We Are Destined *KriYaansh* ch5 last feb22 pg18 - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome part...luv kriyam frndship...it ws jst awesome...waitng fr nxt part...update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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really sad update but it was good please pm me when you next update :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nams that was too good yaar loved how you described the sadness and everything! wonder how this'll come out...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
aww dearr!!!
it's sooo sad yaar!!:(:(
but i still luv it!!
beautifully writen!!:)
update soon!!
sorry for late comment and thanxx for PM!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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CHAPTER 3

being rude to u is d only way to depart from u..

Next day in clg..

All r practicing in rehersal hall. Rey hasn't shown up yet.. swayam n Sharon wer having sum glances at each othr blushing a little while neha n vishaka wer indulged in learning sum step from nil n vicky.. simmi rinni n Sharon wer doing sum new steps while swayam was teaching his move fr d rest.. every thn was gone back to normal the college clases rehersals competition.. but was it really gone back to normal?

Vishaka wasn't able to catch d step..

Neha: Neha not understanding! Argh agar kria hoti toh..

Vishaka went froze at kria's name.. vicky n nil looked down..

Nil: array guyzz tum dono iss gadhe se kya seek rhe ho mujse seekona I I teach bttr dan him!!

Neha: u telling vicky gadha? UR gadha HUH!

Vishaka giggled while vicky n neha went to deir dreamland! Once again nil tried his best to take deir attention frm Kria!

Swayam hey guyzz listen I hv got a new move (he seemed to b excited)

Bharat: haan toh bolna..

Swayam: array mei pehle Kria ko…

Bharat amar frowned wen swayam regreted fr wat he said..

Sharon overheard him

sh: Kria in sab ke liye kitna Importanat hai!! Damn!!!!! 6months! 6months mei koi usse nhi bol paya!! Kya sab back to normal nhi ho skta?????

Simmi : I soo wish ki sab kuch teek hojaye! But she shud not hv betrayed us!

Both look at her

Simmi: Ok if not us atleast uski team ko? Look at dem man!! Uski team usse kitna miss kar rhe hai!!!!

Sh: SIMMI wats dat USKI TEAM? Hum sab EK TEAM hai OK? Don u dare call dem like tat again!!!

Simmi: oh soo soory sharan dimaag se nikal gaya!!

Sharon gets up

Sh: Guyz werz REY?????

Everyone look around

Swayam: Sharon wo abi tak nhi aya hai

Sh: but swayam usne kaha tha ki wo subah jaldi ayega?!

Sw: lagta ho bul gaya relax..

Swayam in his mind : rey ko aisa kya zaroori kaam agaya? Kaha gaya hoga?

He calls up..

Rey's fone rings in his car.. but rey is nowhere.. car was parked infront of a house..

(any guesses whoz house?????? Itz Kria's house, wer she used stay!)

Rey stood infront of d locked door!

Rey had been visiting dat house atleas twice a day in dese 6months! He soo wanted to go to kria's room! But wenevr he gathered courage to go d house he failed all time!

But today was different! It was a day wen he had no hope no Ray of light left on Kria's return! He had contacted Smriti's bank workers.. who finally concluded saying Smriti had left d job! He dint hav any way left to find her!! No way left! But if UNIVERSE ji wishes???????

Rey turned to go back to his car but he stopped his back facing her room..

He nevr had courage to evn glance at her window!

He made himself soo strong n turned!

The curtains wernt flying.. the window doors wer closed.. room looked dark from out..

Rey remembered d days wen he use to climb thru pipe to her window..

He thn again turned and at once broke d lock hardly and entered d house!

He wanted to cry hard! He wanted to TRY to forget her! He wanted to d end his LOVE but will he?

He glanced every place of her wich had a cute memories hidden in it of KriYaansh.. he remembered all dose hide nd seeks .. all dose love.. all dose sweet cute momnts..

He took d hard steps nd went to her room.. the house was dusty but still it had d same air wich was present few months back.. ya few months back *sigh..

6months had rolled down but it seems yesterday wen she disappeared frm his eyesight.. very badly she had broken his heart nd itz hard fr him to forgive her on dat part.. he was still unaware of d bitter yet a silly truth behind her exit..

He tried opening d room.. but door lock was jammed.. he gave a hard try once n broke d door..

He went in .. all he cud c was a beautiful angelic room wich was now covered wid dust nd blankets on furnitures..

He opened d window.. again a flashback left itz tail on his mind n heart.. it was d same window wer he use to climb up to meet his LOVE..

Aftr a long tym.. he was sitting down on d floor leaning to d bed catching her broken foto frame wich he found in her room..

Tears rolled down his cheeks…

Rey: kyun chali baatcutter? Koun kaatega meri baat ab? I JUS HATE U FOR WAT U HAV DONE!!!!! Yahi isi kamre mei tumne mera DIL thodi tha!!! ISI kamre mei! KYUN????? Kyun??? Kria kyun?

Flashback:

(I don't knw wats der in NEW promo but here is my imagination of deir last meeting.. nd P.S itz not VDAY in dis story as in d promo/d3)

Rey wid a great difficulty climbed d pipe nd hoped into her room.. he wanted ANSWERS! He wanted answer as to y she was avoiding him since d elims.. he wanted answer y she ignored him.. y she looked upset.. wats d reason..

He came up to her room nd all he cud c was kria's back facing to him .. she was sitting on d floor near d couch keeping her head down upon her knees nd her hands covering around..

She seemed crying hard he cud feel it..

He cud all utter was BAATCUTTER???

She suddenly got up n was REALLLY HAPPIE TO C HIM..

But she cant express it.. she jus wanted 2 run into his arms n dump all her sorrows in it but she cud not do it.. evrytym she thout abt him d PROMISE wich she made came before her eyes..

BOTH kept looking at each othr.. as if checking wethr both r ALRYT ? as if seeing by looking at each othr they cud find answers to deir Question to their CONFUSION!

Rey came upto her held her on her shoulders

Rey: KRIA? kya hua tu tum ro kyun rhi ho? Yeh sab kya hai baatcutter??

Kria: KUCH NHI! AAP yahan KYA kar rhe hai? PLZ JAYIYE YAHAN SE!!!

Rey: Kria ok mei jaonga but pehle tumei mujse yeh batana hoga ki tum ro kyun rhi thi aur muje AVOID kyun kr rhi ho?

Kria: Mei rou ya maru MERI MARZI aapse matlab? (wid strong heart n bitting her lips n regereting each word she said it .. she had to b as rude as possible if he has to stay away frm her)

Rey: MARU??? KRIA R U OUT OF UR MIND? Agli baa raise words USE kia tho bahut bura hoga!! TUM AISE KYUN BEHAVE KR RHI HO? WATS WRONG ? Mujse koi galti hui hai kya? Did I hurt u by any way?

Kria was melting wid each n evry word of him but she had to remain strong!

Rey came closer nd tried hold her face in his hands.. he had gone moist eyes at her words..

Kria showed him to stop at his feet nd not to move further close to her (may b she wud nt able to control herself if he had made his way close 2 her)

Kria: REY AAP JAO YAHAN SE MUJE AAPSE KOI BAAT NHI KARNI JUST LEAVE!!!

Rey: KRIA BAS BAHUT HOGAYA!!

Kria: EXACTLY BAHUT HOGAYA HAI REY! Ab mujse aur nhi hota!! Aap aap MUJSE KABHI BAAT MAT KARNA JUS LEAVE ME ALONE!!!!

Rey: WAT????????????? kabhi baat mat karna..? kri..

Kria: KAHA NA MEINE!! MUJE AAPSE KOI BAAT NHI KRNI!

Rey: KYUN kria tum Mazak kr rhi ho ryt? Kria yeh sab..

Kria: BAS!!! EK AUR WORD NHI!!! Kya aapko samaj nhi aati? MEINE KAHA NA JAAO YAHAN SE!!!! aur aaj ke baad MUJSE BAAT KRNE KI KOSHISH B MAT KARNA coz I I H HA HATE U!

She said n turned around.. tears wich she had controlled till thn jus made d way down her cheeks..!

It was MORE hurting to her THAN him!

His world at once was shaken.. he was in anger! She dint give him any reason.. infact he was waiting fr her to utter 3 magical words to him but wat she said? 3 WORST WORDS! "I HATE U" really?

Now he was sure SOMETHING is WRONG..

Before he cud further enquire her mom was back home.. she rang d door bell

Kria: REY MOM AGAYI PLZZZ LEAVE!!! JUS GO REY!!!!

Rey's world was jus scattered.. he headed off to his car…

He cud still not belive wat she said nd y?

Aftr a long fite bw mind n heart he decided to find out wen she comes 2 d clg nxt mrng.. he consoled himself saying may b kria's tensed may b thr is sum prob wid her mom.. but still he was CONFUSED..

Well evn he dint knw tat it was deir LAST meeting.. last meeting REALLY? Soo wer is destiny gone now? Will it try to make a change?

Flashback ends..

end of chapter 3...

P.s im giving an END to KRIYAANSH TRACK THRU THIS !! wid few parts dis will end wid a beautiful ending to KR track may b at few places it will b dramatic but dis will atleast gimme a satisfaction for KR track..

Next chapter either today or 2mrw coz I hv finshed writing it.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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nd also IM SORRY i cant reply to all posts as im a lil busy..
THANK U ALL WHOHAV TAKEN TYM TO READ ND COMNT ... THNKU SOO MUCH LUV U ALL
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsome love it..
Next part jaldi update karna
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for the pm and awesome update👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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you made me cry yaar kria saying i hate you to rey that was brutal yaar i hate seeing rey like this 😔 i hope atleast u will bring them together
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nyc update...luvd it...cant see rey in so mch pain...its awful...

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