"


Prithvi "are you alright???"


Nandini "yes...just tired..."


Prithvi closed his laptop and came near her... he climbed the bed and embraced her tightly in his arms...


Nandini hugged him back...


Prithvi "is everything alright???"


Nandini "why do you ask???"


Prithvi "you have never behaved like this before...it looks as if something is disturbing you"


Nandini smiled a little "no no...i am just tired..."


Prithvi "let me relax you"


Nandini looked confusedly at him as he came closer to her lips...


he kissed her lips gently... she closed her eyes, but she was still thinking about what all happened...


Prithvi slowly took off her night dress...while she wasn't feeling anything...in her mind she was still thinking about the issue she and Richa were facing...


he kissed her neck while his hands caressed her breasts...her eyes were wide open... it was difficult for her to forget about what all happened the whole day...


he slowly moved towards her waist...he sucked her naval while his hands rubbed her soft thighs... he felt no response from Nandini...he looked up...she was lying with her eyes wide open and deeply thinking something... with a frown on his forehead he moved next to her... "what's happening???" he questioned her...


she immediately realized what she was doing... she looked at him "no...nothing..." then hugged him tightly...


Prithvi pulled away "will you tell me Nandini??? you can't hide anything from me..."


Nandini "nothing much...Richa and I have a small issue..."


Prithvi "so you are thinking about your problems while I was making love to you???"


Nandini didn't wanted to hurt him "no Prithvi...i was totally aware of what you were doing...i love the way you make love" she kissed him...


Prithvi was angry at her "let me sleep" he turned towards the other side of the bed...


Nandini felt bad for hurting him...but she couldn't think of the solution...she cannot tell anything to Prithvi...if she did...then he would create a big scene...or he might kill Gaurav... she thought of talking to Richa in the morning...


_________************



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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
res,
will edit very soon
~~**Edited**~~

really a awaited ud,
but a twist jii!
master of twist, di u r!
but i m really not convinced the way nandu behaved, i literally can't stand for her this time!
sorry, !i noe even u won't!

that b@$t**D certainly needs to hell outta!.
prithvi shud really kick him outta country!
family n carrier, if he care, why he do all dis!

richa is angry with nandu!
sone per suhag!, or i shud say- gareebi main aata gheela!- prithvi is also angry!
ma poor anandu all alone!
bt anadu u really did a dumbo thng!
der shud not be ny kindness fr such molestation.

thnx di for d ud.
lov u.
ud soon!

di u r amazing!

Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
nandini the emotional fool,always create problem for herself
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
nice updates.
Argh! That cheap Gaurav! Nandini is a psycho or what? She should have d8isclosed the matter 2 Prithvi.
i just hope nothing more bad than this hapens.
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88

very nice update dear loved it

but im not happy with nandni's behaviour...
feel bad for richa...she's right...gaurav should pay for his crime😡

as a friend nandini ko richa ka saath dena chahiye tha he also misbehave with nandni...and she forgive him so easily😲how could she😕
but ur twists are minblowing really...😃

prithvi and nandni's scenes are superb as always😳

hope prithvi do something to solve her problem😕

update soon
thanks for pm
luv u😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
great part
don't like the way nandini is behaving
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
⭐️hiii Dhanvi ⭐️
How r u dear
sorry for not commenting from so many days bec. of EXAMS 😭
but now onwards u will get my regular comments😃
n thanx dear for pm
missed u n ur stories😛
now lts talk abt Update
Update was so nice as always 😛
ohh misunderstanding is made between Nandu n Richa 😭
plzz solve them as soon as possible
bec of that stress she didn't concetrate on Prithvi 🤢
n Prithvi also become angry 😕
oh no what happened with her
there Richa is upset n here Prithvi 😲
update soon
love u ⭐️

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