Arhi FF: Retribution (part 11 updated pg 55)

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dancedanceRR

@dancedanceRR

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Posted: 13 years ago

#321

just read all of your parts on one go! you're a really good writer, you portray both arnav and khushi's emotional turmoil really well! just want to know more about this uday character.

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souryadeep

@Sanaya-hi-Rani

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#322

@pc17 this is the best ff i have ever read on the ipkknd forum and i m going to pm all my 4nds bout it...i m sure its going to win a couple of ff awards ...i read all 10 parts in one go and it was completely amazing...i wudnt have ever got it if u wudnt have pmed me.actually i m a reader of the eyes have it...but u pmed me and i got this such darling gift...luv u so much for this...and pls also update the eyes have it...can i say a thing...its better than the show itself...acc to me..and like u said all of them comment or like...lots of ppl read it thru phn or they are too lazy to comment...i wud like to qoute rabindranath on this...its not the quantity of admirers u have..its the quality that matters.and u shall keep on writing till the last pson quits this ff...luv u and sorry if i have hurt u...the updates were amazing and pls update within tomm

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Sana

@-s.a.n.a-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#323

Loved it!!

Please dont stop your ff here...

Please continue!

And thanks for pm!

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aditi07

@aditi07

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#324

beautifully written👏👏
described the frustration, conflict churning within arnav awesomely...the pain he felt when he thought that some one else had touched her khushi & how it led him into doing which couldn't even dream about ever ! Really feel sad & sorry for khushi...she must hv been broken!! loved the way u described his emotions when the reality dawned on him of what he just did..his repent..his guilt over his actions !! but thankfully he stopped before he could much more damage...although really don't think arnav could hv committed the worst!
Great to see the glimpse of the past, of the situation wherein they got married...would love to read more abt that!! Superb one!...continue soon😊

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zafi

@zafi

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#325

Awesome.👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Loved it. Well that explains a lot.

It was heart breaking though.

Felt really sad for Khushi.

Looking forward to reading more.

Continue soon. Thanks.😃

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rockinggirl5

@rockinggirl5

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#326

I loved it, amazing update. Arnav and his anger!! I can't wait for the next update, please continue soon.

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pc17

@pc17

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#327

Originally posted by: DiehardYMfan
@pc17 this is the best ff i have ever read on the ipkknd forum and i m going to pm all my 4nds bout it...i m sure its going to win a couple of ff awards ...i read all 10 parts in one go and it was completely amazing...i wudnt have ever got it if u wudnt have pmed me.actually i m a reader of the eyes have it...but u pmed me and i got this such darling gift...luv u so much for this...and pls also update the eyes have it...can i say a thing...its better than the show itself...acc to me..and like u said all of them comment or like...lots of ppl read it thru phn or they are too lazy to comment...i wud like to qoute rabindranath on this...its not the quantity of admirers u have..its the quality that matters.and u shall keep on writing till the last pson quits this ff...luv u and sorry if i have hurt u...the updates were amazing and pls update within tomm

Dear you didn't hurt me at all, rather the reverse. Aw you just my day! Thank you 🤗I know I know and I agree with you, I have such awesome readers. It's just that sometimes it is nice to have a little feedback.

xxx

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jazz

@jazmeen

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#328

OMG u updated after like ages and i totally forgot bout the story line lol i mean i rmbred a lil buh totally forgot if it was same

i had to go back and reread if i hav miss anhy part, m jus a lil confused so thats why she left him coz he thought she has an affair wid uday and why did uday called him to tell him he's khushi's bf? was he really khshi's bf at that time?

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SedonaScarlet

@SedonaScarlet

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#329

Just read this FF in one go and I'm COMPLETELY blown away!

I would love to read more!!

Do update soon ! :D And PM me when you do..?

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anumber1

@anumber1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#330

So I just discovered your FF and I love it! Also, can I make a prediction pretty please? Kushi is totally pregnant!!! DUN DUN DUNNN!!!!!! I hope you update soon and not a month later bc that would be super depressing. 😊