We Are Destined *KriYaansh* ch5 last feb22 pg18

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WE ARE DESTINED


destiny brought us near

destiny made us fall in love

we wer destined..

but now ur gone, ur gone..

r u gone forever??

wer is d destiny now??

can v still say WE ARE DESTINED?


i dont knw wethr to call it as OS or SS or FF

im jus writting dis story on KR tats it!

i dont knw how many chapters will take!

this story is d result of my HEART BREAK!


Chapter 1


U BROKE MY HEART, U BROKE ME, U BROKE OUR LOVE

He sat down on d steps of atrium still try to figure out is any way left to FIND HER???

He was broken.. 6months had passed by like 6 ages! Still he was determined to find her nd tell her tat HOW MUCH HE LOVES HER! HOW MUCH SHE MATTERS TO HIM! Wat is she to him!! He wanted her to knw all this! But she was nt there to hear him cry! Hear him screem her name loudly! Hear his heart wich beats only for her! But now? He was FED UP! He was TIRED of searching her LIKE A MANIAC! He was tired of making himself to be strong'. Wat she left to him was MEMORIES! Those memories wich rather KILL him day by day.. hours by hours.. min by min.. seconds by seconds.. he had given up his dancing JUST FOR HER?? Yes for her! For the LOVE OF HIS LIFE!! Inspite of all dis truth the bitter truth was now HE HATES HER! Hates her? Really?

He is angry! She left him without letting him knw d truth! She left him without seeing his eyes wich showed soo much of affection.. she left him ALL ALONE! She had gone forver! His hopes on her return wer DEAD !! he had no idea how will he live without his HEART? Wich she had taken away or rather broken into pieces!!

(do I need to tel who is it? its REY)

Rey slowly bent down nd made himself in perfect sitting posture by keeping on of his hand on knees nd the othr rested beside him in stairs..

Rey in mind: kria tumei aisa nhi krna chahiyetha! Wats my MISTAKE? Wt hv I done? TUM GYI? I still cant belive! I still cant belive tat U LEFT ME?!!! Kyun KYUN? Mei tumare liye kuch nahi lagtha??? Y did u do this! Now I HATE U KRIA FOR WAT U HAV DONE! I just HATE u!!!!!! ab tak tumei doondne ki puri koshsish ki! I searched u everywer in DEHRADUN! I searched u everywer in MUMBAI! But mei yeh bul gaya TAT U GONE! U hav gone too FAR AWAY FROM! To far to reach u!

His anger slows down into a depression on the trail of flashback..

Rey: kria kaha ho tum? Kyun chali gayi? Kaha ho kria!!! I WISH I CUD GET U BACK!!!!!!!

Tears rolled down his cheeks! He was confused! Should he be angry on her for d fact dat SHE LEFT HIM? Or should he cry for d fact tat SHE LEFT HIM?

He got up nd hit his legs into d floor on d beats of an emotional song!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G__8h_TvIDc

(song is DIL MERA CHURAYA KYUN, JAB YEH DIL THOD NA HI THA for the movie MANN)

The words SAID his each nd every emotion! How he felt!

The heart breaking dance dance strtd or can I say BROKEN HEART dance?

here r words (lyrics)

Why did you break my heart?
Why did we fall in love?
Why did you go away, away, away, away?
(Dil mera churaaya kyoon
Jab yeh dil todna hi tha
Humse dil lagaaya kyoon
Humse munh modna hi tha) - 2
Why did you break my heart?
Why did we fall in love?
Why did you go away, away, away, away?

Ho, dil ko dhadakna tune sikhaaya
Dil ko tadapna tune sikhaaya
Aankhon mein aansu chhupe the kahin
Inko chhalakna tune sikhaaya
Seene mein basaaya kyoon
Dil se jab khelna hi tha
Humse dil lagaaya kyoon
Humse munh modna hi tha
Dil mera churaaya kyoon
Why did you break my heart?
Why did we fall in love?
Why did you go away, away, away, away?

Ho, milti thi nazrein jab bhi nazar se
Uthte the shole jaise jigar se
Saanson se nikla jaise dhuaan sa
Banta tha mujhse jeete na marte
Aag kyoon lagaayi jab
Bujhaaye dil chhodna hi tha
Humse dil lagaaya kyoon
Humse munh modna hi tha
Dil mera churaaya kyoon
Jab yeh dil todna hi tha
Humse dil lagaaya kyoon
Humse munh modna hi tha
Why did you break my heart?
Why did we fall in love?
Why did you go away, away, away, away?

The sparks of anger flew away from his eyes like fire flakes..

the tiny tiny drops of tears rolled down his cheeks! He was still in a DILEMMA! Trying to understand!

Is he angry or is he sad! Does any othr way is left out to find her?


keep reading dis to knw wat happen next!

i knw dis is small but plzz adjust on d epi length...

this all as of now! il bring 2nd chapter ASAP.. hope u like dis..


INDEX

chapter 2 : page 8

chapter 3 : page 11

chapter 4: page 15

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsum...namy..luv u for this...
damn he is gonna be so hurt...cant see him cry like this...
:(:(:(
Edited by Kriyansh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kriyansh

awsum...namy..luv u for this...

damn he is gonna be so hurt...cant see him cry like this...
:(:(:(



i knw!!! wen he learns SHE IS GONE? DAMN ITZ SOOO DAMN HEART BREAKING!!!!! 😭😭😭😭
thnkxx dear... :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nams u made me cry again
reading was damn painful rey is borken for ever .. but why?wid no fault of his ?
nams hugs yaar for dis continue yaar .
pm me nxt update
"HEART BOR💔KEN FAN NO I GUESS WE HEART BORKEN FANS
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome nami but was too painful toread :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sujucoolstar

nams u made me cry again
reading was damn painful rey is borken for ever .. but why?wid no fault of his ?
nams hugs yaar for dis continue yaar .
pm me nxt update
"HEART BOR💔KEN FAN NO I GUESS WE HEART BORKEN FANS



sure il pm u dear nd will updt soon may b today only or may b 2mrw... thnkx...
yes me too cring..😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: dazzlerfan

awesome nami but was too painful toread :(



it was indeed painfull to write..😭😭😭😭😭
thnk u for ur comnts..!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It ws so nyc...while reading dis i felt so heartbreaking...dis part cud xactly potray wat rey wud feel...cant see him lyk dis:(...hope some majic occurs n kriya cums bak...mtlb...shakti cums bak aftr training...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: PD_puja

It ws so nyc...while reading dis i felt so heartbreaking...dis part cud xactly potray wat rey wud feel...cant see him lyk dis:(...hope some majic occurs n kriya cums bak...mtlb...shakti cums bak aftr training...



i dont think shakti can evr cum back coz she dint say BYE to d3 she said GUD BYE d3!! nd she cumin back dosnt make any sense aftr such havoc!

and thnkxx fr d comnts..!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nammy jaan tumne toh d3 aur rey ka future dikha dia.. Yahi hone wala hai.. Love ur ff. 😭

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