We Are Destined *KriYaansh* ch5 last feb22 pg18 - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
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@shivani @neha THNK U SO MUCH! n ya will pm u..
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@sofiya @achu THNK U GUYZZ ...
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Originally posted by: maddieee

it's super emotional... i liked it a lot... poor rey... good work nams...👍🏼



THNKX DEAR..!
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the IF video said it all! NO MORE KRIYAANSH
itz hard fr me to watch im quiting D3!
and watevr im writting will nevr happen i gues
count dis as my satisfaction on d track on my way...

Chapter 2



I WISH I CUD STOP YOU FROM GOING..

He was completely into his thoughts! His cry his depression his anger! His sadness'

Swayam who was passing thru the atrium to go home saw rey..

He went near rey but stopped in d middle nd thout in d mind

Sw: no itz nt d ryt tim! Gosh rey kitna broken feel kar rha hai! I cant c him lik dis!!!! I told u kria I told u!!!!!

He jus runs out of d clg to his car nd bangs his hand on d car hardly! Nd soon moves into a flashback..

Outside d airport thr was a small garden wid a bench nd a small fountain in front (my imagination)

Kria stood few steps away frm swayam CRYING hard..

Swayam sitting in bench wid all his efforts of trying to make kria stay in mumbai went in vain.. he too was broken! He was LOOSING a GUD FRND frm his life! Or rather a person who made him wat he is now? Or a person coz of wich his dreams wer fulfilled? He had never thout he wud witness such a SITUATION in his life! He was confused wether he should console her or shud he still try to convince her to stay in Mumbai or had he to CRY out loud?

Swayam snapped out of his dilemma seeing his frnd was really broken he went upto her nd kept his hand on shoulders..

Sw: kria? plzz stop crying!

Kria: swayam IM SORRY IM SORRY swayam mei sab kuch aise hi chodke jaa rhi mei kuc nhi kr skti! Mei haar gayi swayam..

Sw: SHUT UP! Ur the WINNER!

Kria looked upto him

Sw: YES UR D WINNER OF LIFE! Aaj bale hi tum sab kuch chodke jaa rhi ho! But don't forgt aaj tak humne jo kuch b achive kia wo tumare wajah se! tumne humare dosti ko chuna! Apni dance ka sacrifise karke? Kria hum agar aaj FOOTLOOSE competition mei part le rhe hai toh wo sirf aur sirf tumari wajah se!! tum kabhi nhi haar skti!

Kria: swayam.. (nd hugs him)

Swayam was trying to consol her or rather consol himself!

Sw: waise tumne rey ko bataya hena?

Kria broke d hug nd looked surprisingly at swayam

Sw: kria? tumne rey ko bataya HENA?

Kria: rey? Rey wo..

Sw: kria don't temme ki wo kuch nhi jaanta! Tum ek baar b usse nhi mili!

Kria: nhi..

Sw: tum dono ek dossre se pyaar'.

He stopped in middle wen kria looked up to him

Sw: wo actually muje sab pata hai

Kria jus a surprise look nd thn a sigh

Kria: mom ne rey se milne se b mana kia hai! I hv promised her nd I cant break it!

Sw: NO KRIA DON'T DO DIS! Wo toot jayega! Plzz usse ek baar boldu!

Kria: nhi swayam! Na usse kuch kehne ki himmat hai mujme naa hi promise thodne ki takaat! Plz plz swayam muje ek promise karo ki TUM KISI SE B KUCH NHI KAHOGE!

Sw: wat? I cnt do tat!

Kria: tumei humari dosti , humari dance ki kasam! Tumei yeh promise karna hi hoga!

Sw: y kria? y r u doing dis! Khud nhi bataogi muje b nhi bolne dogi! Kria..

kria: promise karo!

Sw: FINE!

He promised her.. suddenly her mom came in search of her..

Sm: kria chalo flight ka time hogaya hai!

Kria leaves nd turns back

Kria: swayam plz mera DIL aur meri DOSTI ka kayal rakna (here DIL refers to REY as u all knw.. nd dosti refers to Weaklings)

Swayam had tears in his eyes.. nd he moved towards her nd gave one last hug nd whispered

Sw: agar tum rey se keh deti thn it wud b bttr!

Kria: plz swayam don't make it difficult fr me!

Sw: ok kria plzz HUMEI yaad mat KARNA! Coz tab wahan tumei sambalne ke liye naa mei rahoonga na REY aur naa hi tumare frnds!!

Kria looked at him wid moist eyes..

Swayam held her hand

Sw: will miss u! kria! I really wish ki tum na jau!

Kria: I wish too! Bye swayam WILL miss u all too!!!!

She turned away

Sw: (mind) I wish ki tum ek baar rey se baat karti..

Kria(min) I wish ki mei ek baar rey se baat karpaati!..

She vanished inside d airport!

Sw (mind): kria I don't knw tum DIL DOSTI DANCE ke bina kaise ji paogi!?

That's the end of second chapter! I will post next chapter asap! I knw many of u cried wid prev chapter! But I will PROMISE to bring a SMILE on ur face in upcoming chapters! It may b filmy it may b weird or it may b anythn il PUT my BEST to bring out passion intensity deep n pur love of KRIYAANSH into a beautiful story!

And I knw I showed really deep bond bw swayam n kria! the reason is.. Firstly swayam knws her bttr! Nd den kria had choosed DOSTI (her mom's condition) so swayam se accha dosti aur koun ho skta jo kria ka baat samaj skta hai?

Im sorry if u felt annoyed abt KriYam!

No precaps! Sorry! Evry chapter has itz own story..

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pm notification fr dis chapter will b sent 2mrw (16th feb)


Edited by nams_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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really heart breaking...am sure this gonna happen in rey's life...but cant c him like that...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😭 rly heart breaking...i didn't saw da video bt ur first line broke me...dat NO KRIYAANSH😭...ohh!!! god hw cn i watch d3 widout kriyaansh n den ur ff...nams...i crying litrly...god!!!!!!!! n den da line frm ff dat MERE DIL N DOSTI KA KHYAL RKHNA 😭...DIL...REY...nooo 😭

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Posted: 13 years ago
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😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 this is what i feel right now i can feel the pain, the sadness of this story feel soo bad that kriyansh is over
awesome part nams and you have written so well that i had tears in my eyes😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was amazing friendhship and thanks a lot for this ff and add me to the pm list although i think that i have already asked
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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautiful piece of writing. really brought out the kriyam bond beautifully.

this post reduced me to tears(last wale ne nhi kiya as was expecting sumthing like this in reel so u portrayed so ws mentally prepared 4 smthing like this)
waiting for the next post. pata nhi kitne dinon se hv been expecting ki smhow kriya stops. pata nhi kitne filmy circumstances soch daalein but to no avail. ur ff will at least keep the hope alive or create an illusion ki evrything's gonna be fine.
just hoping ki cvs give a logical or a suitable conclusion to kriyansh.(happy end ki toh expectations hv completely washed out).

but all in all thnk u for such a wonderful post
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lvd d update nams...its awesm..lvd d kriyam sequence 2 so heart touchng waitng 4 next update

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