Arhi FF: Retribution (part 11 updated pg 55)

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pc17

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Posted: 13 years ago

#291

Originally posted by: indy12
yes i am confused, but like it! hopefully the next one clarifies things?

Thanks! I know it is pretty confusing...as the can of worms opens, another mystery pops up as you dwelve deeper. The problem with this story is I can't reveal everything at once otherwise it will all end up seeming rushed. Hopefully the next update will clarify a bit more but because there are so many layers to the story I can't guarantee all your questions will be answered. 😛 Sorry

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Samiya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#292

That was intense... amazing beyond words... plz plz update soon... I can't wait to read the next part

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Crinklez.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#293

Amazing update.

The end was sad.

Poor Arnav and Khushi, both are really confused and hurt at the moment.

Continue soon.

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irene

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Posted: 13 years ago

#294

i'd been wondering how met in the first place...thanx for clearing it up...waiting for the next part...

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#295

very well written..😊

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JV21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#296

absolutely brilliant update, PC!! dont even think of discontinuing this...

As I mentioned to u earlier, I really like your way of narrating the story going back from past to present and again back... I know this will take a long time to clear a lot of doubts that we have in mind...

As you mentioned the end is sad, I am sad for Arnav that he is still unable to overcome the fact that his wife left him for her lover who assaulted her...even though he loves her and is supporting her by not telling the truth to his family he is still unable to get over the fact that someone was physically close to HIS khushi... yes I m sad for him...

I'm sad for khushi too...she still is unable to comprehend why her husband has decided to get her back...it is still not clear to her and the fact that he forced himself on her...marital rapes are very common in India...

Ur story has shaped up beautifully...

Thanks a lot for the PM !! eagerly awaiting the next update...

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Orion_N

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Posted: 13 years ago

#297

ooo... interesting... but he didn't even see her... so how did they first meet? I'm a little confused... but stilll wonderful update as ever :D

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dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#298

poor khushi being blackmailed in to saying yes then having hope waiting only to be crushed by him not showing up and then he get a phone call and manhandle the wife he never wanted awesome update very emotional loved it thanks for the pm