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Posted: 13 years ago
I had one worry, what if khushi was pregnant (since she kept going to the bathroom & her stomach ) BUT finally u cleared that up when khushi said only on the lips. So am just happy right now that she is NOT pregnant with udays child...

Btw am a new reader, read all parts just now & am really liking this dark yet intense ff.. Could u add me to ur pm list?
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pc17


Hey thanks for your comment. 😊 I just want to clear something up. Obviously I don't want to give too much away but I guess I can lead you down the right path. The crux of this story is really about being unsatisfied with what you have in life and only really realising its importance after you lose it-hence the name "retribution". That is why their relationship is SO complicated because both characters are so flawed.

Arnav never hated Khushi-actually it was kind of the contrary, he began loving her. But of course being the kind of self-sufficient, headstrong character he is he is in denial and does everything in his power to try and run away from that. Much like we see in the show. Here comes in the angle of not appreciating what you have. It's not that he out-rightly was a monster-he never beat her or anything- but the way he acts makes Khushi miserable. You have to imagine Khushi as a young aspiring girl with dreams of her Prince Charming, only to end up in a loveless marriage, where she feels tied down and her wings are clipped. The cage and the monster are all metaphorical for the way she feels.

Khushi never did anything so much to make him hate her. But she is middle-class, he doesn't believe in love and marriage, he is stubborn, her personality, him trying to control his life...piece it all together and what do you get? I hope you get it 😉

Khushi on the other hand has everything a girl could ask for except one thing-her husband's love and devotion. She sees glimpses of it though but that leaves her all the more confused. That's why she jumps on the Uday bandwagon. Tis' life my friend-I'm afraid people just don't think. Ask any regretful cheater why they cheat and they will most likely say I did it in a moment of stupidity. This is a young impressionable bitter girl.

Yes Arnav is possessive and no the outburst wasn't random. Hopefully you'll see a new dynamic to their relationship in the next update.

Yes I love shrouding everything in mystery. 😆

Fragmented hints but you seem smart and inquisitive so I'm sure you'll begin to fit things together 😉



Ahhh!! I see what you mean now! Thanks for clearing stuff up a bit ;)

And, yes, now that you mentioned it; she was so young, and at that age, most girls dream of the "happily ever after" and that "prince charming", and she didn't see that in Arnav. Albeit, he was showing it to her (or trying to show it to her) in his own way, but he was much older, and not the lovey dovey kind! And, like you said, she saw glimpses of the "prince charming" in Uday, and jumped right at it. In the first chapter she said "because I love him" (in regards to Uday), but I am doubting that more than anything else right now. She definitely did not love Uday; but I agree that she was under the delusion that she was in love with him because she saw in him what she wanted to see in Arnav (I'm guessing there really was some sort of a relationship between Uday and Khushi)

Anyways, thanks for clearing stuff up, and raising more questions in my head!! ;) Can't wait for you to update!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh man arnav is soo mean...wats da misunderstanding bitwin them...continue soon pliiiz n thnx 4da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: princessnida



Ahhh!! I see what you mean now! Thanks for clearing stuff up a bit ;)

And, yes, now that you mentioned it; she was so young, and at that age, most girls dream of the "happily ever after" and that "prince charming", and she didn't see that in Arnav. Albeit, he was showing it to her (or trying to show it to her) in his own way, but he was much older, and not the lovey dovey kind! And, like you said, she saw glimpses of the "prince charming" in Uday, and jumped right at it. In the first chapter she said "because I love him" (in regards to Uday), but I am doubting that more than anything else right now. She definitely did not love Uday; but I agree that she was under the delusion that she was in love with him because she saw in him what she wanted to see in Arnav (I'm guessing there really was some sort of a relationship between Uday and Khushi)

Anyways, thanks for clearing stuff up, and raising more questions in my head!! ;) Can't wait for you to update!!!!


Yes yes yes (I like the way you think!) apart from one thing! Arnav hadn't realised he was in love with Khushi, rather he is in denial. If I say anymore I don't think it will be fun for you to read anymore so my lips are sealed from this point on 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Aahanaxx11

The end was pretty painful. Poor Khushi :(

So they got married like this and i'm guessing perhaps eventually Arnav fell in love with her but never expressed it or maybe never realized it and it made Khushi feel he hates her? So she got involved into Uday and when Arnav got to know about them he was angry since he had started loving her? :O
OMG! This is amazing. Arnav needs to do something regarding his anger.


lol! You are so nearly there it hurts! Do you want to write the ff for me? 😉

Yep anger management I'd say.
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Posted: 13 years ago
great update felt really sorry for khushi cant wait for the next update
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very well written update!! I LOVED IT!! Thank you so much for the pm!!
Please continue soon!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
WOW that was sum update.
finally you put an end to our misery by revealing the past but u wer correct in saying that more Qs have been raised.
absolutely luv whr ur takin this and i really liked the situation u put arnav and khushi in meaning the reason they both agreed to marry. pretty realistic.
hopefully that frown of urs will turn upside down and we'll get anoda uodate coz i cant wait.😛
thanx for the pm xx
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Posted: 13 years ago
This was so intense.. can't wait for the next part and make it a FF =)
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Posted: 13 years ago
please update soon! i cant wait for the next part!

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