SHIKAR (A Dangerous Love Story) RTMC FF 39 on 148 - Page 15

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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update dear...😊
veer is in a full on mood to impress chandni😳...
and he can feel the new kind of longing in him😳 for her...
it was going to happen as she's not like the other girls to give someone her heart easily😳...
you need to change yourself which is not very easy...😆
at least he's drinking tea in stead of alcohol*sighs in relief*
and smiling after so many days😊...
i'm waiting for the next...
plz update soon dear...😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
SO SORRRY
For late commenting
but I couldn't coz my pc ''Bimaar'' tha 😭 😭
n use thik thik hote hote itna late ho gaya
u know i miss so much Veer chandani n ofcourse U
I read all updates whichever I missed
All updates are too good Dhanvi
U are Fabulous writter n ur story day by day aur bhi interasting hoti ja rahi hai
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Chandni n Veer
hmm 😳 first touch of veer on Chandni's cheek 😛
waiting for next
continue soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
Brilliantly written 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

it was really awesome ud di...


veer ki tho nikaal padi...
he is literally gawking at chandini...
he is in complete entrance of her...
i really liked.
my fav dialogue ws-''how much time will it take me to gat her!''

veer she is certainly not that easy trap,
u need to work hard to get her...

n dare u do smthing wrong to her...
chandini is really sweet.

the fact i like was, wid slightest sound she gets up...TOO GOOD.
A TOTAL COUNTERPART OF MINE .

once i was sleeping in ma house, there was a political party campaign going on just merely 30 feets frm ma house...
but me LOYAL TO SLEEP gal slept even in noise too, it ws almost equal to a bombblast, but i slept...

last scene ws too good
i like it...

the way he said-u bewitchered me...and then jus to scare u...

awesome, it ws mindblowing ud...
ud soon di,
love u di...

Thanks Sweetie...really you sleep a lot 🥱...good...i want to but can't...😊 anyhow thanks for your sweet comments baby...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: princesspriyart

Wao 1 more ff 😊
i'll read n tn cmnt

Thanks dear...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks dear...appreaciated...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tejjo

lovely update dear😛

hmm...veer attracted towards chand..lovely😛 carry on😉

wow chand is so beautiful...lovely description dear😊

loved it😃

plsss update soon😲

thanks for pm😃

luv u😳

thanks sweetie...i was trying to read your FF but i can't go to the link somehow...anyways thanks for your sweet comments...😊sure will update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aysha1989

Nice update...
Thanks for the pm 😊

Thanks Dear...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ridzzi

awesome update...👏

veer is not able to get her out from his mind...
but why he drank too much...
n now even chandani feels something strange...when he touched her...
but what to do with these feelings...veer had no good intentions towards her...

''...it seemed for the first time Chandni felt something strange...something that will burn her inside...something she couldn't relate to...something that might destroy her...''

well chandani u r right...it will destroy u...
be aware...from veer...
update soon...
luv u...😊

Hi Dear...i am waiting for a song sweetie...was thinking you will write a nice song on this sequence...😃...anyhow thanks for wonderful comments...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Shifat

lovely update dear😛

Thanks Dear...😊

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