IPK FF:Broken Mirror-Chapter 10 Pg 109 Upd-16/06

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srilu

@srilu_123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#511

hai

awesome and great

and so painful

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Ann

@ipkkndank

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Posted: 13 years ago

#512

AWWW fab update dear =D

kushi is suffering as well as Arnav and =D everyone are suffering in this story =D

Love the way you have written their inner feelings specially Arnav's guilt. Amazing work dear and pls update the next part soon if can k =D

Waiting eagerly to read it =D

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asumi

@asumi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#513

if the chapter made me held my breath, the note you wrote- "I think it's Arnav that I'm more concerned about because he won't be able to forgive himself. Ever."

made me cry- is it really possible to redeem oneself from such a grave mistake. Even if the person whom you hurt forgives you, can you forgive youself?

how do you write soo beautifully? dont even wanna imagine the turmoil he would go through! and how well you would be putting it. 😊 would want to read it directly!

Khushi- get up fight back and please save him!

brilliant!!

Edited by asumi - 13 years ago

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manjha

@manjha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#514

OMG lovely update (= It was beautifully written on Arnav's point! Loved it!

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Zania

@zaniax

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Posted: 13 years ago

#515

Wonderful updat & really emotional, the way u described arnav's feelings and inner turmoil was beautiful .👏 It's a very griping story , continue soon. wud love to read more

And thanx alot for the pm😊

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ASADsweetZOYA

@ASADsweetZOYA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#516

finally u did that

loved it

thnx 4 the pm

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bikerider

@bikerider

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Posted: 13 years ago

#517

loved it , thanks for the update
waiting for the next one

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@Chocoangel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#518

Yayy... U updated...

It Wuz worthwhile Waitin...

Lovely update.. [:$]

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amulchhetry

@amulchhetry

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#519

Awesome update... after a long wait...hope your exam went well...

Thanks to your FF, I think we will be able to handle what happens in the show!!!

Thanks a loads for the update and the PM.

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Siham

@sihu

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#520

I've been waiting to read ur update...and finally here it is...really brought tears to my eyes...I run short of words when I try to express what emotions I feel when I read ur writing...

Just keep it going, Hiru.