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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome n beautiful update
i truly loved it...
i loved geet's concept...boy +frnd=bf...aur jo bet ussne rakhkha...pata nehi kya hoga...lets wait n watch kya hota hai ball mein...its amazing...
thank u sooo much fr d lovely update
waiting eagerly fr d nxt one
continue soon plz
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: love2_soma

awesome n beautiful update
i truly loved it...
i loved geet's concept...boy +frnd=bf...aur jo bet ussne rakhkha...pata nehi kya hoga...lets wait n watch kya hota hai ball mein...its amazing...
thank u sooo much fr d lovely update
waiting eagerly fr d nxt one
continue soon plz



thank u so much dear...
hahaha let's wait n watch...i mean read...😉

muah...
😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: neha5058



dont cry baby...
u will know the reason soon...but 1 thing maan ka koi fault nahi hai...
ok now be happy...



maan ka koi fault nahi hain.. 😕
did jai won the bet... 😆
i am like this 😕😕😕😕😕😕😕
soch rahi hu par dimag kaam hi nahi kar rahi hain... 😡 (gussa mujhpe dont worry)...
maine kaha na i will see ur thread daily.. 😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: jyothikrish



maan ka koi fault nahi hain.. 😕
did jai won the bet... 😆
i am like this 😕
soch rahi hu par dimag kaam hi nahi kar rahi hain... 😡 (gussa mujhpe dont worry)...
maine kaha na i will see ur thread daily.. 😆😆



hahaha jyothi...sochti raho...kiska fault hai...
tum par gussa nahi to...
haha dekh lena daily thread..i won't mind...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
superb loved it👏 sorry yaar my like tab is not working
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: preetymaaneet

superb loved it👏 sorry yaar my like tab is not working



thanks dear...
it's okkay...i can understand..sometime my like dint work...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part-33


.maan rested his head on wall….murmured kya karu mai iss pagli ka….. geet replied kuch nahi…jaldi se ready ho jao.we are getting late….maan smiled and wiped himself from the towel….she said outside the washroom….mai aapka nichey wait kar rahi hu..jaldi se aayo….



She went down and chit-chat with dadi….after some time she went back in his room for finding that why he is taking so much time in getting ready? She slowly -2 taking her steps towards his room….her heart beat raising after seeing him in washroom without vest..his bare upper body..she felt something unknown feeling….a some kind of verge in her mind…some kind of curiosity in her seeing him again without vest…oh god geet has gone totally….

she murmured geet jayada mat soch...she take a deep breath and straightly barged in to his room..holding the knob of the door and opened it without knocking the door like this room is hers...enters in his rooma nd said kitni der lagate ho...maan heard her voice turned at-once...het eyes opened & her mouth fell open in a big O shape like she has seen something unexpected...actually maan was wearing his jeans & shirt without vest and shirt was not buttoning up...he was setting his hairs with gel with his fingers...maan smirked at her condition and again turned to mirror...she composed herself and took steps towards him & start buttoning his shirt..maan was amazed and dumb-stuck...he didn't mind..actually he is loving it...like he is dreaming in day that geet is buttoning his shirt...geet starts with her non-stop complaints and maan stood there like a statue not realizing what is happening with him?

kitna time lagate ho ready hone me...god..girls se bhi jayada time lete ho aap...hum dance ball me ja rahe hai kisi fashion show me nahi...samjhe aap...maan was looking at her face when she was talking to herself with her complaints not sure what to do or what not? but he felt nice when she was standing so close to him and helping him in buttoning the shirt...she murmured shirt ho gaya....where is the waist coat? maan pointed at the bed..she grabbed the coat and stood behind him & waiting for him to when he lift his arms...pata hai mai bhi 20 mins me ready ho gayi thi ek aap ho uff...dekho ab mujhe hi help karani pad rahi hai.....maan lift his arms little & geet made him wear the waist coat…then stood in-front of him very close and buttoned it….then caress his shoulder with her palms for final touch up then give him his watch, his violet & asked for the hanky..he said in cup-board…she took the hanky and gave to him..searching the best perfume in the shelf , checked all & finally got the best perfume for him….spray on him….maan thought today is the best day….geet made him ready according to her taste..he never mind…he wants it daily but that's not possible….she checked him top to bottom and maan checked himself in mirror and said..i am looking handsome in your choice….she blushed



geet replied and I am looking gorgeous in your choice



….both laughed on their compliments for theirselves….she asked challein? Maan nodded ..both moved then geet said your room is very beautiful…

maan=thank you…then geet got a call form jai…

maan=you attend this call….mai car nikalta hu…geet nodded and attend his call….

Geet-haan jai bol

Jai-geet yaar where are you?

Geet-yeah , I am coming

Jai-no geet, we are going somewhere else

Geet-what? Where? And we?

Jai-me, meera & dev ,nt are going

Geet-but where?

Jai-actually na hum log dance ball me nahi ja rahe hai..

Geet-fir kaha?

Jai-yaar kabhi-2 to night me time milta hai hum logo ko ek sath…isliye hum date par ja rahe hai…tu enjoy kar apne boss ke sath….i mean….

Geet-shut up…don't think like that….and tum log mere sath aisa nhi kar sakte.. she almost shout on him..

Jai-geet,,why are you shouting on me?

Geet-mujhe nahi karni tere se baat..nt ko phone de..

Jai-pls gussa mat kar na..

Geet-I don't want to talk to you…nt ko phone de..

Jai-wait deta hu…jai passes the phone to nt..

Nt-kya hua?

Geet-where are you going?

Nt-me & dev are going to rohini…waha ek bahut achha hotel khula hai..and jai & meera are going some where else..i don't know…

Geet-how can you do this to me?

Nt-geet, geet calm down..listen yaar first time hum logo ko sath me night me ek sath time spend karne ka mauka mila hai..aur dance ball me rakha kya hai….mai dev ko mana nahi kar paayi….pls try to understand na.. geet made faces and said..

Geet-I'll never talk to you…

Nt-I know..you enjoy with your partner…geet cut the call and went outside…she became very sad & angry on them…nt knew that she can't be angry from her...maan looked at her sad face got worried and asked..

Maan-geet,what happened? You was very happy little while ago and abhi kya hua?

Geet-wo mere friends dance ball me nahi ja rahe hai

Maan-why?

Geet-they are going on date with their partners….how can they do this to me?

Maan-it's ok geet…chalo hum chalte hai..

Geet-mujhe kahi nahi jana…I'll never talk with them..

Maan-geet calm down..itna gussa nai karte….try to understand them..wo log sath me time spend karna chahte honge..bas isliye…

Geet-but unhe pehle batana chahiye tha na…

Maan-it's ok geet..chalo hum kahi aur chalte hai…

Geet-mujhe kahi nahi jana…

Maan-geet, if you trust me then sit in the car..geet looked at him and silently sat in the car…maan removed his cell and made few calls…geet didn't listen anything because the car is sound proof….maan also sat in the car…drive the car without telling her anything and geet also didn't ask him anything..silently she rested her head on the glass of the window,,,,was very sad…maan is feeling very bad for her..she was very happy for the dance ball from yesterady and now her whole excitement has been gone….they reached their destination and he take her in PVR in a mall…geet looked at him puzzled not understanding what he was upto? She looked at him questioningly …maan assured her from his eyes & took her inside the hall…waiter serves then pop-corn , cold-drinks and some chocolates…

Geet-maan no one is here , we are alone

Maan-I like this way…she sat on a seat in a middle row & maan sat beside her…



.and the movie starts..she thrilled with the movie TWILLIGHT ….this is her fav movie….she looked at him smilingly..maan also smiled at her back…she became happy so maan also become happy…he wants only this smile of hers..nothing much more….she took some op-corns and asked him to open your mouth….maan opened his mouth for pop-corns but geet ate them showing him her thumb…maan became angry & faced other side..geet made a cute puppy face & cupped his face & made him eat the pop-corns…she lost in the movie…and maan lost in her...watching her lovingly..but geet didn't realize it...her eyes become wider when the hero bite a person on his neck….maan never saw these kind of movies..actually he didn't saw any ways..he as not much time for all this…he was busy all the while first in his studies then in his business…..not much time for himself….maan looked at her & a mischief came in his mind…he leaned closer to her neck..geet didn't realize that as she was engrossed in her movie….maan opened his mouth, bend little, round his neck in a angel of 30 & touched her skin of her neck with his teeths….she jumped back & became terrified .& shout…maan laughed…..the drink was in her hand spilled on his coat….geet made a face….she immediately took her dupatta & starts cleaning his coat with the corner of her dupatta...maan gazing her without blink..she looked at his face for assuring herself that is he angry on me or not but lost in his eyes which was staring at her….her hand reached at his face while cleaning his coat & start wiping his face..oops his lips….the movie was going on & they are in different world lost in each other….wiping his lips with her dupatta….actress's loud scream helped them to come out from their own world…she looked at his face who was still gazing her with so much love….the she looked at his coat & then looked at her hand realizing that she was wiping hs face beside of his coat…she let her hand down & looked down mumbled sorry…maan straighten himself and said it's ok….lets go..she silently followed him without questioning anything..they sat in the car..maan removed his waist coat as it was in a mess….maan start the car…

Geet-where are we going?

This time also maan didn't tell her anything…she became very curious & asking him again and again but maan didn't replied her…they reached at their destination again..it is 11pm now….she became surprised and asked surprisingly...

Geet-yaha….


Precap

Where they went? And new entry



Sorry for not giving new entry in this update…as you all know I was held up in prep of my exams so couldn't get much time to write more….


sorry frnds for not giving dance ball..
i have done some changes in this track...
tell me hows this??
waiting for ur comments.and
hugs to all of your for ur lovely comments...thanks a lot..

neha



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Posted: 13 years ago
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zoha
maine tumhari pukaar kitni jaldi sunli..
tumne kaha aur maine update kar diya...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow love u neha for listening me yaar
hugs and kisses
Edited by zohafarheen - 13 years ago

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